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Monkeyshizznick
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Looking for a "short" animation? Mar. 7th, 2009 @ 03:13 AM Reply

I have been practicing drawing a lot, but still pretty much suck.

So here is the new fun "short" animation I wanted to make, but I don't care.. Go ahead and take it if you think it is funny.

"Newgrounds Commercial" (15-20 seconds long, maybe less):
*There is a crazy hobo sitting against a wall with posters of NG characters everywhere (Angry Faic, Bitey, Tankme(a)n. Posters are torn and old.)*

Crazy hobo: Hrm.. Da da... Hrm... Haha.. Oh! Bitey, base r us.. Hrm, hrm, hrm.. Blam.. Must blam.. Burgock!

*Note: the ... is just sensless ramblings in-between other senseless ramblings*

*Next camera view*
*Two guys walking down the side-walk with the bum coming into view in front, still sitting.*
*1 guy to the right in a long, big, white hoody. The hood is up. 1 guy to the left In a t-shirt, visible boxers*

*Next camera view*
*Side view with hoody closest*
*The bum, bum-rushes the two guys from the front, grabbing the one on the right with the hoody by the arm.*

Crazy hobo: BLAH BLU BLHA HAHA! HAve you my base? Have is you! Have is you?

*Next camera view*
*View looking at the back of the hobo and the front of the two guys**Hoody on the left now*
*Quick zoom to t-shirt guy on the right*
T-shirt guy: Don't worry, he's just crazy.

*Same zoom, speed left to hoody guy with disgusted look on his face*

*Next camera view*
*The RIGHT-ARM of the hooded man, palm facing in.*
*Hooded man pulls an assassins creed and a small blade pops out from his sleeves, camera catches the last inch or so of the blade*
*Camera follows the arm backwards (elbow bends) and up as he prepares to strike*
*As he is about to thrust forward, another arm from behind him grabs him*

*Next camera view*
*A new man walking by, face at FIRST in the shade, head looking down.*

New man: Wait a minute!

*Face now in the light, head looking up*

New man: He's not crazy! He's just the average newgrounds member!

*Yelling whilst pointing a finger towards the off-screen hobo*

*Next scene*
*Newgrounds logo drops onto a black background and breaks it as if it were hitting concrete.*

Announcer: Newgrounds.com!

1-2 second pause

Announcer: It'll f**k you up!

*Bleep out fuck*

5-6 seconds later

*Camera view*
*Extreme close-up on unclean eye-ball of crazy hobo*
Crazy hobo *whispers*: Cooooooock joooooooke.

This would be a lot damn better if I could just do the flash myself... Idk..

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Response to Looking for a "short" animation? Mar. 7th, 2009 @ 05:51 AM Reply

At 3/7/09 03:13 AM, Monkeyshizznick wrote: I have been practicing drawing a lot, but still pretty much suck.

So here is the new fun "short" animation I wanted to make, but I don't care.. Go ahead and take it if you think it is funny.

Why don't you put this in the flash forum and see if they can help you! I'm sure they will even give you tips on how to make the animation yourself!

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Response to Looking for a "short" animation? Mar. 7th, 2009 @ 07:42 AM Reply

At 3/7/09 05:51 AM, Lizzardis wrote:
Why don't you put this in the flash forum and see if they can help you! I'm sure they will even give you tips on how to make the animation yourself!

i second this idea.


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Response to Looking for a "short" animation? Mar. 7th, 2009 @ 07:58 AM Reply

You could make it live-action, like an actual commercial if you're not very experienced in flash. It would be even better than if done with flash.


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