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UknownXL

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Posted at: 6/19/09 06:54 PM

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I just created a concept design for a new character, and I was wondering what everyone thought of it.

http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1245450884


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Posted at: 6/19/09 06:58 PM

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Looks all right, but there's very little to base off. You should have more art or animation to show if you're going to ask for feedback. I can say though that his head is at a bit of an odd angle and his legs are somewhat short. The graphics also look fairly static (*not because they're not animated). Also, what kind of game?

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Posted at: 6/19/09 07:13 PM

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I plan for it to be an adventure.


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Posted at: 6/19/09 08:13 PM

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Its got a good style. I like it! =D


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Posted at: 6/19/09 08:59 PM

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Anybody else?


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Posted at: 6/19/09 09:24 PM

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What's there to separate him from the hordes of generic male anime characters? Plus, I think the legs are short and stubby.

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UknownXL

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Posted at: 6/19/09 09:27 PM

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I have made the legs longer


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Posted at: 6/19/09 11:38 PM

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If you aren't going to animate it, maybe put it in the Art Forum too.

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Posted at: 6/20/09 12:02 PM

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I plan to animate it, i just didnt get to it yet


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Posted at: 6/20/09 12:11 PM

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I like his shirt/robe thing, but his legs & feet are a little odd.

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Posted at: 6/20/09 01:02 PM

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His feet are a bit funny, but I wasnt sure how to make them look.


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Posted at: 6/20/09 01:58 PM

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I like the style, but what sort of angle will the player be looking at him from? The legs and feet look like you're looking down at him from a higher ground, but the top half of his body looks like you're looking at him from his level (except that you can't see his neck). Apart from that its really good.


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Posted at: 6/20/09 03:47 PM

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Really good but maybe a bit generic. Have you animated it to get an idea what that will look like?

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