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Carr77
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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-11 14:11:53 Reply

Hello! This is the first song I've ever made with real instruments, so I need a lot of feedback ;3

  • Lovely Night
    Lovely Night by Carr77

    First time using real instruments :)

    Score
    4.22 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Indie
    Popularity
    26 Views


Check out my flash animations, and games. I've also made some bad music, and art ;)

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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-11 14:46:13 Reply

I hope my technique has improved, even somewhat. I have been experimenting with a lot of things lately.


The time for making a webcomic is now..Introducing...

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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-11 17:03:43 Reply

Hi guys, I would like some reviews on my new game, I've received a lot of reviews about it, but I wanted some detailed reviews from you, thanks!

  • MOON
    MOON by EventHorizon

    Unexplained events are occurring on the moon, will John be able to return home?

    Score
    3.48 / 5.00
    Type
    Game
    Popularity
    50,081 Views
    Rated
    Ages 13+


[PLAY "MOON" A SPACE HORROR GAME][FOLLOW ME][MY GAMES][MY ART]
[I'm flying into space...][Sig by triplenoob]

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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-11 19:34:25 Reply

Worked my ass off on this one, would love some reviews :)

  • .:the art of life:.
    .:the art of life:. by GronmonSE

    art of life

    Score
    0 / 5.00
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    Song
    Genre
    Miscellaneous
    Popularity
    1 Views

DRadDaDanDawg
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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-11 20:49:26 Reply

  • Fighting Mermaids [DRad]
    Fighting Mermaids [DRad] by DRadDaDanDawg

    Mermaids aren't that hard to kill

    Score
    2.91 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Dance
    Popularity
    41 Views

Posted this a couple days ago and only got 40 views and 1 "Review" so I would like to see how I can improve on this

Trueloverofdarkness
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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-12 09:56:30 Reply

Any positive or negative criticism welcome!

Tears Don't Fall sample cover

  • Tears don't fall sample
    Tears don't fall sample by Trueloverofdarkness

    Sample of acoustic cover

    Score
    0 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Miscellaneous
    Popularity
    6 Views

Yoshiii343
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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-12 10:03:24 Reply

I'd like to change my audio request...
I've already finished and uploaded the (probably) completed version of "complextro thing".

  • Complextro thing
    Complextro thing by Yoshiii343

    Completed version (I think).

    Score
    4.62 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    House
    Popularity
    43 Views

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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-13 02:27:50 Reply

Any criticism is appreciated. It's hard to get better when someone says "The visiualizer looks like an anus when your song plays"

I'm requesting only 2 songs here:

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/515372

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/474597

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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-13 08:45:45 Reply

  • Fickle Minds
    Fickle Minds by Sawdust

    Here's a song by my band Chairman Mouse.

    Score
    0 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Indie
    Popularity
    8 Views

Can I please get a review on this? Thanks in advance.

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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-14 11:53:13 Reply

I had this delicious little distraction project called Planet MSPaint, where I drew a planet entirely in these nifty brushes that the new(er) version of MSPaint has. Unfortunately the NG art portal won't allow me to upload it for some weird reason. I will throw a link up for a review request on this one when I can upload it. For now here it is:

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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-14 13:13:34 Reply

If someone would be kind enough to review my song i would apreciate a review something yours as well :)

  • Free like the birds
    Free like the birds by DivoFST

    My first song with vocals

    Score
    4.58 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Miscellaneous
    Popularity
    445 Views

Fans are more than welcome by the way ;D


No mather how good you are sometime, somewhere, somehow...
Someone will blow your mind and make feel a beginner again..

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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-14 21:43:20 Reply

I feel this update deserves to get the bad news out of the way first... a member who has been a member of this club with me ever since this club was recreated back in 2009 by SonOfKirk has fallen off the list. Coop, who has always been a great reviewer and member of the club has fallen off the list. I hope he will someday be able to come back if he ever has some spare time to review content on the lists again. Farewell Coop. :(

As for this week's requests. I got in seven reviews and SkyeWintrest got in one review. The rest of us were inactive for various reasons. Also, from the looks of it, it seems Sectus may fall off the list this week as well.

Enjoy the update.

Member's Update #160
[#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]
01 ) 9722 | 1504 / 3464 | 043.42% || 000 | 00 / 18 | 000.00% | Haggard*
02 ) 7723 | 1181 / 1814 | 065.10% || 045 | 07 / 18 | 038.89% | SCTE3
03 ) 0832 | 0124 / 1117 | 011.10% || 003 | 00 / 18 | 000.00% | Knuckstrike*
04 ) 0247 | 0032 / 0404 | 007.92% || 008 | 01 / 18 | 005.56% | SkyeWintrest
05 ) 0086 | 0014 / 0227 | 006.17% || 000 | 00 / 18 | 000.00% | Sectus***
06 ) 0086 | 0013 / 0144 | 009.03% || 000 | 00 / 18 | 000.00% | Killingyoutwice*
07 ) 0041 | 0007 / 0038 | 018.42% || 000 | 00 / 18 | 000.00% | Seamonkey**

The stars indicate for how long the user has been inactive in this club. "Inactive" means, that user hasn't gained any points by reviewing OR by posting.
*: User has been inactive last week
**: User has been inactive for the last two weeks
***: User has been inactive for the last three weeks

If you are inactive for more than three weeks AND if your completion rate falls below 20%, OR if you are inactive for more than four weeks, you are excluded from the list. You may rejoin this club, but your points will be lost.

Statistics:
*Requests This Week: 18
Total Requests All Time: 3402
Reviews Made This Week: 8
Total Reviews All Time: 8218
Average Per Member: 0
Average Per Request: 0.44
Sigs Forgotten: 1

*New to the List:
Leaving the List: Coop

*All Requests Completed:

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GUIDELINES/THREAD INFO

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Also seeing as this has not been done since the very first update for the club when it was recreated; I feel it most appropriate to begin adding the requests lists back into being all part of one post as it once was. More than enough characters remaining to do so with each member update so here's the update all in one post once more. :)

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14 requests for the week.

Flash Requests (1)

  • MOON
    MOON by EventHorizon

    Unexplained events are occurring on the moon, will John be able to return home?

    Score
    3.52 / 5.00
    Type
    Game
    Popularity
    51,707 Views
    Rated
    Ages 13+

Audio Requests (10)

  • Complextro thing
    Complextro thing by Yoshiii343

    Completed version (I think).

    Score
    4.62 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    House
    Popularity
    60 Views
  • Being Alive (By Beats)
    Being Alive (By Beats) by JJM121

    Gift for NGASS

    Score
    4.08 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Dance
    Popularity
    112 Views
  • As the Dust Clears
    As the Dust Clears by PatrickPollock

    Orchestral loop I've been working on

    Score
    0 / 5.00
    Type
    Loop
    Genre
    Video Game
    Popularity
    88 Views
  • Lovely Night
    Lovely Night by Carr77

    First time using real instruments :)

    Score
    4.36 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Indie
    Popularity
    41 Views
  • .:the art of life:.
    .:the art of life:. by GronmonSE

    art of life

    Score
    2.50 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Miscellaneous
    Popularity
    30 Views
  • Fighting Mermaids [DRad]
    Fighting Mermaids [DRad] by DRadDaDanDawg

    Mermaids aren't that hard to kill

    Score
    3.28 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Dance
    Popularity
    59 Views
  • Tears don't fall sample
    Tears don't fall sample by Trueloverofdarkness

    Sample of acoustic cover

    Score
    0 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Miscellaneous
    Popularity
    30 Views
  • Glare
    Glare by Nova500

    Flyin around the sun

    Score
    3.73 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Techno
    Popularity
    367 Views
  • Fickle Minds
    Fickle Minds by Sawdust

    Here's a song by my band Chairman Mouse.

    Score
    0 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Indie
    Popularity
    35 Views
  • Free like the birds
    Free like the birds by DivoFST

    My first song with vocals

    Score
    4.58 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Miscellaneous
    Popularity
    448 Views

Art Requests (3)

Extra Audio Requests (1)

  • Technical Curse
    Technical Curse by Nova500

    Curses

    Score
    4.34 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Video Game
    Popularity
    513 Views


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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-15 00:57:28 Reply

Hey guys!!

I did a litle skit, I started it, and thought it was funny, so I finished improvising it and then posted it!
Remember when your mom used to pull a splinter out of your hand? Well.... Here's what -I- sounded like. ;)

Enjoy! http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/519147

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houzatosis
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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-15 01:28:57 Reply

I guess I'll give this a try.

  • Dunhuang Blues
    Dunhuang Blues by houzatosis

    trippy hippy bippy sippy

    Score
    4.00 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Hip Hop - Modern
    Popularity
    191 Views

I don't have much to say about this apart from rushing a little bit on this track.

DRadDaDanDawg
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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-18 17:07:55 Reply

New song out, no reviews yet so time to start fishing

  • Public Flow - [drad]
    Public Flow - [drad] by DRadDaDanDawg

    This shit really only took me like 8 days no joke

    Score
    2.00 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Dubstep
    Popularity
    41 Views

Rinileki14
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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-18 19:51:23 Reply

  • Project 24
    Project 24 by Rinileki14

    A short song I wrote. Enjoy

    Score
    4.16 / 5.00
    Type
    Loop
    Genre
    Video Game
    Popularity
    319 Views

My third song of 2012

Coop
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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-20 07:17:17 Reply

At 1/14/13 09:43 PM, SCTE3 wrote: I feel this update deserves to get the bad news out of the way first... a member who has been a member of this club with me ever since this club was recreated back in 2009 by SonOfKirk has fallen off the list. Coop, who has always been a great reviewer and member of the club has fallen off the list. I hope he will someday be able to come back if he ever has some spare time to review content on the lists again. Farewell Coop. :(

Thanks for the memories friends. I have had to call time, as work is now taking up most of my spare time. I'm working for the Ministry of Defence and now it's a lot more serious than any other job I have had before. I will continue to review, but I will cease using the RRC tag at the end of my reviews.

I'm proud to be the first member to amass 10,000 points with this club and I hope you won't miss me too badly.


Will it ever end. Yes, all human endeavour is pointless ~ Bill Bailey
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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-21 13:46:42 Reply

Hello, I have two that need constructive crit.I don't have the stuff to record a proper version so something regarding the style and timbre please

Decky
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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-21 14:16:00 Reply

Had a go at typography, could do with some reviews.
Cheers in advance.

  • Bill
    Bill by Decky

    Thought I'd try my hand at typography. I've always loved Bill Hicks, he truly wanted to make the world a better place and se...

    Score
    4.800000000 / 5.00
    Type
    Illustration
    Popularity
    242 Views
    Rated
    Ages 13+


I said no to drugs but they just wouldn't listen.
Like Page///Art Thread///Latest Art Piece

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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-21 17:01:20 Reply

At 1/21/13 01:46 PM, KanDuDor wrote: Hello, I have two that need constructive crit.I don't have the stuff to record a proper version so something regarding the style and timbre please

You should post links so I can add them to the list for this week's update.


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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-21 20:42:39 Reply

Good evening fine people! (or good morning or good afternoon depending on where you are on this spherical (ish) thing we call earth.

A voice demo of mine was recently used on a Drum and Bass song. A type of music im totally not into, but the track seems to have done well so far.

I ask however for you fine people to give it a listen, all the way through preferably and give it a rating. An honest rating. Dont just downrate because its not your type of music. Be fair please. Also, any and all feedback for the guy that sorted the music would also be pretty cool too!

Cheers folks;

  • Envy
    Envy by ajiman

    Liquid and hard dnb together

    Score
    4.75 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Drum N Bass
    Popularity
    827 Views

NekoMika
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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-21 22:49:02 Reply

We have lost yet another member this week, Sectus. Really hope Seamonky won't fall off this week, that would mean three weeks of losing members.

As far as review requests reviews. I got in the three requests, Knuckstrike got in two requests, and Killingyoutwice got in one request. The rest of the club was inactive. Really hope the club begins seeing better days in the next month or so.

Member's Update # 161
[#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]
01 ) 9722 | 1504 / 3478 | 043.24% || 000 | 00 / 14 | 000.00% | Haggard**
02 ) 7744 | 1184 / 1828 | 064.77% || 021 | 03 / 14 | 021.43% | SCTE3
03 ) 0838 | 0125 / 1131 | 011.05% || 006 | 01 / 14 | 007.14% | Knuckstrike
04 ) 0247 | 0032 / 0418 | 007.66% || 000 | 00 / 14 | 000.00% | SkyeWintrest*
05 ) 0092 | 0014 / 0158 | 008.86% || 006 | 01 / 14 | 007.14% | Killingyoutwice
06 ) 0041 | 0007 / 0052 | 013.46% || 000 | 00 / 14 | 000.00% | Seamonky***

The stars indicate for how long the user has been inactive in this club. "Inactive" means, that user hasn't gained any points by reviewing OR by posting.
*: User has been inactive last week
**: User has been inactive for the last two weeks
***: User has been inactive for the last three weeks

If you are inactive for more than three weeks AND if your completion rate falls below 20%, OR if you are inactive for more than four weeks, you are excluded from the list. You may rejoin this club, but your points will be lost.

Statistics:
*Requests This Week: 14
Total Requests All Time: 3416
Reviews Made This Week: 5
Total Reviews All Time: 8218
Average Per Member: 0
Average Per Request: 0.35
Sigs Forgotten: 0

*New to the List:
Leaving the List: Sectus

*All Requests Completed:

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GUIDELINES/THREAD INFO

Only 6 requests this week.

Audio Requests (5)

  • Pulling Out A Splinter
    Pulling Out A Splinter by Laphin

    Hilarious Character getting a splinter pulled out

    Score
    4.80 / 5.00
    Type
    Voice
    Genre
    Comedy
    Popularity
    240 Views
  • Dunhuang Blues
    Dunhuang Blues by houzatosis

    trippy hippy bippy sippy

    Score
    4.00 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Hip Hop - Modern
    Popularity
    215 Views
  • Public Flow - [drad]
    Public Flow - [drad] by DRadDaDanDawg

    This shit really only took me like 8 days no joke

    Score
    2.15 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Dubstep
    Popularity
    71 Views
  • Project 24
    Project 24 by Rinileki14

    A short song I wrote. Enjoy

    Score
    4.16 / 5.00
    Type
    Loop
    Genre
    Video Game
    Popularity
    331 Views
  • Envy
    Envy by ajiman

    Liquid and hard dnb together

    Score
    4.75 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Drum N Bass
    Popularity
    836 Views

Art Requests (1)

  • Bill
    Bill by Decky

    Thought I'd try my hand at typography. I've always loved Bill Hicks, he truly wanted to make the world a better place and se...

    Score
    4.714285714 / 5.00
    Type
    Other
    Popularity
    315 Views
    Rated
    Ages 13+


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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-21 23:45:02 Reply

At 1/21/13 10:49 PM, SCTE3 wrote: Only 6 requests this week.

Busy as I am at trying to make submissions for two contests before the 5th of February, I shall attempt to review all of these since there are so few.


Stuff.

My AIM piece is found if you clicky the image.

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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-22 03:33:20 Reply

If anyone would like to review my first audio submission, I'd very much appreciate it. Thanks!

  • gRave
    gRave by MysteriousPiF

    Creepy electronic song

    Score
    0 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    House
    Popularity
    1 Views

SoundChris
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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-22 09:40:34 Reply

Hey there,

I postet this track maybe 2 weeks ago but i think you have been to busy to review all of the audios coming in. If you could review this track i would be very thankfu l :D

  • Cafè de Paris
    Cafè de Paris by SoundChris

    A Classical French Style Jazz Piano Tune with Argentinean Accordion

    Score
    4.68 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Jazz
    Popularity
    783 Views

Thanks a lot and all the best!


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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-23 08:37:37 Reply

I really hate to see Coop go, but I can understand his reasons. My free time has been very limited latey as well. But I will try to review at least some requests every now and then. I just have to get it in my new daily schedule... I mean, one review a day wouldn't be that hard to achieve.


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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-25 01:35:33 Reply

Sad to hear Coop is leaving, I've had a few nice reviews from him over the years. In any case, I would still like to place my request.

  • Volatile {Dj-Abbic}
    Volatile {Dj-Abbic} by DjAbbic

    Another Song

    Score
    4.49 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    House
    Popularity
    37 Views


New drum and bass song

I do not swear, smoke or drink alcohol. Oh sh*t! My cigarette just fell in my can of beer!

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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-26 12:07:33 Reply

Hi, I would like as much criticism as I can before I make a noob mistake on my apocalyptic, semi-retro technological house-esque project:

  • Humanity Is Dying DEMO
    Humanity Is Dying DEMO by TheAntiMatter

    Apocalyptic technotic precision.

    Score
    0.00 / 5.00
    Type
    Loop
    Genre
    House
    Popularity
    18 Views

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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-26 14:44:46 Reply

Sorry everyone for the harsh sounds that I used in my old song. I made a new song to make your ears feel like wounded warriors ready to reconcilate after a pointless war.

  • No More Bloody Ears
    No More Bloody Ears by TheAntiMatter

    I made a mistake. I am going to resolve it.

    Score
    0 / 5.00
    Type
    Loop
    Genre
    Ambient
    Popularity
    3 Views

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Response to Review Request Club 2013-01-27 18:12:38 Reply

I would love to join the review request club.