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Looking for some anatomy criticism for this; going for a pirate theme to go with the NG Treasure Hunt.

fixed the treasure chest perspective, the correct lines are on the lid

Here is a WIP of the centerpiece of my poster..

At 4/22/09 07:14 PM, TurkeyOnAStick wrote: Looking for some anatomy criticism for this; going for a pirate theme to go with the NG Treasure Hunt.

fixed the treasure chest perspective, the correct lines are on the lid

Well.. The boob closest to us is sligthly smaller than the one further away.. But other than that I like it :D

At 4/22/09 07:15 PM, Lundsfryd wrote: Here is a WIP of the centerpiece of my poster..

Just remember, "Image must be SAFE FOR WORK ( no totally exposed...things.. )"

At 4/22/09 07:22 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:

At 4/22/09 07:15 PM, Lundsfryd wrote: Here is a WIP of the centerpiece of my poster..

Just remember, "Image must be SAFE FOR WORK ( no totally exposed...things.. )"

Yeah.. I know, the final piece will have the nipples covered up by some stars.. It just felt wrong not to include them :P

At 4/22/09 07:14 PM, TurkeyOnAStick wrote: Looking for some anatomy criticism for this; going for a pirate theme to go with the NG Treasure Hunt.

fixed the treasure chest perspective, the correct lines are on the lid

I understand the perspective, but the bent leg on the chest looks longer then the one on the ground.

At 4/22/09 07:15 PM, Lundsfryd wrote: Here is a WIP of the centerpiece of my poster..

I'd make those feet bigger..

also this :

At 4/3/09 09:07 PM, poxpower wrote: - Image must be SAFE FOR WORK ( no totally exposed...things.. )

Jagon.. haha totally rad.
Though she has the biggest ass IN THE UNIVERSE :D
I love how you nailed the face though. That's HARD to do. Kudos.

At 4/22/09 07:14 PM, TurkeyOnAStick wrote: Looking for some anatomy criticism for this; going for a pirate theme to go with the NG Treasure Hunt.

fixed the treasure chest perspective, the correct lines are on the lid

That looks pretty solid.

At 4/21/09 09:29 PM, jagondudo wrote:

At 4/21/09 09:08 PM, sucho wrote:

higher res perhaps

Amazing!! i like so much your work Jagon.

At 4/23/09 12:14 AM, poxpower wrote: At 4/22/09 07:16 PM, Lundsfryd wrote: stuff

Cheers guys

At 4/22/09 07:26 PM, Vortex00 wrote: bent leg looks longer

Aha, good catch.

This thread gives me boners.

crits?

At 4/23/09 07:05 PM, Vortex00 wrote: crits?

Looks great. Cant wait to see it finished...

At 4/23/09 07:05 PM, Vortex00 wrote: crits?

so far so good, crazy messy lines is that how you normally sketch things up or just the style you're going for this one?

At 4/23/09 11:24 PM, jagondudo wrote:

At 4/23/09 07:05 PM, Vortex00 wrote: crits?

so far so good, crazy messy lines is that how you normally sketch things up or just the style you're going for this one?

Yeah that's how it normally starts when I have no idea for a pose or what I'm going to do. So I just play around until I get something. Too lazy to erase every spec >_<. But that's because I normally change this opacity to light and go over it. Then delete it.

update.

looks totally different lol?

At 4/24/09 01:25 AM, Vortex00 wrote: update.

looks totally different lol?

Why hello pink castle crasher

Wow. These are all fucking awesome. Can't wait to see the finishing results.

too much going on?

At 4/24/09 10:41 PM, Vortex00 wrote: too much going on?

I can't read the little pink text too well.
Also she's kinda chunkiss haha.

But it looks pretty kewl.

Thanks I see what i can do about that.

..what's chunkiss?

At 4/24/09 11:00 PM, Vortex00 wrote: Thanks I see what i can do about that.

..what's chunkiss?

chunkish

haha

At 4/24/09 11:18 PM, poxpower wrote:

At 4/24/09 11:00 PM, Vortex00 wrote: Thanks I see what i can do about that.

..what's chunkiss?

chunkish

haha

Chunkish is good.

this is my first time working with a canvas thats more than 1000 pixels wide and in height as well....as soon as i zoomed out i could hardly see it....and i made the image smaller.....and i see so much problems with it i am starting to lose my insperation....about an hour and a half of work so far

this sucks....maybe i should use a reference for this

At 4/25/09 04:50 PM, SmilingIdiot wrote: this is my first time working with a canvas thats more than 1000 pixels wide and in height as well....as soon as i zoomed out i could hardly see it....and i made the image smaller.....and i see so much problems with it i am starting to lose my insperation....about an hour and a half of work so far

this sucks....maybe i should use a reference for this

Yeah you should probably start over cause this is freaking me out.
It's like 20 clowns fused into one frightening entity.

Use a reference :D

At 4/24/09 10:41 PM, Vortex00 wrote: too much going on?

O_O you are ORIGINAL AND AWESOME! do not change a thing! WOW

At 4/25/09 05:05 PM, megashell wrote:

At 4/24/09 10:41 PM, Vortex00 wrote: too much going on?

O_O you are ORIGINAL AND AWESOME! do not change a thing! WOW

Thanks, this is typically my cup of tea. I'll probably do something with the text though, just haven't worked anything out yet. And also fix a few shading issues I recently noticed.

At 4/25/09 04:57 PM, poxpower wrote:

At 4/25/09 04:50 PM, SmilingIdiot wrote:

this sucks....maybe i should use a reference for this

Yeah you should probably start over cause this is freaking me out.
It's like 20 clowns fused into one frightening entity.

Use a reference :D

well i signed off when i posted that...so i didnt recieve your "constructive criticism"...lol...but yeah i couldnt look at it either so i deleted it....and started out fresh....this time i put it at 700x500 and drew it out....then i put it back to 5x7 inches and did the line art

At 4/25/09 09:37 PM, SmilingIdiot wrote:

At 4/25/09 04:57 PM, poxpower wrote:

well i signed off when i posted that...so i didnt recieve your "constructive criticism"...lol...but yeah i couldnt look at it either so i deleted it....and started out fresh....this time i put it at 700x500 and drew it out....then i put it back to 5x7 inches and did the line art

ah yes, much better :D
I don't know what's going on down in the corner though. I suggest either making it only a skull or replacing it with something else.

At 4/25/09 04:50 PM, SmilingIdiot wrote: this is my first time working with a canvas thats more than 1000 pixels wide and in height as well....as soon as i zoomed out i could hardly see it....and i made the image smaller.....and i see so much problems with it i am starting to lose my insperation....about an hour and a half of work so far

this sucks....maybe i should use a reference for this

You have a lot of skill, I am really digging the color, what's really creepy about it is the face... eww, the face, really resembles a tranny, I know that
ALL FEMALES AT NEWGROUNDS ARE MOSTLY MALES but you should probably remake the whole sketch, the left arm also looks a bit weird, but it's not like it completely sucks.

At 4/25/09 09:37 PM, SmilingIdiot wrote:

:and started out fresh....this time i put it at 700x500 and drew it out....then i put it back to 5x7 inches and did the line art

from the waist up i like it its proportinal and everything looks to be in the right place, even the face is nice and uniform definately better than the "china" lumpy assed look-a-like thing you drew before hehe....where i have problems is the waist down; the length from hip to knee seems ok but you lost all form and shape with the top leg resting on the other leg [fold your legs take a picture , use a mirror or reference and see how the folds and shapes form]...also knee to foot length is extremely short making her look really stumpy.

anyway its an really good and you have something to good to work with. so just fix up those measurements

At 4/26/09 12:32 AM, jagondudo wrote:

At 4/25/09 09:37 PM, SmilingIdiot wrote:

from the waist up i like it its proportinal and everything looks to be in the right place, even the face is nice and uniform definately better than the "china" lumpy assed look-a-like thing you drew before hehe....where i have problems is the waist down; the length from hip to knee seems ok but you lost all form and shape with the top leg resting on the other leg [fold your legs take a picture , use a mirror or reference and see how the folds and shapes form]...also knee to foot length is extremely short making her look really stumpy.

anyway its an really good and you have something to good to work with. so just fix up those measurements

ha i knew that the legs were messed up...when i looked at it again it looked like there was no muscle or bone just a flabby thing...i did try to fix it up...i tried to sit like that.....i crushed my nuts and i think one popped....now i only have 2 =(

and thanks for pointing those out jagondudo

pox...lol thanks...it was gonna be a pico reference but i forgot the asain girls(rensomething?) name so im just gonna make a skull and do a pico thing in the bg....dont know what yet....but ill figure it out

and lesson learned...i dont have what it takes to draw on a canvas that big