How can I make her creepier?

[Scourger9]

I don't really know how to make this image creepier... So I'm posting it to get suggestions from you guys! Personally, I like her the way I drew her, but if she was creepier, that would be great!

[Tehpivot]

At 2/15/09 10:59 PM, Scourger9 wrote: I don't really know how to make this image creepier...

Draw it with a mouse

[Scourger9]

At 2/15/09 11:03 PM, Tehpivot wrote:

At 2/15/09 10:59 PM, Scourger9 wrote: I don't really know how to make this image creepier...

Draw it with a mouse

I did... Wait, was that a pun? No... Wait, was it?
This is drawn with a mouse.

[Tehpivot]

At 2/15/09 11:04 PM, Scourger9 wrote:
I did... Wait, was that a pun? No... Wait, was it?
This is drawn with a mouse.

I was assuming is was done with a tablet...

Maybe adding a red underglow?

[UMREE]

i think you've reached the limit. i mean it is a furry.

[Tehpivot]

At 2/15/09 11:07 PM, UMREE wrote: i think you've reached the limit. i mean it is a furry.

I don't tolerate that.

[Scourger9]

At 2/15/09 11:06 PM, Tehpivot wrote:

At 2/15/09 11:04 PM, Scourger9 wrote:

I was assuming is was done with a tablet...

Maybe adding a red underglow?

Hmmm... How would I do that?
(Sorry, I'm fairly new to flash.)

[UMREE]

At 2/15/09 11:08 PM, Tehpivot wrote:

At 2/15/09 11:07 PM, UMREE wrote: i think you've reached the limit. i mean it is a furry.

I don't tolerate that.

sorry boss, for a second there i thought that forums were used for the expression of opinions.

[Scourger9]

At 2/15/09 11:12 PM, UMREE wrote:

At 2/15/09 11:08 PM, Tehpivot wrote:

At 2/15/09 11:07 PM, UMREE wrote: i think you've reached the limit. i mean it is a furry.

I don't tolerate that.

sorry boss, for a second there i thought that forums were used for the expression of opinions.

Your right, it is. Although I don't view her as a furry, you have every right to express your opinions and perceptions.

[Fleshlight]

she needs to have dicks coming out of her tits. Adding dicks for tits pretty much makes anything creepier

[Tehpivot]

At 2/15/09 11:09 PM, Scourger9 wrote:
Hmmm... How would I do that?
(Sorry, I'm fairly new to flash.)

There's a little ball with s squiggly line through it. Click "draw in selection"

[Scourger9]

At 2/15/09 11:24 PM, Fleshlight wrote: she needs to have dicks coming out of her tits. Adding dicks for tits pretty much makes anything creepier

True, it does, but I'm looking for a more eery look. And I'm pretty dure that dicks comming out of her err... breasts would attract umm.. Unintended audiences, she's a character I hope to use one day in a flash series along with 3 other characters.

This is her regularly, I drew this with a mouse, it'll look alot better when I get a tablet.

[ReNaeNae]

Make her 'snout' more scrunched (lol) so it looks like she's snarling more... make her eyes more evil... instead of zombie.deer in headlights... hunch her back more... etc. etc. I have no idea what I'm saying!

Also, please crop your images, thanks.

[crazygiraffe]

At 2/15/09 10:59 PM, Scourger9 wrote: I don't really know how to make this image creepier... So I'm posting it to get suggestions from you guys! Personally, I like her the way I drew her, but if she was creepier, that would be great!

just redraw the design
werewolf (or creepy regular person in story involving dog people) is to hard of a starting point for your aparent level of skill in art
ya know i'm talking about if ya wanna make that creepy i personally would make the teeth worn out looking by takin a light grey pencil and breakin' off the point
than rub it sideways on the teeth

then you can also use a red pen (perferably uni ball because their ink is very smooth giving it a liquid look) on tuffs of fur slightly more pulled out than the rest as if something bit, or cut their also apply the pen carefully to the teeth remembering to add more blood on the bottom row of teeth than the top because only some splatters on the top and the rest drizzzles downward

in conclusion if your willing to switch to pen & pencil than try those but if your stickiing to interwebz drawin' than all that typin was for nuthin, eh

[Vousielle]

At 2/16/09 12:26 AM, ReNaeNae wrote: Make her 'snout' more scrunched (lol) so it looks like she's snarling more... make her eyes more evil... instead of zombie.deer in headlights... hunch her back more... etc. etc. I have no idea what I'm saying!

Also, please crop your images, thanks.

All I can see is the giant breasts you gave her. And yet no mention of giant breasts in the caption.

Curiouser and curiouser.

[ReNaeNae]

At 2/16/09 12:54 AM, Vousielle wrote: All I can see is the giant breasts you gave her. And yet no mention of giant breasts in the caption.

Curiouser and curiouser.

lol, someone said furry... guess I assumed.. my bad.

[Scourger9]

At 2/16/09 12:26 AM, ReNaeNae wrote: Make her 'snout' more scrunched (lol) so it looks like she's snarling more... make her eyes more evil... instead of zombie.deer in headlights... hunch her back more... etc. etc. I have no idea what I'm saying!

Also, please crop your images, thanks.

Ahem, I am a noob, soooo I dunno how to crop. I could hunch her back... Although the rest is a little wierd, like her breasts being twice as big. (lul)

[djbdr248]

Give her a huge throbing DICK!

[jagondudo]

if you wanna go for creepier make the pupils smaller that normally helps and post an update!

[Scourger9]

At 2/16/09 06:16 AM, jagondudo wrote: if you wanna go for creepier make the pupils smaller that normally helps and post an update!

There, pupils smaller. A small, but welcomed change. Remember guys I'm going for creepy, not scary. Like something that stares at you in a dark room, but isn't enough to scare you, but it creeps you right the hell out.

[JT1]

I think Renaenae was right on the money. You should listen to her.

[taddd9]

Add some eye details under the eyes.

[Scourger9]

At 2/16/09 11:44 AM, JT1 wrote: I think Renaenae was right on the money. You should listen to her.

True! I did a little bit of everything, taking a bit from the REASONABLE suggestions. Mostly Renaenae.
Here is the end result from 5 mins in flash.

[MagnumForce]

Now you need a name.
Don't ask me for ideas.

[Scourger9]

Actually, she has a name! I'd rather not say it though, for if I actually manage to make my series, I'd like to reveal her name later. No spoilers. :D

[Scourger9]

At 2/16/09 01:07 PM, MagnumForce wrote: Now you need a name.
Don't ask me for ideas.

Meh.. I'll call this form of the character Ichnis. I still won't reveal the actual character's name.

[MADJACK24]

list of creepy things
1.scraggly fur
2.yellow eyes (much scarier than red)
3.razor sharp,pale-yellow teeth
4.ears folded back.

all true elements of a creepy werewolves.

[RockwellJB]

shadows, shadows,shadows, shadows,shadows, shadows. learn to work with shadows.

[JT1]

I guess I have to say it: 5 minutes is not enough time to make a good picture. I hope that this is not meant to be a final picture. If you want to draw a good character, you must take time to work on the details.

[<deleted>]

At 2/15/09 10:59 PM, Scourger9 wrote: I don't really know how to make this image creepier... So I'm posting it to get suggestions from you guys! Personally, I like her the way I drew her, but if she was creepier, that would be great!

Add in Blood

Decapitation