hi so im just gonna post my art here and i would like to here some comment/critiq :D
At 2/7/09 08:32 PM, SweCodah wrote: heres the second one
Wow.. You really went overboard with the arms.. It works.. :)
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But pehaps some bigger hands would have been better...
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thanks man ill try to make the hands bigger :) i checkd out your showcase and its reaally great :D
Yeah i agree about the hands, they could be bigger. Really like you're style, that first pic is awesome
At 2/7/09 08:32 PM, SweCodah wrote: heres the second one
you should study up on muscle anatomy. The top part's good, but from the rib cage down it's kinda iffy.
You see...I like drawing ripped, sweaty men sometimes...
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At 2/7/09 10:24 PM, Captain-Ben wrote: Yeah i agree about the hands, they could be bigger. Really like you're style, that first pic is awesome
thanks !:D and yeah i probobly should study anatomy i have never studyd any anatomy so it would be good for me i guess :p
and the first pics quality really got screwd up by the compresion -.-
Really nice shading on the first one
The second wasnt so nice but was still good
The third was nice but wasnt so effective for some reason, ic ant pinpoint what though...
Maybe luigi's leg could join to his foot a bit more and he could have non-rubber bones...?
yeah i see what i did wrong with the leg now :S ,but i kinda like the rubberbone look xD
wow kinda forgot about this threde :p anyways i'm having some trubbel with the shading, any tips ?
At 5/29/09 03:20 PM, SweCodah wrote: wow kinda forgot about this threde :p anyways i'm having some trubbel with the shading, any tips ?
The first is to start doing it :P it is hard to critiqe some thing that isn't there :)
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Great stuff man. As for shading on the monkey. Go shade it then show us how you've done it. :)
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haha thanks :) well i tryed xD do you think i should ad highlights or change anything ?
At 5/29/09 03:41 PM, SweCodah wrote: haha thanks :) well i tryed xD do you think i should ad highlights or change anything ?
I see no difference to the first monkey picture
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At 5/29/09 03:41 PM, SweCodah wrote: haha thanks :) well i tryed xD do you think i should ad highlights or change anything ?
Some highlights would be good yes..
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Looks awesome, can't do better myself :)
wish i were that good tbh (:
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Maybe a bit of shading on the banana under the tail, the face under the hair-line and the hair under the ears.
okey i thonk i'm done spaming the threde with this picture this is the final xD
not really done yet i think im gonna do a really big citybakground in grayscale behind him ?
At 6/6/09 12:08 PM, SweCodah wrote: not really done yet i think im gonna do a really big citybakground in grayscale behind him ?
Monopoly house behind him.
He is the monopoly man right?
Wow you Art is pretty neat looking. Has some good effects.
Keep it up.
Your art style is very interesting, it reminds me of a cartoon I used to watch. :) I like it.
Hey, I'm a NG writer, and I've written a script and storyline you can view on my page, if you don't want to start from scratch, just wait a few hours, we have JeremyLokken finishing up backgrounds and character ideas, so please, give this animating job a try. I really feel, I could NOT get anyone better than you for this art job.
