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Posted at: 5/1/09 05:14 PM
Sign-Up: 01/01/08
Posts: 437
Is this any good for my first, it's a WIP, oviously, made in, like half an hour, any suggestions to make it any good? http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/010509/6 1977_Luke_fon_fabre_VS.swf
My best, please give it a listen and review, rate, and enjoy. http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/lis ten/236920
Posted at: 5/1/09 06:07 PM
Sign-Up: 03/09/09
Posts: 115
Preety good, fill it in with some color and stuffz!
looks cool, maybe have a wider camera shot at one point, showing full body.
Also add more of a intro,middle and end, right now its just clash boom clash, make it longer ofcourse
good start
mah art stuff click to view a mini animation portfolio v
Posted at: 5/1/09 06:12 PM
At 5/1/09 06:07 PM, KamikazePanda wrote: Preety good, fill it in with some color and stuffz! looks cool, maybe have a wider camera shot at one point, showing full body. Also add more of a intro,middle and end, right now its just clash boom clash, make it longer ofcourse good start
As I said, WIP, thanks! Is this alright for a first? I do frame by frame, becasue when I do motions tweens it just looks...ugly.
Posted at: 5/1/09 07:00 PM
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Posts: 214
At 5/1/09 05:14 PM, halfangelfreak wrote: Is this any good for my first, it's a WIP, oviously, made in, like half an hour, any suggestions to make it any good? http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/010509/6 1977_Luke_fon_fabre_VS.swf
more better than me http://gdfsgdfg.deviantart.com/art/My-fi rst-flash-118552750
the real newgrounds gold
Posted at: 5/1/09 09:50 PM
That animation you did shows good ability and potential, if you were to finish.
Posted at: 5/2/09 05:56 AM
Sign-Up: 04/09/06
Posts: 523
thats mad! polish it!!!
Posted at: 5/2/09 07:17 AM
Sign-Up: 09/29/07
Posts: 467
Ugh, anime.
Though I guess it's good, though the lines are way too inconsistent.
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