Caricature on society

[NewBrian]

So, I made this when I was bored and a little pissed off of society.
Tell me if you like it or post your own... But in your review please concentrate to the topic/declaration in first place.
the art is secondary (I'm not very good at drawing...)
also if you have any questions, don't fear to post them.
Oh yeah, this is just the croped image
I uploaded the whole pic here!

thank you for your time...

[BurstFilmsCrew]

I don't get it. You suck at drawing, too.
post this somewhere else, n00b.

[jenno1]

At 3/14/09 08:52 AM, BurstFilmsCrew wrote: I don't get it. You suck at drawing, too.
post this somewhere else, n00b.

okaay...
Maybe he could improove his drawing, but he allready said this himself.
Also I don't think you are in the position to say that... look at your sig...

[BurstFilmsCrew]

At 3/14/09 08:55 AM, jenno1 wrote:

At 3/14/09 08:52 AM, BurstFilmsCrew wrote: I don't get it. You suck at drawing, too.
post this somewhere else, n00b.

okaay...
Maybe he could improove his drawing, but he allready said this himself.
Also I don't think you are in the position to say that... look at your sig...

oh yeah?! look at your shit!
you are gay. Also your film wordjumper sucked ass.

[jenno1]

oh yeah?! look at your shit!
you are gay. Also your film wordjumper sucked ass.

at least I don't steal every flash I ever made....

[NewBrian]

At 3/14/09 08:58 AM, jenno1 wrote:

oh yeah?! look at your shit!
you are gay. Also your film wordjumper sucked ass.

at least I don't steal every flash I ever made....

GUYS! This is not the insult-someone-randomly-thread!
If you want to review my drawing, you can stay here but if you just want to flame eachother, you can do this with PMs.

What do I have done wrong?

[J-qb]

I think it lacks coherence; It doesn't really tell a story. If it was meant as a page full of unrelated drawings and stuff, there's to little of it.
Try just taking 1 object (e.g. the skeleton with smoke/speach bubbles) and make a drawing of that, but put some effort in really finishing it.

Now I get the feeling you just did some doodles without really looking at the whole picture, or without critically examining your own work.

Not totally awful, but it doesn't really make sense to me

[NewBrian]

At 3/14/09 09:09 AM, J-qb wrote: I think it lacks coherence; It doesn't really tell a story. If it was meant as a page full of unrelated drawings and stuff, there's to little of it.
Try just taking 1 object (e.g. the skeleton with smoke/speach bubbles) and make a drawing of that, but put some effort in really finishing it.

Now I get the feeling you just did some doodles without really looking at the whole picture, or without critically examining your own work.

Not totally awful, but it doesn't really make sense to me

Well it should show how depended we got of money, marks, ads.
and the "rich" people controling and censoring us and takern us every individuallity.
also it shows how they try to make us all look and act the same like faceless-slaves...

try to take a closer look on everything...

[J-qb]

At 3/14/09 09:16 AM, NewBrian wrote:

At 3/14/09 09:09 AM, J-qb wrote: I think it lacks coherence; It doesn't really tell a story. If it was meant as a page full of unrelated drawings and stuff, there's to little of it.
Try just taking 1 object (e.g. the skeleton with smoke/speach bubbles) and make a drawing of that, but put some effort in really finishing it.

Now I get the feeling you just did some doodles without really looking at the whole picture, or without critically examining your own work.

Not totally awful, but it doesn't really make sense to me

Well it should show how depended we got of money, marks, ads.
and the "rich" people controling and censoring us and takern us every individuallity.
also it shows how they try to make us all look and act the same like faceless-slaves...

try to take a closer look on everything...

See, You've got a good idea, the point is you're not able to get it across through this drawing. With your explanation I could see some aspects in that drawing, but as a stand-along picture, it is not 'outspoken' enough. I wouldn't be able to tell you how to do that exactly, but have a go at it.

[NewBrian]

See, You've got a good idea, the point is you're not able to get it across through this drawing. With your explanation I could see some aspects in that drawing, but as a stand-along picture, it is not 'outspoken' enough. I wouldn't be able to tell you how to do that exactly, but have a go at it.

okay... thx for your review anyway :D

[Fleshlight]

It really doesn't deserve a thread of its own, but you can post it in the Doodlage or Lined Paper Sketches thread.

and don't mind that BFC guy, he's just a little too hormonal and wants to start an e-fight