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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-03 19:06:31 Reply

Hello, I am kindly asking for a review of my new House wip.

I'm looking for any advice with mastering and EQing, as well as any ideas on breaks or a better intro. Thanks for the help.

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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-04 11:16:27 Reply

Hey, it's the third episode of Kyle & Bill!

Halfway through the cartoon gets out of sync, I've tried everything to fix it but it won't stop, so ignoring that flaw, here you go:

  • Kyle & Bill - Ep. 3
    Kyle & Bill - Ep. 3 by Ilssm

    Bill gets a visit from good ol' bag o' bones.

    Score
    3.58 / 5.00
    Type
    Movie
    Popularity
    637 Views
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    Everyone


I make stupid animations with MsPaint.

Also Omega Team.

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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-04 13:11:24 Reply

I'm new to newgrounds
and i just made my first song
can u guys tell me what you think

My first song


I make techno music :3
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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-04 18:10:04 Reply

Hey everyone, I got another of these nonsensical and silly games out.

  • Sex Kitten: Mexico
    Sex Kitten: Mexico by YomToxic

    The adventure continues, where Prison Break left off!

    Score
    Under Judgment
    Type
    Game
    Popularity
    285 Views
    Rated
    Adults Only

I'd like some constructive reviews again - like always. Lookin' forward to it!

Now I'm gonna go review other people's stuff.

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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-05 06:36:30 Reply

At 11/3/12 10:42 AM, descom wrote: All right,I see what is for,so here my request,just follows me at this url:http://descom.newgrounds.com/.

Please post a direct link to the submission(s) you want reviewed.


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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-05 06:43:20 Reply

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/510044?updated=1

This song was created before my first submission 'Golden Beach'. I forgot to upload it. Let me know what you think :)

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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-05 06:45:33 Reply

At 11/5/12 06:43 AM, Ditchy wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/510044?updated=1

This song was created before my first submission 'Golden Beach'. I forgot to upload it. Let me know what you think :)

Sorry.

Hopefully better link:

  • Lifeline
    Lifeline by Ditchy

    Bouncy Trance/Dance Track

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    0 / 5.00
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    Song
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    Trance
    Popularity
    5 Views

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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-05 09:43:45 Reply

hey guiz it's that time of year again.. REVIEW MAH PUMPKIN PLEASE!

  • Demented Mr. Ullman Pumpkin
    Demented Mr. Ullman Pumpkin by Chronamut

    mr. ullman is a creepy dapper guy in a flash called poopin beaks, this ws submitted for a contest on newgrounds.com, as the f...

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    4.222222222 / 5.00
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    Other
    Popularity
    418 Views
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    Everyone

but before you do, please make sure you watch the video I made of it showcasing the detail :3

http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?v=10151274332410661

thanks :)

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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-05 09:46:23 Reply

At 11/5/12 09:43 AM, Chronamut wrote: hey guiz it's that time of year again.. REVIEW MAH PUMPKIN PLEASE!
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/chronamut/demented-mr-ull man-pumpkin
but before you do, please make sure you watch the video I made of it showcasing the detail :3

http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?v=10151274332410661

thanks :)

oh unlit and lit with lights on too..

  • Demented Mr. Ullman Pumpkin 2
    Demented Mr. Ullman Pumpkin 2 by Chronamut

    mr. ullman is a creepy dapper guy in a flash called poopin beaks, this ws submitted for a contest on newgrounds.com, as the f...

    Score
    3.714285714 / 5.00
    Type
    Illustration
    Popularity
    375 Views
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    Everyone
  • Demented Mr. Ullman Pumpkin 3
    Demented Mr. Ullman Pumpkin 3 by Chronamut

    mr. ullman is a creepy dapper guy in a flash called poopin beaks, this ws submitted for a contest on newgrounds.com, as the f...

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    4.000000000 / 5.00
    Type
    Illustration
    Popularity
    397 Views
    Rated
    Everyone

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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-05 13:29:59 Reply

Oh also this re-upload.


I make stupid animations with MsPaint.

Also Omega Team.

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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-05 21:27:19 Reply

My second song


I make techno music :3
SoundCloud

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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-06 10:15:02 Reply

  • Priscilla
    Priscilla by HiryuGouki

    Well, I think this turned out to be pretty adorable, considering the shading style I used, which was really simple. As I am s...

    Score
    3.000000000 / 5.00
    Type
    Illustration
    Popularity
    216 Views
    Rated
    Everyone

I honestly don't know what people's problem with this piece is. I poured my heart into this and feel that I deserve a high score. At least a 3.75. Anyway, would anyone care to review this piece? Keep in mind, though...I am rather proud of this one.


SCREW THE SYSTEM!!! Play video games instead.My Official Art Thread! COMMENT ON IT!

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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-06 23:21:58 Reply

Sorry I did not make an update last week. I would have if the internet had not been off for the week. That and it appears at least a little over half the requests got a review or two which is better than no reviews at all.

Coop was inactive for the week. Me, SkyeWintrest, and Sectus were all inactive for a second week in a row, hopefully we all get in at least a review this week. Haggard got the most requests done with three! Killingyoutwice got two done and lastly, Knuckstrike got in one request for the week!

Enjoy the update!

Member's Update #152
[#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]
01 ) 9960 | 1549 / 3340 | 046.38% || 000 | 00 / 7 | 000.00% | Coop*
02 ) 9650 | 1494 / 3345 | 044.66% || 021 | 03 / 7 | 042.86% | Haggard
03 ) 7399 | 1132 / 1695 | 066.78% || 003 | 00 / 7 | 000.00% | SCTE3**
04 ) 0805 | 0121 / 0998 | 012.12% || 006 | 01 / 7 | 014.29% | Knuckstrike
05 ) 0221 | 0029 / 0285 | 010.18% || 000 | 00 / 7 | 000.00% | SkyeWintrest**
06 ) 0074 | 0012 / 0108 | 011.11% || 000 | 00 / 7 | 000.00% | Sectus**
07 ) 0027 | 0004 / 0025 | 016.00% || 012 | 02 / 7 | 028.57% | Killingyoutwice

The stars indicate for how long the user has been inactive in this club. "Inactive" means, that user hasn't gained any points by reviewing OR by posting.
*: User has been inactive last week
**: User has been inactive for the last two weeks
***: User has been inactive for the last three weeks

If you are inactive for more than three weeks AND if your completion rate falls below 20%, OR if you are inactive for more than four weeks, you are excluded from the list. You may rejoin this club, but your points will be lost.

Statistics:
*Requests This Week: 7
Total Requests All Time: 3283
Reviews Made This Week: 6
Total Reviews All Time: 8218
Average Per Member: 0
Average Per Request: 0.85
Sigs Forgotten: 0

*New to the List:
Leaving the List:

*All Requests Completed:

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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-06 23:46:52 Reply

24 requests this week. Nice variety!

Enjoy the update!

Flash Requests (5)
A Goomba's Life - Ep 6 by DemonicDragon93
Harvey Norman by DillonBrannick
Kyle & Bill - Ep. 3 by Ilssm
Sex Kitten: Mexico by YomToxic
L4D 1 - That Other Ending Ilssm

Audio Requests (14)
Higher than the Wall by BiviZ
Chess Moves by Psil0
Lies by Shanath
Darkisha (RMX) by Yoshiii343
Zoltage by DylnMatrix
Stardust by Enveri
Crystal Cave by NemeeanLion
Remote Control wip by SirSirius
song of healing (cover) by predatorX9
"Quench" by gh057official
SnG by lazy-dave
Golden Beach by Ditchy
Lazy Springs by Merpy
Stargenx - SumOfOurHearts by Stargenx

Art Requests (5)
Happy Halloween 2012 by Decky
Demented Mr. Ullman Pumpkin by Chronamut
Demented Mr. Ullman Pumpkin 2 by Chronamut
Demented Mr. Ullman Pumpkin 3 by Chronamut
Priscilla by HiryuGouki

Extra Audio Requests (6)
Zombattobeseigedmycastle by BiviZ
Blind Elephants Dali by BiviZ
Zenovian Waterfall by NemeeanLion
D-M-T by gh057official
Lifeline by Ditchy
World Welcoming by Merpy


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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-07 00:21:27 Reply

Hi, I don't mean to whine but you didn't include my review request on that update list. I posted a request a few days ago for my song "Cheaters and Liars." I'm not sure if I didn't post it correctly but I still haven't gotten a review, so I was just wondering.

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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-07 13:03:18 Reply

At 11/7/12 12:21 AM, RobinDB wrote: Hi, I don't mean to whine but you didn't include my review request on that update list. I posted a request a few days ago for my song "Cheaters and Liars." I'm not sure if I didn't post it correctly but I still haven't gotten a review, so I was just wondering.

Did not add as that is an audio project link and we can't view it unless one of us was being invited to look at it as a collaborator or beta tester.


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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-07 22:38:42 Reply

Hello!
I just posted my new song
and i really want an honest opinion of what you guys think about it
so can you guys click here
(it's a techno song)


I make techno music :3
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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-08 12:32:37 Reply

a month ago i asked a review for two songs of mine, now, a month later there aren't reviews, at the page of my songs:
this may be the cause:

newgrounds is trolling me
Obama is trolling me
you guys are trolling me

But i would like my songs get reviewed
mainly:

  • BK - Galaxy Blaster
    BK - Galaxy Blaster by Aqua8B

    A house song from me to you :)

    Score
    3.63 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    House
    Popularity
    108 Views

and second:

  • BK - Overload
    BK - Overload by Aqua8B

    A song that was in my files a long time

    Score
    4.48 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Dance
    Popularity
    158 Views

i hope this doesnt count to my song, because this is more of a complaint
please do NOT take it too personally!


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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-08 19:56:22 Reply

Might I join you fine people?

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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-08 21:44:21 Reply

At 11/7/12 01:03 PM, SCTE3 wrote:
Did not add as that is an audio project link and we can't view it unless one of us was being invited to look at it as a collaborator or beta tester.

ah. i knew i messed it up somehow... i shall fix it. and repost it.

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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-08 21:46:02 Reply

  • Cheaters and Liars (wip)
    Cheaters and Liars (wip) by RobinDB

    VERY. short wip of a new song.

    Score
    4.37 / 5.00
    Type
    Loop
    Genre
    House
    Popularity
    49 Views

if this doesn't work then i have no idea what im doing.

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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-09 12:37:39 Reply

  • dj-toronto - Neon Trip
    dj-toronto - Neon Trip by dj-toronto

    Goa Trance

    Score
    5.00 / 5.00
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    Song
    Genre
    Trance
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    8 Views

Attempted at Goa.

some good reviews would be nice. :)

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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-10 00:10:23 Reply

Hey RRC people: Some thoughtful feedback on this track would be siickkkck

  • To Darker Places
    To Darker Places by MobiusIII

    An atmospheric Hard Trance track with a twist...

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    4.63 / 5.00
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    Song
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    Trance
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    55 Views

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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-10 16:34:16 Reply

New member. Decided I would branch out and share some of my music with my peer group. I've added six of my works to my page, so feel free to have a listen to any/all that you'd like. Always appreciate feedback. Thank you.

  • Sky Tram City
    Sky Tram City by Ninja-Vanish-Music

    Futuristic, fun, high-energy game music.

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    0 / 5.00
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    Song
    Genre
    Video Game
    Popularity
    2 Views
  • Sea Bubble Cave
    Sea Bubble Cave by Ninja-Vanish-Music

    Calm, peaceful, relaxing, mysterious game music.

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    0 / 5.00
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    Song
    Genre
    Video Game
    Popularity
    2 Views
  • Birdkid Flying!
    Birdkid Flying! by Ninja-Vanish-Music

    Energetic, up-beat, pumping, driving game music.

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    0 / 5.00
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    Song
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    Video Game
    Popularity
    2 Views
  • Birdkid Flying!
    Birdkid Flying! by Ninja-Vanish-Music

    Energetic, up-beat, pumping, driving game music.

    Score
    0 / 5.00
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    Song
    Genre
    Video Game
    Popularity
    2 Views
  • Handbook For The Deceased
    Handbook For The Deceased by Ninja-Vanish-Music

    Orchestral, cinematic, symphonic music.

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    0 / 5.00
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    Song
    Genre
    Classical
    Popularity
    2 Views
  • Ants At Work
    Ants At Work by Ninja-Vanish-Music

    Orchestral, cinematic/game, symphonic music.

    Score
    0 / 5.00
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    Song
    Genre
    Classical
    Popularity
    2 Views

NekoMika
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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-10 18:09:38 Reply

At 11/10/12 04:34 PM, Ninja-Vanish-Music wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/510672
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/510673
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/510675
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/510675
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/510696
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/510697

Only three at a time. Choose the three you want us to review.


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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-10 18:14:49 Reply

At 11/10/12 06:09 PM, SCTE3 wrote:
At 11/10/12 04:34 PM, Ninja-Vanish-Music wrote:
Only three at a time. Choose the three you want us to review.

My apologies. Is there a way I can edit my post?

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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-10 18:48:30 Reply

At 11/10/12 06:14 PM, Ninja-Vanish-Music wrote:
At 11/10/12 06:09 PM, SCTE3 wrote:
At 11/10/12 04:34 PM, Ninja-Vanish-Music wrote:
Only three at a time. Choose the three you want us to review.
My apologies. Is there a way I can edit my post?

No. Just post links to three of the songs.


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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-10 18:55:30 Reply

New member. Decided I would branch out and share some of my music with my peer group. I've added six of my works to my page, so feel free to have a listen to any/all that you'd like. I've included three here. Always appreciate feedback. Thank you.

  • Sky Tram City
    Sky Tram City by Ninja-Vanish-Music

    Futuristic, fun, high-energy game music.

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    0 / 5.00
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    Song
    Genre
    Video Game
    Popularity
    4 Views
  • Sea Bubble Cave
    Sea Bubble Cave by Ninja-Vanish-Music

    Calm, peaceful, relaxing, mysterious game music.

    Score
    0 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Video Game
    Popularity
    4 Views
  • Handbook For The Deceased
    Handbook For The Deceased by Ninja-Vanish-Music

    Orchestral, cinematic, symphonic music.

    Score
    0 / 5.00
    Type
    Song
    Genre
    Classical
    Popularity
    4 Views

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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-10 21:30:32 Reply

Please and thank you. Brutal honesty is a must.

  • DaTCTF
    DaTCTF by TheHeartgrinder

    Dream and consequence.

    Score
    4.17 / 5.00
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    Song
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    Industrial
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    101 Views


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Response to Review Request Club 2012-11-10 21:46:09 Reply

And another.

  • Cause and Affection
    Cause and Affection by TheHeartgrinder

    Short description.

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    4.79 / 5.00
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    Song
    Genre
    Industrial
    Popularity
    167 Views


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