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what could i do to make this better

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im starting to get into making flash art could someone help me along with it im trying to be a designer at this. heres my art so far

what could i do to make this better


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Response to what could i do to make this better 2009-04-23 23:10:18


All the wind should be blowing in the same direction, and assuming those triangles are mountains, you can drop the blue line around the shadows.

And blending and shading always helps ;)


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Response to what could i do to make this better 2009-04-23 23:15:13


At 4/23/09 11:10 PM, Captain-Ben wrote: All the wind should be blowing in the same direction, and assuming those triangles are mountains, you can drop the blue line around the shadows.

And blending and shading always helps ;)

thanks im still trying to figure out how to blend things together you wouldnt happen to know how would you?


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Response to what could i do to make this better 2009-04-23 23:22:29


are you using photoshop, or more likely MS Paint?

If you're using paint you need to just play with the colors and use various shades next to each other to create your own gradient, or just stick to keeping it blocky.

If it's photoshoppe than you can play with opacity and such, but i don't know much about that.


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Response to what could i do to make this better 2009-04-23 23:23:36


At 4/23/09 11:22 PM, Captain-Ben wrote: are you using photoshop, or more likely MS Paint?

If you're using paint you need to just play with the colors and use various shades next to each other to create your own gradient, or just stick to keeping it blocky.

If it's photoshoppe than you can play with opacity and such, but i don't know much about that.

oh im using macromedia flash 8


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Response to what could i do to make this better 2009-04-23 23:27:32


Well buddy i have absolutely no idea how that program works, sorry


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Response to what could i do to make this better 2009-04-23 23:29:56


At 4/23/09 11:27 PM, Captain-Ben wrote: Well buddy i have absolutely no idea how that program works, sorry

oh ok thanks anyway and good luck with your stickers


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Response to what could i do to make this better 2009-04-23 23:45:34


I feel that the mountains are too sharp and similar to one another. Maybe add some curvature to complement your foreground valley, which I believe needs to be defined by adding more hills

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Response to what could i do to make this better 2009-04-23 23:51:10


At 4/23/09 11:45 PM, Fleshlight wrote: I feel that the mountains are too sharp and similar to one another. Maybe add some curvature to complement your foreground valley, which I believe needs to be defined by adding more hills

you have pimped out his picture to the max it could possibly be pimped out to.


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Response to what could i do to make this better 2009-04-23 23:55:37


At 4/23/09 11:45 PM, Fleshlight wrote: I feel that the mountains are too sharp and similar to one another. Maybe add some curvature to complement your foreground valley, which I believe needs to be defined by adding more hills

lol i feel honored to have been pimped out


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Response to what could i do to make this better 2009-04-23 23:55:56


At 4/23/09 11:45 PM, Fleshlight wrote: I feel that the mountains are too sharp and similar to one another. Maybe add some curvature to complement your foreground valley, which I believe needs to be defined by adding more hills

I see a penis and two boobs.


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Response to what could i do to make this better 2009-04-24 00:10:35


At 4/23/09 11:55 PM, Kajenx wrote:
At 4/23/09 11:45 PM, Fleshlight wrote: I feel that the mountains are too sharp and similar to one another. Maybe add some curvature to complement your foreground valley, which I believe needs to be defined by adding more hills
I see a penis and two boobs.

i think the ground kinda looks like a but


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Response to what could i do to make this better 2009-04-24 00:59:23


At 4/23/09 11:45 PM, Fleshlight wrote: I feel that the mountains are too sharp and similar to one another. Maybe add some curvature to complement your foreground valley, which I believe needs to be defined by adding more hills

the whole cock and shit like that is really getting old.*sigh*


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Response to what could i do to make this better 2009-04-24 01:01:52


At 4/24/09 12:59 AM, 1sparrow wrote: the whole cock and shit like that is really getting old.*sigh*

you mean yours?


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Response to what could i do to make this better 2009-04-24 01:08:32


ok heres my update on the earlier drawing i made. i think its way better

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Response to what could i do to make this better 2009-04-24 01:18:35


your updated one does look a lot better than the original.

i think fleshy really captured the essence of the mountains

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Response to what could i do to make this better 2009-04-24 01:19:41


At 4/24/09 01:18 AM, Captain-Ben wrote: your updated one does look a lot better than the original.

i think fleshy really captured the essence of the mountains

thanks you guys inspired me to do it better

lol i noticed

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Response to what could i do to make this better 2009-04-24 11:57:33


Don't forget that we have this thread for a reason.