Flash Animator Wanted For Superhero

[crazyjh]

Hi there im a writer that wants to turn some of my work have done into flash movie.I have written a series for sonic z audio series on voice acting alliance. And i would really love someone to have the time and help me out with it so please help me out with this project.

Here is some of my work called Urban Outcasts for the project

Justice: any ideas?

*Tiger girl and justice are behind a tree they look and find many guards blocking entrances to the lab*

TIGER GIRL: TAKE DOWN THE GUARDS!

*Justice smiles and clicks his fingers and his hand glows*

JUSTICE: NOW YOUR SPEAKING MY LANGUAGE.

*Tiger girl transforms into her tiger form and Justice floats into the air the guards see Justice and start firing at him but Justice is protected by his force field he uses one hand to blast the soldiers as some on top of the lab go flying off the roof and tiger girl roars and rips the other guards to shreds. She jumps up on the roof with justice landing on there feet.

Tiger girl: Now lets go find guardian!

*A cough from behind tiger girl and justice they turn around and see's deathlock laying on a wall relaxed with his gun in his right hand*

Deathlock: Well we meet again outcasts

*Tiger girl growls a bit at deathlock*

Justice: go and find guardian

*Justice walks with no fear and tiger girl is worried*

tiger girl: what your crazy he will kill you!

*he stops and doesn't turn around to tiger girl just focused on stopping deathlock*

Justice: im not worried,go find guardian OK!

*Tiger girl nods her head and jumps off the roof*

Deathlock: this will be quick and painful!

*From his back takes out two shot guns*

Justice: OH IS THAT A JOKE? IM NOT LAUGHING CLOWN DORK!

*Both of justice hands glow blue and his eyes too*

DEATHLOCK: kid you have made my day!

*Deathlock shoots justice in the chest and falls to the ground*

Deathlock: one down two to go!

*He slowly rises up with his magic and smiles*

Deathlock: What the?

*Justice throws his hand and blasts deathlock hard and his mask is ripped he covers his hand on his side of his scared face*

Deathlock: Kid you shouldn't of done that!

*He puts his hand down and shows half of his face burned*

Justice: oh my god!

*he takes of the mask and shows deahlocks face all burned and scared*

Deathlock: hello, have you seen my daughter!?

*He throws a grenade at Justice it explodes in front of Justices face and hits him hard and hits the wall and can't move his face is covered in blood.Deathlock walked up to Justice blooded body*

Deathlock: NOW YOU KNOW HOW IT FEELS!

*Deathlock reloads his shotgun*

deathlock: daddy's coming angel cakes!

[ardizt]

I dont mean to be mean, but is just horrible. You gotta do this with thought

[crazyjh]

What do you mean?

[crazyjh]

Im sorry about my grammer its a program i use called Celtx and there is more then that its just a good scene dude so im really sorry

[ardizt]

It's not that, it's just that this is what has already been seen. There are dozens of animations with this kind of plot. In other words, it's not interesting.

Writing a script is propably one of the hardest phases, that is why it should be written with care.

[wynand]

Heya matey, i think you need more practice writing scripts, grammer isn't important, but the script needs to be intresting, new, and people need to like it. This is alright, but what you are doing is writing a fanscript to somthing like xmen... people don't want the same things over and over.. god i swear if i see one more homicide tv show i'm going to swear a vendetta lol.

I think writing is a lot like drawing... don't start on the nose and draw the detail... draw a ruff un concentrated shape for the head and then a ruff shape for the nose the eyes and the mouth so you get the basic shape of he face, proportion and the expression down before you start on drawing the detail.
Bacially i'm saying figure out the whole of the story, so very ruff, just an idea, then build vaugly on pieces of it so you have a good grounding to build your details on.
Practice makes perfect and if you would like to make it your job... focus on the english language read a shitload of books and if you can find a couse at uni, drop out of skool and head there. will be the making of a great author =) goodluck matey

[crazyjh]

Ok thanks so much i was worried that there were going to be nasty comments but i totaly understand but i would like some help with this so i know how its suppose to be done can anyone help me out here?

[wynand]

could always animate it yourself =D that way you get it exactly how you want it =) how bout instead of animating it you make ap a comic? heaps easier and you can practice ur drawings and layout and stuff that way =)

[crazyjh]

Ok but what is a ap comic? and i can't really draw man i just write the charcters and the stories and the origns to the charcters thats it also i am try so hard to find a artist but no one wants to help

[wynand]

yeah unless ur spielburg or have a fair bit of cash your not going to find anyone. Animators and artists have their own stories they'd like to work on and create. So unless ur willing to buy a proffesional ur going to find it pretty hard. but i did see the story writers collab which is what you want, but there is already a massive list of stories posted, so yours is going to havto stand out =) goodluck and have fun.

Everyone can draw, you just have to practice, and if you wanted to write comics it would really help you out, i wrote few tutorials bout how to draw on my old blog here. But it takes time effort and alot of pencils lol. you'll start being comfortable with drawing after about 6 months =)