Rate my Lip Sync ^_^

[MonkeyShrub]

Hey guys, I just finished my 4th attempt at a lip sync.

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/220209/4 9897_Mouths_Done.php

Tell me what you think :D

What should I concentrate on improving on? Is this up to the NG standard?

BTW he's saying "Blood is thicker than water" which is an audio I recorded off a tutorial here on NG, I didn't use said tutorial's method, however.

Thanks!

MS

[Ironosaur]

At 2/21/09 07:54 PM, MonkeyShrub wrote: What should I concentrate on improving on? Is this up to the NG standard?

It's pretty good. However, except for the last mouth in this little animation it seemed that all that was ahoppening was the teeth suddenly appearing and disappearing. Good job though. It's better than a lot of stuff nowadays, and it definitely, definitely fits in with NG standards.

Good job.

7/10

[XBigTK13X]

A) For nostalgia purposes, I loved that you used that audio clip :-D.
B) The syncing was on par with the majority of passing animations that feature syncing on the site. My only criticism is that the teeth just seem to flash instead of be part of the mouth. However, with that said the overall sync was quite accurate and enjoyable.

[MonkeyShrub]

Ah, yes the two of you are both right. I just noticed how much of an eye-sore than mouth shape is...

How would I go about fixing it without removing the shape from the animation completely?

Thanks very much for your feedback!

[Neo-Fusion]

It is getting there, idea though... get a better voice quality, so that you can match em up better.

[psychicpebble]

At 2/21/09 11:42 PM, Neo-Fusion wrote: It is getting there, idea though... get a better voice quality, so that you can match em up better.

Yes, the audio hurt my ears, but the lip sync is definitly up to Newgrounds Standards. Just about everything will pass on here, and your animation certainly exceeds the 'average' newgrounders skills.

[Ertyguy]

I like it but it would look a lot better if you put in some transition frames between different mouthes. (teeth partly showing, or mouth partly open)

[MonkeyShrub]

Thank you all for your feedback, very much appreciated!

[andy70707]

meh, 6/10. Also, the audio quality is awful.