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Posted at: 5/29/09 11:12 PM
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This is one of the concepts for my new animation coming out. Still questioning color and weapons. I'm open to all suggestions.
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Posted at: 5/29/09 11:13 PM
I do like the orange and black though.
Posted at: 5/29/09 11:19 PM
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I don't know, the suit seems a little bland, but that might be just the thing it needs for a project like that, nothing too detailed. The gun is odd, but not bad, overall I like it, well done!
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Posted at: 5/29/09 11:45 PM
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Do more designs with the orange, instead of just orbs. Me thinks.
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Posted at: 5/30/09 12:05 AM
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take off the shoulder and knee pads they look dont fit the pic and give him a red head band his suit should be more detailed
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Posted at: 5/30/09 05:58 AM
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It looks fine? I wouldn't want to over-complicate something for an animation.
It's lacking on the colour-side; I see what you're doing with the orange orbs, but alone they're not enough to add that bit of oomph to the character. How about adding some simple orange lines to break apart the suit?
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Posted at: 5/30/09 06:26 AM
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yay ! make him climb up walls with this thing... NINJAAA:..
Posted at: 5/30/09 10:59 AM
Thanks for the comments guys. I'll try some new designs but I do want to keep it simple just because it will eventually be an animation. Thanks for the feedback!
Posted at: 5/30/09 11:26 AM
Here's number 2
Posted at: 5/30/09 11:27 AM
And number 3
Posted at: 5/30/09 01:39 PM
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I like number 3 the most so far, good work.
Posted at: 5/30/09 01:43 PM
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All you did for each consecutive design was change the colors...
and there are only 2 colors used in each picture.
Maybe you need to consider a color scheme.
Posted at: 5/30/09 02:34 PM
Number 3 has no orbs on the shoulders or knees and a pattern on his suit
Posted at: 5/30/09 03:09 PM
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I like all of them, but Number 3 is my favorite. I am eager to see what you produce with this character.
Posted at: 5/30/09 04:28 PM
omfg u listened to me good job number 3 is awesome
Posted at: 5/30/09 05:44 PM
Well I asked for suggestions didn't I? haha!
Posted at: 5/30/09 05:49 PM
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i like the suits but the barrels on the guns idk could be better i dont like the bulky plain look but thats just my opinion
Posted at: 5/31/09 02:08 AM
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I think three could be pimp with the orange and black color scheme
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Posted at: 5/31/09 06:27 AM
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At 5/31/09 02:08 AM, Captain-Ben wrote: I think three could be pimp with the orange and black color scheme
^^This. The orange n' black's the best colour scheme so far. Sure, you could have a million-and-one different schemes, but in the end, it depends on the character. I think the orange and black is best, as it is the one you originally had in mind.
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Posted at: 5/31/09 04:54 PM
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At 5/29/09 11:12 PM, Sketchtech wrote: This is one of the concepts for my new animation coming out. Still questioning color and weapons. I'm open to all suggestions.
the orbs could be connected in a line that runs threw each orb adn the weapon could be transformed into a sword
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Posted at: 5/31/09 05:16 PM
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I like it, It reminds me of like a marvel cartoon or something.
Posted at: 5/31/09 05:22 PM
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I don't think you should spend so much time on just the character. The whole game is what matters and you'll have a ton of work to do if you want to get criticism about every little detail.
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Posted at: 5/31/09 05:56 PM
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How about instead of shifting orbs and changing colors, you draw up a completely new suit?
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Posted at: 5/31/09 06:08 PM
At 5/31/09 05:56 PM, hippl5 wrote: How about instead of shifting orbs and changing colors, you draw up a completely new suit?
Woooooooahhhh nooo that sucks the energy out of anything, to start afresh from a late stage.
Fleshlight speaks wisdom; think it's best to consider the other stuff now, and occasionally develop the character as you work through the rest of the Flash. That way you'll get a lot more done ("don't confuse fussiness with efficiency" ;) )
Posted at: 5/31/09 07:45 PM
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wow! looks great
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Posted at: 5/31/09 08:12 PM
At 5/30/09 05:44 PM, Sketchtech wrote: Well I asked for suggestions didn't I? haha!
now u should give number 3 the same color as number 1 and add a beam sword to make it match the orbs and ray gun/orb gun
Posted at: 5/31/09 08:28 PM
This isn't the only thing I've been working on, by the way. I've been story boarding for quite some time now and I'm working on music at this very moment. I'll be updating my news soon for anyone who's curious.
Posted at: 5/31/09 09:18 PM
I'll have a story board up soon.
Posted at: 6/1/09 06:36 PM
Ok so now it'd be great if I could have suggestions for weapons. Thanks guys!
Posted at: 6/3/09 11:40 AM
Here are the three weapons I would like to choose from.
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