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Need a little help 2009-04-25 16:26:01 Reply

Well I made this for my Pico game I'm making with my friend sumidiotdude, but I still think it's missing something. Does it look alright or should I add something else?

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Response to Need a little help 2009-04-25 16:27:02 Reply

the type could use some work, perhaps a bit bigger and a drop shadow to make it more readable


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Response to Need a little help 2009-04-25 16:29:50 Reply

Umm the shading is inconsistent. On pico's hair the shading is on the left, but on his hand and gun its on the right.

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Response to Need a little help 2009-04-25 16:35:48 Reply

The gun should be in front of Pico's face. Also, what big johnny said about the shading.


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Response to Need a little help 2009-04-25 16:38:59 Reply

Thanks I'll fix:

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Response to Need a little help 2009-04-25 16:43:40 Reply

your welcome :P
hope to see the finished soon


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Response to Need a little help 2009-04-25 16:54:31 Reply

the hand doesn't really look like it's around the handle much, when you look at it closely. Kind of looks like it's in front of it or something.

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Response to Need a little help 2009-04-25 17:09:22 Reply

Try asking here.