OK so. After a few months of this thread being dormant, I decided to bump it back up to page one because I would like to a few things and just link to this thread and its challenge.
Also I would just like to point out, THIS THREAD IS NOT ABOUT ABUSIVE REVIEWS! If you would like to comment on abusive reviews please read Malachy's Review answers 1.0 AND THEN Review answers 2.0.
It is true that the state of reviews are declining. I'm seeing more and more one lined reviews, some 2 worded reviews and some reviewers who just vote 0 and leave some crappy sentence like "Just plain rubbish"
So, I've decided to up the anti. Here I will give another detailed explanation of how a good review can be organised. I do hope this helps multiple people and I hope they take on board this advice. You can also refer to The-Great-One's newspost because that gives a lot of good points on what you can make your review about.
OK so, we will start with explaining what will go in the section and then I will give some examples:
(In here you will give points on what good things you saw/heard throughout the flash, doesn't have to be a paragraph just a quick couple of lines.)
~ The storyline was amazing
~ The scenes were smooth
~ The characters and dialogue were terrific!
Then you could explain the bad points of the flash:
(In here you should explain the bad points of the flash and what you disliked about it overall. Remember: If the flash doesn't load It may just be your internet connection, so give the artist a quick PM about it!)
~ The flash was a bit choppy
~ I found the voices quite hard to hear
~ Too repetitive
Then comes the improvements working along side the Bad points:
(A bit self explanatory. This works with the Bad Points section, any bad points you find you explain them here. So I will go off the bad points above)
~ Maybe you could have a go at learning a bit more of flash and learn how to make it a little less choppy
~ I think you should invest in a new microphone because I think that will help in the qualities of the voices
~ Maybe add some more scenes or a twist of some sort or maybe add more moves to make it less repetitive
(In this section you will comment on the flash as a whole adding details about how it would do, if people would like it and your views on it)
~ I really liked this flash, I thought it was excellent!
~ It was very helpful and I think that it will help people like myself and even other users who have only just started
The finally you could bring the review to a close by doing the overall, this part is only optional because people could think that this part was useless but I will include it anyway.
(Just include what you gave the flash and what you voted, again this is optional because the user can just see what you put for your review score and he doesn't really want to know what you voted. I thought it just brings the review to a close.)
~ I will give you 9/10 stars and I'm voting 5!
Now you could put some support for the artist by saying something nice to them.
Well done!/ Keep it up!
Then I just put my user name
So, that brings my lesson to a close. I hope that you will have learned a lot from this and I'm glad I could be of service, I'd just like to thank you for reading this!
P.S Mods, I'm sorry for repeating myself but I didn't want to bump this for no at all reason and the more my point is said the more it goes into peoples minds!