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Carrot Leaf Troubles 2009-03-11 19:44:10 Reply

So I was drawing this cartoon carrot, and things were going pretty well, but when it came to drawing the leaves on top, I got stuck. I've been fiddling around with it for quite awhile now, any ideas?

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Response to Carrot Leaf Troubles 2009-03-11 19:45:08 Reply

Maybe try looking at some actual carrots and taking your ideas from there. It should look slightly celery-like, but alot shorter.


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Response to Carrot Leaf Troubles 2009-03-11 20:17:00 Reply

At 3/11/09 07:45 PM, Wivernryder wrote: Maybe try looking at some actual carrots and taking your ideas from there.

Or just borrow from the classics.

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Response to Carrot Leaf Troubles 2009-03-11 20:39:49 Reply

At 3/11/09 08:17 PM, Raguel wrote:
At 3/11/09 07:45 PM, Wivernryder wrote: Maybe try looking at some actual carrots and taking your ideas from there.
Or just borrow from the classics.

I tried it out. Its not quite what I was going for but it looks ok. Any other ideas?

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Response to Carrot Leaf Troubles 2009-03-11 20:50:07 Reply

Well, your carrot is too jagged at the top for that look to work. I'd say round out those corners at the top of your carrot. Maybe even add a few lines across for depth.

Something like this. Note the lines in red are what I added.

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Response to Carrot Leaf Troubles 2009-03-11 21:38:44 Reply

I think the leaves you drew look perfectly fine, you're going for a cartoon look not photo-realistic, so it doesn't matter if they look exactly like carrot leaves, what's important is that we understand that it's carrot leaves


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Response to Carrot Leaf Troubles 2009-03-11 22:14:51 Reply

At 3/11/09 09:38 PM, Captain-Ben wrote: I think the leaves you drew look perfectly fine, you're going for a cartoon look not photo-realistic, so it doesn't matter if they look exactly like carrot leaves, what's important is that we understand that it's carrot leaves

Thats good advice. Thank you. Anyway I did try rounding off the corners, but then it looked like the face didn't match, so yeah, I'll think I'll leaf* it at that.

*Awful puns are fun.

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Response to Carrot Leaf Troubles 2009-03-11 22:18:17 Reply

At 3/11/09 10:14 PM, LaughingTomato wrote: Thats good advice. Thank you. Anyway I did try rounding off the corners, but then it looked like the face didn't match, so yeah, I'll think I'll leaf* it at that.
*Awful puns are fun.

Hardy hardy hardy. Bad puns are still bad puns.

But they're still funny too

Are you gonna add the horizontal texturing lines though? What do you think of those?

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Response to Carrot Leaf Troubles 2009-03-12 04:17:40 Reply

Hmm, I see your problem here... tried some things on it myself, but couldn't really make anything work. Sorry, you'r on your own here.

btw. I'd like to see what you decide to make of it.


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Response to Carrot Leaf Troubles 2009-03-12 06:28:53 Reply

i think the leaf needs to be longer


keep ur friggen eyelids down

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Response to Carrot Leaf Troubles 2009-03-12 06:40:24 Reply

You can try something like this;
Keep it simpler, since the carrot itself is pretty simple, and roughly drawn, which makes it more "cartoony"
| Excuse the MS Paint, just used it since it's way faster.

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Response to Carrot Leaf Troubles 2009-03-12 07:02:15 Reply

Just google cartoon carrot and get some ideas from there ^^

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Response to Carrot Leaf Troubles 2009-03-12 16:36:45 Reply

bigger stems and ... bush thing. enough for the stems to bend

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