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Posted at: 2/8/09 12:53 AM
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Seriously, scale of 1-10.
Posted at: 2/8/09 01:42 AM
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I'd say a 7, the skin above the eye looks way to deep, like there's just a big fold of skin, and the fold has to much of an arch to it. The shadings very good though and most of the proportions seem correct, i'm not so great at drawing eyes, so it looks pretty good to me
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Posted at: 2/8/09 01:57 AM
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It looks fine. Depending on the situation.
If you want it to look more for an adult, make the eye longer, and don't make the skin so "fat" and folded. It looks like an eye for a person who has a very fat face,
Posted at: 2/8/09 01:58 AM
At 2/8/09 01:57 AM, Mystery-Moon-Pie-Aud wrote: It looks fine. Depending on the situation. If you want it to look more for an adult, make the eye longer, and don't make the skin so "fat" and folded. It looks like an eye for a person who has a very fat face,
Forgot the rating. I give it an 8.5.
Posted at: 2/8/09 03:44 AM
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try using a better pencil, the led of the one ur using seems a bit too dry and lowers the quality of the image.
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Posted at: 2/8/09 04:19 AM
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the eye being shaded kinda bugs me, beyond that its good to go id give it a 7-8ish
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Posted at: 2/8/09 06:32 AM
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Well, i'd give it a 7 'cos the pupil is completely dark - it also has hi-lights but the iris has too many hi-lights in it
Also, it is darker nearer the lids, try make it a bit more dark on the irs as you go down, maybe the line that the upper lid goes upto is too high and angular - its more flat than that
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Posted at: 2/8/09 09:29 AM
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yah the upper part looks like its sunk in or something it looks off, and the shading on the bottom left doesnt look right either, but looks pretty good i'd give it a 8 just because it looks professional to me.
Posted at: 2/8/09 10:07 AM
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I like it. now you have to finish the portrait of the scared little homeless boy.
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Posted at: 2/8/09 02:30 PM
At 2/8/09 10:07 AM, LordAdon wrote: I like it. now you have to finish the portrait of the scared little homeless boy.
Lol what?
Also thanks to everyone for the feedback! It was drawn freehand from this reference image.
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