its my first ever animation, but i decided id give it a shot, if you like it, ill give you the fla, else, i dont care much. Ive been scripting for a while but never really have i animated, so crit where nessacery
Heres the SWF

Requirement and such:
* You can animate anything you want, as long as it's frame by frame animated.

At 2/16/09 08:03 AM, Yambanshee wrote: Heres the SWF

I guess that's what, 98% tweened? Besides that, the idea as well as the animation style are both very unoriginal and simple.

Heres my character. I figure hes simple enough for me to animate, and original enough to show some personality and character. Anyways, lmk what you think :P

I'd be up for a slot. I haven't done a ton of animating, but uh, here's a frame by frame demo.

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  Twix

  by onefifth

  What would YOU do for a twix bar?

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Let me know if I have a spot, and I'll put something together (better than that).

At 2/21/09 02:18 AM, FingerFactor wrote: Anyways, lmk what you think :P

Looks good to me.

At 2/21/09 03:00 AM, onefifth wrote: Let me know if I have a spot, and I'll put something together (better than that).

Sure thing, go nuts :P

heres the preview

At 2/25/09 10:01 AM, ScrewedComedy wrote: heres the preview

FBF collab. Frame by Frame. Might want to keep that in mind before you start tweening ;)

At 2/25/09 11:23 AM, Vincoid wrote:

At 2/25/09 10:01 AM, ScrewedComedy wrote: heres the preview

FBF collab. Frame by Frame. Might want to keep that in mind before you start tweening ;)

yeah :)

At 2/25/09 12:04 PM, ScrewedComedy wrote: yeah :)

You do realize that most of your movie right now is tweened? And that tweens aren't allowed?

ok my parts done. click here to watch and critizise were necessary.

At 3/1/09 10:19 PM, mrflub wrote: ok my parts done. click here to watch and critizise were necessary.

Nice. One thing though, could you darken the juice, because it's pretty hard to see on the white bg?

And add some music to it ;)

Agreed with Vincoid. Looks good, but I can hardly see the drink being poured into his mouth. Some color backgrounds would be nice too, but if you think that it would just hurt the animation, you don't need to.

At 3/1/09 10:19 PM, mrflub wrote: ok my parts done. click here to watch and critizise were necessary.

that looks really good mrflub. Just one thing I noticed. When the grey shirted guy puts his hand up on his head where the can hit, the hand dissapears. you may want to check that

Sorry for the double post but I'm pretty much done with my part! just looking for sfx now. here it is so far
.swf

At 3/2/09 06:44 PM, Sprite-harvester wrote: Sorry for the double post but I'm pretty much done with my part! just looking for sfx now. here it is so far
.swf

hehe, nice! but the hand of the guy with the watch, is separated from the arm with a line, maybe erase that.

At 3/3/09 01:56 AM, Breaktroll wrote:

hehe, nice! but the hand of the guy with the watch, is separated from the arm with a line, maybe erase that.

hehe. good catch ^_^U I'll erase that.

thanks everyone oe for the positive reviews! ill work on that hand thing and add music as suggested. thanks!

At 3/5/09 12:47 AM, mrflub wrote: thanks everyone oe for the positive reviews! ill work on that hand thing and add music as suggested. thanks!

And before I forget, delete your name from your part. All parts will get a nametag made by me ;)

At 3/5/09 04:38 AM, Vincoid wrote:

At 3/5/09 12:47 AM, mrflub wrote: thanks everyone oe for the positive reviews! ill work on that hand thing and add music as suggested. thanks!

And before I forget, delete your name from your part. All parts will get a nametag made by me ;)

ok

I just thought of an awesome idea. Is there room for me?

At 3/7/09 07:38 PM, Ryan-L wrote: I just thought of an awesome idea. Is there room for me?

you'll have to send in a preview first, so we can see wha you can. remember: FRAME BY FRAME.

At 3/8/09 05:22 AM, Breaktroll wrote:

At 3/7/09 07:38 PM, Ryan-L wrote: I just thought of an awesome idea. Is there room for me?

you'll have to send in a preview first, so we can see wha you can. remember: FRAME BY FRAME.

Dose the backgrounds have to Be FBF to?

hey would it be cool if the release date was may 23? that's ma birthday!

Dose the backgrounds have to Be FBF to?

hehe, i think not. but that would actually be a good idea. :p

At 3/8/09 09:04 PM, mrflub wrote: hey would it be cool if the release date was may 23? that's ma birthday!

I'll start working on the collab after my birthday (friday), and I'll get a release date out once I finish the menu and such. It probably won't be the actual release date, just a guideline for when all the parts need to be in ;)

As for the BG question; it doesn't have to be FBF if it's a still image, but you can do that if you want to. It would look pretty cool if done right.

Mind if I join?

is it okay to join with a very raw uncoloured fbf sequence?

At 3/9/09 09:45 PM, JesseT wrote: Mind if I join?

Show me some previews and I'll let you know. Make sure to read all of the rules first though, because quite some guys tend to forget half of it :P

At 3/10/09 06:11 AM, denzel-crocker wrote: is it okay to join with a very raw uncoloured fbf sequence?

If that's your style, sure. Unless it's TOO raw, but I'll let you know.

At 3/10/09 06:39 AM, Vincoid wrote:

At 3/9/09 09:45 PM, JesseT wrote: Mind if I join?

Show me some previews and I'll let you know. Make sure to read all of the rules first though, because quite some guys tend to forget half of it :P

At 3/10/09 06:11 AM, denzel-crocker wrote: is it okay to join with a very raw uncoloured fbf sequence?

If that's your style, sure. Unless it's TOO raw, but I'll let you know.

Oh I don't really have any submissions or previews of much so I am just going to make a part just for practice...

I want to join but no animations of mine are up yet. I will definitely have a bunch up by may though.