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Game character Preiview 2009-01-14 16:34:34 Reply

I am animatiing a game, that i am figuring out how to code. It will be a while untill it comes out as i need to learn as. But i just wanted to show the character to give you a preiview of it and to get your opinions.

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Response to Game character Preiview 2009-01-14 16:39:43 Reply

At 1/14/09 04:34 PM, FridgeClock wrote: I am animatiing a game, that i am figuring out how to code. It will be a while untill it comes out as i need to learn as. But i just wanted to show the character to give you a preiview of it and to get your opinions.

I like the shape and style, its just the hands that I think needs work. Maybe make the lines more subtle?

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Response to Game character Preiview 2009-01-14 16:41:23 Reply


I like the shape and style, its just the hands that I think needs work. Maybe make the lines more subtle?

Ok =]

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Response to Game character Preiview 2009-01-14 16:42:52 Reply

Turn down the line volume a bit, dude. Good luck with your thing! :)


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Response to Game character Preiview 2009-01-14 16:44:06 Reply

At 1/14/09 04:42 PM, Dugh wrote: Turn down the line volume a bit, dude. Good luck with your thing! :)

Now people are pointing it out, i have noticed that, thanks.

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Response to Game character Preiview 2009-01-14 16:46:34 Reply

I think it looks pretty cool. It's nice and simple, I'm sure it'll be a great game.


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Response to Game character Preiview 2009-01-14 16:55:55 Reply

At 1/14/09 04:46 PM, Headshot777 wrote: I think it looks pretty cool. It's nice and simple, I'm sure it'll be a great game.

Thanks.

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Response to Game character Preiview 2009-01-14 17:05:42 Reply

It's a start. I'm not a fan of the stick arms and legs and think it would be 100% better if you make them not just lines. Otherwise I do like the hands and weapon, and the face area works fine. The hair seems off to me for some reason, but I can't pinpoint why. Perhaps because of the line difference in weight.

Good luck!


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Response to Game character Preiview 2009-01-16 11:10:00 Reply

At 1/14/09 05:05 PM, JKR wrote: It's a start. I'm not a fan of the stick arms and legs and think it would be 100% better if you make them not just lines. Otherwise I do like the hands and weapon, and the face area works fine. The hair seems off to me for some reason, but I can't pinpoint why. Perhaps because of the line difference in weight.

Thanks, i will consider your judgement.