At 3/27/09 11:40 AM, RubberTrucky wrote:
* Too much 'fuck'
* too little inspirational words
* seemed too much mise en scene
* wielding a knife wasn't sexy at all...
Biggest tip: Let the letter B be more spontaneous and don't rely on cussing humour.
Thank you for you constructive critic.
Is ''constructive'' a word ???
I think you are right about pretty much everything,
But for the Knife,
But...
Let me tell you that where I come from a girl wielding a Sharp Knife is found most sexy by the mens...
Mens here alson like to fuck their goats while they are drunk so maybe it's not a great example...