My story: Stranded

[Girly789]

It was a day on the very small island of Ariona, and a girl was sat by the shore and staring at the sky, she had been there for twenty-one years, alone. "If only I knew..... my own name." she said, "It is weird to not know who you are, literally." she whispered. "I guess it's just human to not know your name!" it was true, she didn't know her name.

Just then, a terrible storm accured. The girl got very scared since she had never seen the wwether change, she had never heard what weather was. "Help!" she screamed, hoping for reply. A young prince jumped out of a tree, and asked, "Why are you afraid of a single storm?" he asked, "Storm? Because it's scary...." said the girl, "I am Tony, now, storm, you are scaring this girl, leave at once!" said the young prince, as the storm cleared, "What is your name?" he asked, "The thing is..... I don't know what my name is!" said the girl, "A quest, aye?" asked the prince, as he pulled out his sword. "I will find your name!" he said.

So, they searched everywhere, until they found a music box, labelled 'Oriella' "This is your name? Such a beautiful name for such a beautiful face!" said the prince. "Oriella, I remember! That's my name alright!" she said, the very next day the prince took her home and married her.

The End

[Another-User]

Your story was so bad, I think I just got cancer.

Also, Blog it.

[Lost-Chances]

There was so many things wrong with that story, it's like dragging up a car that has been scrapped and listing all the faults with it. Also, keep your stories onto your blog.

If you're any older than 16, then quit writing now.

[Leidolfr]

At 6/13/09 06:29 AM, J00blix wrote:

At 6/13/09 06:27 AM, Girly789 wrote: Story

I read it all, I swear.

Lmao...and they all lived happily ever after, in their castle in the sky, with pink miniature ponies

[36Holla]

Stories like this aren't allowed on the forums. Keep it to your user page.

http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/7496 03