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At 6/2/09 04:05 PM, lillefyr wrote: ive just read trough this intire story... it really made my day, now if you are just gonna stand and watch it die i say fine. but please cant we just say that rambo is killable, mj is a perveted cyborg, the hero is alive and trying to get revenge on his mother AND FUCKING CONTINOU!!!!

now... your turn

what's this!? inspiring words!? CHARGGGEEEE!!!!!!

NOOOOOOOO!!!

At 6/2/09 03:53 PM, idiot-monarch wrote: A story thread with terrible art?!

One day I am going to have sex with you whether you like it or not

i dont want to be charged be dave hes to awesome

Ok guys I'm working on another scene. Can you guys hols it again for me please for a couple hours?

I don't mind new stuff going on just keep it on the ship for a bit.

Thanks

It's up to you mastermalpass to get the thread back on track.

At 6/2/09 04:24 PM, TheDaveAngle wrote: It's up to you mastermalpass to get the thread back on track.

damn, I was about to say that!!

Don't worry guys. I'm once again working on a big plot device for other's to illustrate. Humour or not, it'll hopefully blow the bag further up the road.

At 6/2/09 05:52 PM, mastermalpass wrote: Don't worry guys. I'm once again working on a big plot device for other's to illustrate. Humour or not, it'll hopefully blow the bag further up the road.

Please do.

A whole fucking page wasted already because of stupid bickering and twats who ruined the story.

We were having a fun time drawing the serious side and then you fucking pricks had to ruin it for us, now because you've forcibly added "humour" to it when it wasn't really needed until later on anyway, you've ruined a whole 12 pages worth of decent work.

Instead of trying to be funny, you should focus more on the continuation of the story. Don't get me wrong... humour is great, but don't overkill it by adding stupid twists or random acts of pop culture - It's bad story telling.

Hopefully you'll read this and realise what idiots you're all being, and how unfair you're being to the story.

Now everyone get it to-fucking-gether and start drawing instead of trying to be comedians... Thats what the General forum is for.

Hopefully you'll read this and realise what idiots you're all being, and how unfair you're being to the story.

Now everyone get it to-fucking-gether and start drawing instead of trying to be comedians... Thats what the General forum is for.

you are so right, im sorry T_T
but I just wanted to fix the part of the necrophile :(

Ok here we are. The last of the Candy troops are still fighting on the ship, but the special Candy forces are getting off.

Captain Heat: "Vulture! Where the hell have you been? you're meant to be here hours ago!"

Vulture 16 (pilot): "That was the plan, but this weather isn't making things easy. Just get yourselves and that crate onboard before we hit bingo fuel!"

Captain: "Alright guys you heard'im let's move, we can't waste any more time on this old tub!"

On the helicopter

Lt. Sobet: "Glad to finally get out of here. So what are we doing about Rambo and that other guy?"

Pilot: "Admiral Crenshaw said that there was no use in trying to capture them for questioning, there's a Candy Navy Cruiser on an intercept course with that Ship, we're gonna sink the trawler and hopefully those guys will either go down with the ship, or the storm will finish 'em off"

Lt. Sobet: "How long could that take? They could be off that ship within hours, it takes weeks to cross the pacific"

Pilot: "The Cruiser is only 38.6 KM from here. It was leading an assault on Cargo ships belonging to Somalian Pirates, they've just smashed a huge part of their cocain shipments and other drugs. Romour tells they use some drugs for mind control."

Captain Heat: "So I'm guessing that means the self-destruct drug was prototype chemistry for a new type of interrogation or something"

Pilot: "I don't know that but I wouldn't be supprised if you were right... You get any samples?"

Cpt Heat: "We got a little sample. but most of this crate is filled with the assesor's little companion. We found a dog tag around his neck saying 'Jared', like the kids we used to find on MJ Island."

Pilot: "Seems your work is done here. We're gonna drop you off at the cruiser; CS. Venturess. It'll destroy the trawler as soon as it reaches weapon range. It's labs aren't as equiped as the ones on our carrier, but they'll do fine for containing and observing the drug. Scientists say that if they manage to crack the formula they'll be able to duplicate it, and really start messing around. Might even help us find out just what the Somalian Rebels / Pirates really want with such a drug,"

Lt. Sobet: "Looks like these pirates are a big deal around here then. I guess our next assignment will be more naval work. Ah well if it involves killing ameture soldiers then I'm fine with it."

Pilot: "Yeah, but you're gonna need a rest after all this action. By the way, we're 5 minutes from the cruiser, so don't get too comfy."

Cpt Heat: "You needn't worry about that vulture, we've kinda got used to never being comfy when the guy on the ship took the hardest hits and still stood."

To maintain the flow of the story. This is pretty much the Candy soldier's exit for now. Let's focus on Rambo and our Hero's actions on the Trawler. Since I've pretty much layed out next chapter or two for the Special Candy Forces.

Fuck. All that writing - I forgot the pic.

New Rain drawing techniques. =)

i'm doing the next one ;D

At 6/2/09 09:33 PM, mastermalpass wrote: Fuck. All that writing - I forgot the pic.

New Rain drawing techniques. =)

ur pretty much what was needed here

our heroes find themselves surrounded by Rambo and Cyber MJ...
then, they get owned by those assholes and now they are trapped in a room, again, this shit si getting old, lol.

At 6/2/09 09:59 PM, XxDaRkReDxX wrote: ur pretty much what was needed here

Cheers Red. Much apreciated.

By the way if anyine has any tips for my art then please feel free to do so. =]

At 6/2/09 09:33 PM, mastermalpass wrote: Fuck. All that writing - I forgot the pic.

New Rain drawing techniques. =)

you like Call of Duty 4 don't you?

doing the next one.

while our team shuffles around on the floor in the dark, they are suddenly dazzled by a beam of light, when his vision focuses, he can see MJ preparing a table of vicious-looking instruments, the masked friend appears to be unconcious and isn't moving.

"Looks like your first then, you'll suffer for what you did to my Island...."

hey I'm doing a couple more shots so hold your horses for a bit.

At 6/2/09 09:31 PM, mastermalpass wrote:

*A whole bunch of great stuff.*

Thank you, thank you, thank you for reviving the story! You're just what we needed.

I want to take this opportunity to say that if any retards come and try to add fail attempts of comedy into our story again then just ignore them and don't take their pics into consideration.

Also in honour of mastermalpass for saving our story, Page 15 of this thread will be known as "Page mastermalpass "

Thanks. =]

Also I'll add a scene today when I'm not too busy.

One more little thing... DO NOT call dibs unless your making a fucking masterpiece of a picture. It has to be relevant to the story too.

As MJ leans in to mutilate our hero, the intercom crackles to life.

"WAIT MICHAEL! I wish to see to the face of the man that would dare betray me, first, remove that mask!"

MJ is dissapointed about the interruption, and leans leans in to remove the mask...

WHAT!?

who the hell is this!?

At 6/3/09 09:52 AM, KoLdBLooD wrote: Also in honour of mastermalpass for saving our story, Page 15 of this thread will be known as "Page mastermalpass "

*facepalm*

Quickly, she stands and slashes broadly across MJ, removing his left hand and spilling a great deal of blood.

At 6/3/09 10:22 AM, JoeTheToucan wrote:

At 6/3/09 09:52 AM, KoLdBLooD wrote: Also in honour of mastermalpass for saving our story, Page 15 of this thread will be known as "Page mastermalpass "

*facepalm*

Since your the one who ruined our story by adding fucking Rambo to it, trying to forcibly add humour when it wasn't needed... you have no right to facepalm anything.

She is.....

At 6/3/09 10:51 AM, TheDaveAngle wrote: She is.....

I KNEW IT!!!