Forum Topic: How to make this more pirat-ish ?

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Kokojo

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Posted at: 5/19/09 01:42 AM

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No, i am not good at drawing, especially on a laptop pad.

But I am working on a little thing i'd like to make, ''Pirate pick-up lines'' and I need a burly pirate to board a Lady as much time as I got lines. (currently, over 18)

So, this is what I got so far. Any ideas how to make this guy look more like a Pirate ?

How to make this more pirat-ish ?

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Kuro

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Posted at: 5/19/09 01:57 AM

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I'd suggest redrawing it entirely.

At the moment it looks like the strong man from the circus wearing a colonial British navy outfit and a pork pie hat that someone stepped on.

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Posted at: 5/19/09 02:04 AM

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At 5/19/09 01:42 AM, Kokojo wrote: No, i am not good at drawing, especially on a laptop pad.

But I am working on a little thing i'd like to make, ''Pirate pick-up lines'' and I need a burly pirate to board a Lady as much time as I got lines. (currently, over 18)

in that case, remove all his clothes and draw an eyepatch over his crotchal region

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Kokojo

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Posted at: 5/19/09 02:08 AM

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At 5/19/09 01:57 AM, Kuro wrote: I'd suggest redrawing it entirely.

At the moment it looks like the strong man from the circus wearing a colonial British navy outfit and a pork pie hat that someone stepped on.

Hahah, damn your Honesty.

Right, redrawing it. Guess il wait for a few more comments before doing that.

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Posted at: 5/19/09 02:37 AM

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Too well dressed.

He's dressed like a high-ranking Navy officer or something.


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CrowCuervo

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Posted at: 5/19/09 03:41 AM

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Pirates have bad higiene, that's the most important

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Posted at: 5/19/09 04:06 AM

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Id say first of all, he needs some lines under his eyes, to make him look meaner and more adged, less inocent. next id say the jackets to bright, try to make it look more worn out and weathered. other than that, yeah, depends how cartoony ya want it, ad a bird, a patch, a hook hand, more weapons, an old pistol strapped to him, or a cutlass, or, whatever.


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Posted at: 5/19/09 07:21 AM

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At 5/19/09 01:42 AM, Kokojo wrote: No, i am not good at drawing, especially on a laptop pad.

But I am working on a little thing i'd like to make, ''Pirate pick-up lines'' and I need a burly pirate to board a Lady as much time as I got lines. (currently, over 18)

So, this is what I got so far. Any ideas how to make this guy look more like a Pirate ?

His eyes are way too big, which gives it a chibby appearance (not really piratey (that's right piratey, not pirat-ish)).
Also, the jacket looks traced? It's fine by me if you want to make it into an animation, but you will not learn to draw any better if you trace stuff.


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Posted at: 5/19/09 09:12 AM

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At 5/19/09 07:21 AM, J-qb wrote: Also, the jacket looks traced? It's fine by me if you want to make it into an animation, but you will not learn to draw any better if you trace stuff.

I wouldnt have noticed...untill ya said it. I just assume people are honest about their art, so lets see what he says


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K111

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Posted at: 5/19/09 09:37 AM

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make one of his pupils dialated and one not


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Posted at: 5/19/09 11:10 AM

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Needs a tri-quarter hat and a MASSIVE feather in it. He SHOULD also look ugly, with a gold tooth/teeth missing. Perhaps a scar too.


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Kokojo

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Posted at: 5/19/09 11:31 AM

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At 5/19/09 09:12 AM, Leidolfr wrote:
At 5/19/09 07:21 AM, J-qb wrote: Also, the jacket looks traced? It's fine by me if you want to make it into an animation, but you will not learn to draw any better if you trace stuff.
I wouldnt have noticed...untill ya said it. I just assume people are honest about their art, so lets see what he says

Yes, it is traced.

Ah well, thanks for the comment. Il make this guy awfully ugly!

Always interested to discuss about people unable to accept humanity.
Because I find them weak and stupid.


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lowiehimself

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Posted at: 5/19/09 03:29 PM

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Needs less jacket and MOAR hairy chest. That and tattoos and jewels

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Posted at: 5/19/09 05:23 PM

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less Pussy and more PENISH seyz tooters

How to make this more pirat-ish ?

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only a true pirate uses hair ties on his mohawk pubes!


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pirates don't smile.

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