First Animation.

[MrSaint]

So me and my mate made our first Flash...which didn't get a lot of feedback at all.( If you can call 4 Reviews feedback)

I don't whats the reason of this. Maybe the name or the animation. I'll post the link, and can you please tell me what's the problem with the movie?

Bros' problems (DC), by C00L007 Type: Movie Rating: Ages 17+

[WolfAkela]

The forum is not a place to advertise your Flash. Post them in your blog.

[MrSaint]

At 3/22/09 09:55 AM, WolfAkela wrote: The forum is not a place to advertise your Flash. Post them in your blog.

Oh thanks. Didn't know.

[ParanoidDavid]

At 3/22/09 09:55 AM, WolfAkela wrote: The forum is not a place to advertise your Flash. Post them in your blog.

don't mean he cant.
you do know his asking for criticism?

[Yambanshee]

i think crit is ok on this forum. I really liked it, and grats for a 3+ on your first flash.

point 1: i would suggest making your own mario sprites. Ive never been a fan of mega pixles, you lose track of whats where.
point 2: Music, you need more. If you had music play through the whole thing you got have gotten a 4 in my opinon! Also, by music, i dont mean one thing playing the whole way through, i mean for example: fight scene some epic high paced music. for the explosion bit, a sort of sound track that makes someone feel stupid. Its a tough and tedious job, but worth it!

overall, had quite funny bits, and was extreamly well done, just needs some trimming off the edges

[MrSaint]

Thanks for watching! I'll get rid of those minuses in my next Flash.

[Yambanshee]

also remember this: the preloader is the first thing anyone sees. it has to be good. although the newgrounds one is awesome. its just used to much, and usually by people with lack of skill (i know some people dont watch movies when they see one, because they know its gonna be bad). If you need help, i could help you make a preloader