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Posted at: 2/16/09 05:55 PM
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I'd recommend mud and blood on her fur, possibly torn clothing or a bit of cloth hanging out of the corner of her mouth.
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Posted at: 2/16/09 06:00 PM
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Posture is all wrong. You can't draw someone standing upright and [i assume] frowning. Hunched over, blood on hands and mouth, simple things to give it an edge.
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Posted at: 2/16/09 09:42 PM
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At 2/16/09 12:48 PM, Scourger9 wrote: At 2/16/09 11:44 AM, JT1 wrote: I think Renaenae was right on the money. You should listen to her.True! I did a little bit of everything, taking a bit from the REASONABLE suggestions. Mostly Renaenae. Here is the end result from 5 mins in flash.
At 2/16/09 11:44 AM, JT1 wrote: I think Renaenae was right on the money. You should listen to her.
take longer than 5 minutes in flash....say 30 mins.
spend time getting the eyes and mouth right, look on google images for inspiration
Posted at: 2/16/09 10:45 PM
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Jah! Crap dude! I'd have to make a new position for her! I hate working with a mouse... I'll have to do that tomorrow... English paper... Blech. Anywho, I am VERY new to flash. I have no idea how to make shading, blurr effects, etc. By chance, you guys know anything bout how ta do this stuff?
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Posted at: 2/16/09 11:01 PM
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You should add more blood and sharper teeth.
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Posted at: 2/17/09 12:53 AM
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fix the eyes, they just look sort of like a dumb stare, not a threatening wherewolf glare (I don't think that was spelt right but what ever)
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Posted at: 2/17/09 02:05 AM
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Dammit, I don't know how to shade fur!
Posted at: 2/17/09 06:05 AM
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Ears looks good, but body is strange it is not shaded.
Posted at: 2/17/09 06:29 AM
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You know what would help? Find a picture that has a dog grinning as a reference. I think the most "fearsome" aspect of the dog at that point is the teeth. They are fairly long, and they are fully exposed.
No need to go with the cliché "red-eyes" thing.
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Posted at: 2/17/09 10:58 AM
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EYEBROWS! it needs eyebrows.....
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Posted at: 2/17/09 06:35 PM
Ya know, a lot of this would be easier If I had a draw pad and color software. Thing is, I work with frame-by-frame so quality won't be much of an issue. It would look a lot better with a background, I assure you all, but for now, I'm still working on my first animation. Not much time for this in particular. Thank you all for your tips and I have definately learned some things. Have a great day! :D
Posted at: 2/17/09 09:51 PM
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dont shade the entier thing using a gradient add real highlights mid tones and shadows
Posted at: 2/17/09 09:56 PM
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make her slouched and leaning to one side with hair over her face
Posted at: 2/18/09 06:18 AM
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At 2/16/09 11:15 AM, Scourger9 wrote: Like something that stares at you in a dark room, but isn't enough to scare you, but it creeps you right the hell out.
If this thing stared at me in a dark room..
Posted at: 2/27/09 05:17 PM
At 2/18/09 06:18 AM, Moltimert wrote: At 2/16/09 11:15 AM, Scourger9 wrote: Like something that stares at you in a dark room, but isn't enough to scare you, but it creeps you right the hell out.If this thing stared at me in a dark room..
HA!
Posted at: 2/27/09 05:44 PM
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Add muscles, make thinner slits for here eyes, more wrinkles to define the face (preferably angry wrinkles), make her less hairy, and change her stance. Even Freddy Crougar is not scary when he stands like that.
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