boxman comic

[pvt-blasto]

im interested to see what people think about this comic... i finished it a while back, urs 20 pages long, and i did have the entire story figured out...

in im hoping i can start the series in 2009...

ill start with the first three pages... pm if you want the whole thing...

[pvt-blasto]

if it seems to skip here, its because i left out page 2 which was unecessary...

[pvt-blasto]

i dont want to break any rules, so ill leave it here and see if anyone is interested for more...

[Recycled]

kinda weird but i like it....kinda hard too read...go over it in flash or photoshop or something.. :)

[compl33tbull]

if you have a mac, i recommend comic life

[zbo-trent]

At 12/29/08 10:26 AM, pvt-blasto wrote: i dont want to break any rules, so ill leave it here and see if anyone is interested for more...

it looks cool but somewhat hard 2 read

[Spags]

Hmmm...
The art is lacking, but I enjoy the writing of it a lot.

[Tehpivot]

It is really cool, but I don't know where to read next! :P

[pvt-blasto]

thanks for feedback folks, i should be getting a new tablet any day soon, but what i will do is go over the whole thing and replace text with...text...

anyone object to another page?

[pvt-blasto]

btw i think i should tell everyone, that origionally this was a storyboard for the first episode of a series... it just sort of turned into a comic book.... intantly... ah well...

[pvt-blasto]

personally i think the comic looks better as it progresses... just got my tablet.. ill post a new page bit by bit...

[pvt-blasto]

another page :)