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Concept for the new project

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Concept for the new project 2009-05-29 23:12:13


This is one of the concepts for my new animation coming out. Still questioning color and weapons. I'm open to all suggestions.

Concept for the new project


-The Sketchist

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Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-29 23:13:15


I do like the orange and black though.


-The Sketchist

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Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-29 23:19:34


I don't know, the suit seems a little bland, but that might be just the thing it needs for a project like that, nothing too detailed. The gun is odd, but not bad, overall I like it, well done!

Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-29 23:45:43


Do more designs with the orange, instead of just orbs. Me thinks.

Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-30 00:05:07


take off the shoulder and knee pads they look dont fit the pic and give him a red head band his suit should be more detailed


Thousands of years ago there were no numbers to represent two or three. Instead fingers, rocks, sticks or eyes were used to represent numbers.

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Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-30 05:58:54


It looks fine? I wouldn't want to over-complicate something for an animation.

It's lacking on the colour-side; I see what you're doing with the orange orbs, but alone they're not enough to add that bit of oomph to the character. How about adding some simple orange lines to break apart the suit?

(Head = Hair + gogs, defo)


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Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-30 06:26:08


yay !
make him climb up walls with this thing...
NINJAAA:..

Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-30 10:59:16


Thanks for the comments guys. I'll try some new designs but I do want to keep it simple just because it will eventually be an animation. Thanks for the feedback!


-The Sketchist

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Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-30 11:26:39


Here's number 2

Concept for the new project


-The Sketchist

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Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-30 11:27:47


And number 3

Concept for the new project


-The Sketchist

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Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-30 13:39:15


I like number 3 the most so far, good work.

Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-30 14:34:00


Number 3 has no orbs on the shoulders or knees and a pattern on his suit


-The Sketchist

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Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-30 15:09:02


I like all of them, but Number 3 is my favorite. I am eager to see what you produce with this character.

Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-30 16:28:47


omfg u listened to me good job number 3 is awesome


Thousands of years ago there were no numbers to represent two or three. Instead fingers, rocks, sticks or eyes were used to represent numbers.

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Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-30 17:44:51


Well I asked for suggestions didn't I? haha!


-The Sketchist

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Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-30 17:49:15


i like the suits but the barrels on the guns idk could be better i dont like the bulky plain look but thats just my opinion

Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-31 02:08:34


I think three could be pimp with the orange and black color scheme


Look at my art!

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Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-31 06:27:17


At 5/31/09 02:08 AM, Captain-Ben wrote: I think three could be pimp with the orange and black color scheme

^^This. The orange n' black's the best colour scheme so far. Sure, you could have a million-and-one different schemes, but in the end, it depends on the character. I think the orange and black is best, as it is the one you originally had in mind.


No mate, no.

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Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-31 16:54:59


At 5/29/09 11:12 PM, Sketchtech wrote: This is one of the concepts for my new animation coming out. Still questioning color and weapons. I'm open to all suggestions.

the orbs could be connected in a line that runs threw each orb adn the weapon could be transformed into a sword


keep ur friggen eyelids down

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Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-31 17:16:45


I like it, It reminds me of like a marvel cartoon or something.

Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-31 17:22:14


I don't think you should spend so much time on just the character. The whole game is what matters and you'll have a ton of work to do if you want to get criticism about every little detail.


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Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-31 17:56:38


How about instead of shifting orbs and changing colors, you draw up a completely new suit?

Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-31 18:08:36


At 5/31/09 05:56 PM, hippl5 wrote: How about instead of shifting orbs and changing colors, you draw up a completely new suit?

Woooooooahhhh nooo that sucks the energy out of anything, to start afresh from a late stage.

Fleshlight speaks wisdom; think it's best to consider the other stuff now, and occasionally develop the character as you work through the rest of the Flash. That way you'll get a lot more done ("don't confuse fussiness with efficiency" ;) )


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Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-31 19:45:08


wow! looks great


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Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-31 20:12:00


At 5/30/09 05:44 PM, Sketchtech wrote: Well I asked for suggestions didn't I? haha!

now u should give number 3 the same color as number 1 and add a beam sword to make it match the orbs and ray gun/orb gun


Thousands of years ago there were no numbers to represent two or three. Instead fingers, rocks, sticks or eyes were used to represent numbers.

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Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-31 20:28:04


This isn't the only thing I've been working on, by the way. I've been story boarding for quite some time now and I'm working on music at this very moment. I'll be updating my news soon for anyone who's curious.


-The Sketchist

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Response to Concept for the new project 2009-05-31 21:18:28


I'll have a story board up soon.


-The Sketchist

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Response to Concept for the new project 2009-06-01 18:36:58


Ok so now it'd be great if I could have suggestions for weapons. Thanks guys!


-The Sketchist

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Response to Concept for the new project 2009-06-03 11:40:31


Here are the three weapons I would like to choose from.

Concept for the new project


-The Sketchist

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Response to Concept for the new project 2009-06-03 12:36:38


the shield seems a bit too captain america for my taste


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