At 4/19/09 05:07 PM, Apple-Juice wrote:
thanks guys, nothing's working out for me so far, sorohanro had the closest ones, there just wasn't enough bassy/brassy sounds.
here's a link to my storyboards if that helps
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haha nice storyboard man, i thought it was really funny!
only thing is its kinda short.. and like before you even realize it was karma it ends with the message.. maybe if you make him like do more things to hurt the fly then the bus hits him it would be funnier but the bus hit him way too fast in my opinion.. maybe make a half eaten candy bar in his pocket that the fly tries to get to make the fly constantly bug him so he actaully gets pissed and hurts the fly.. i mean, character development never hurts no matter what the script/storyboard is : P