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Posted at: 12/26/08 06:54 PM

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i thought i'd post some of my art and see what you think :P

first of all, my latest picture, a zombie.

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second, drawn yesterday to test my new tablet, a very angry guy.

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third, drawn a few weeks ago, another zombie.

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fourth drawn yesterday, ray from castle repercussions, im not too happy with this one.

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Posted at: 12/26/08 07:05 PM

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fifth, some pixel art

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sixth, another angry face

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seventh, a drawing on paper from a while ago.

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and finally, a handgun drawn in flash. (animated)

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Posted at: 12/27/08 04:57 AM

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At 12/26/08 06:55 PM, Splurda wrote: second, drawn yesterday to test my new tablet, a very angry guy.

I really love the texture these tablet drawn pieces convey. this is some really dark stuff. I'm looking forward to seeing more.


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At 12/27/08 04:57 AM, ArtistJ wrote:
I really love the texture these tablet drawn pieces convey. this is some really dark stuff. I'm looking forward to seeing more.

thanks :D also that second zombie was just a test for lighting, so heres the original which doesn't look so awful :P

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At 12/27/08 01:10 PM, Splurda wrote: thanks :D also that second zombie was just a test for lighting, so heres the original which doesn't look so awful :P

geez this place is really dead these days...

i like this one, lots of in-your-face color.


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Posted at: 12/27/08 04:02 PM

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nice but like all this is dark stuff way dont you guys try to at a shocking color in the darkness

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At 12/27/08 04:02 PM, ETHAN35T wrote: nice but like all this is dark stuff way dont you guys try to at a shocking color in the darkness

you sound like my art teacher haha. what do you mean? just some random pink on a black background? or just bright colours. like bluehippos art threAD?

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same zombie as the first picture, about to cut somebody up in an alley. thats duct tape on the guys mouth, just incase you thought it was his mouth lol.

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At 12/27/08 05:58 PM, Splurda wrote: same zombie as the first picture, about to cut somebody up in an alley. thats duct tape on the guys mouth, just incase you thought it was his mouth lol.

heres an improved version, if any mods see this feel free to delete that post. and the art forums pretty dead nowadays huh?

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Posted at: 12/27/08 07:30 PM

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Well, you obviously have a firm grasp over lighting, but the linearts are a bit shabby; I would recommend working on those.


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At 12/27/08 07:30 PM, UndefinedArt wrote: Well, you obviously have a firm grasp over lighting, but the linearts are a bit shabby; I would recommend working on those.

thanks, any particular areas?

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Posted at: 12/28/08 08:26 AM

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17 posts are only 4 are from people other than me ¬.¬

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quick sketch.

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Posted at: 12/30/08 04:01 PM

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will somebody comment, i know you're there, or you wouldn't be reading this.

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At 12/30/08 04:01 PM, Splurda wrote: will somebody comment, i know you're there, or you wouldn't be reading this.

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it seems like you are rushing to get the line work out of the way, and then WAY overdoing the colors and rendering. my advice is to just post linework for a few weeks, don't worry about shading, lighting, rendering, etc. this may not be the most polite way to say it, but there's that old saying about polishing turds. not saying these are turds, but you understand.

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Posted at: 12/30/08 08:02 PM

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i'd rather have a polished turd than a regular one, but i see what you're getting at, it's a) not realistic b) not very detailed and c) im spending too much time of colour and shading instead of smoothing out the lines, and yeah i pretty much keep the first set of lines i draw over the guide, will keep that in mind :D

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good stuff overall its like my traditional artwork... creepy :D

i think u need improvement on your graphics tablet just to and depth and form into your pictures as they seem very flat atm.

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At 12/26/08 07:09 PM, king-ben wrote: sixth, another angry face

this one is my favorite.
My only suggestion is that your linework seems a little messy.
Otherwise, I think your art is pretty good.

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At 12/30/08 09:18 PM, Spaghetti14 wrote:
At 12/26/08 07:09 PM, king-ben wrote: sixth, another angry face
this one is my favorite.
My only suggestion is that your linework seems a little messy.
Otherwise, I think your art is pretty good.

the angry ones were just sketches that i decided to shade, so the lineart is messier on those than the others.

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Posted at: 12/31/08 10:37 AM

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I like your work, really well done.

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At 12/31/08 10:37 AM, Lucy wrote: I like your work, really well done.

thanks :D

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there's a bit to much shading and effects for my taste

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At 12/31/08 03:06 PM, XxDaRkReDxX wrote: there's a bit to much shading and effects for my taste

Agreed I think the lighting effects are distracting the one with the colored background the third one and the quick sketch are prime examples. The highlights are also really really strong in everything which is super confusing in the drawings with more muted coloring everywhere else. Nice work overall.

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Posted at: 12/31/08 03:38 PM

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At 12/31/08 03:13 PM, NextToNothing wrote:
At 12/31/08 03:06 PM, XxDaRkReDxX wrote: there's a bit to much shading and effects for my taste
Agreed I think the lighting effects are distracting the one with the colored background the third one and the quick sketch are prime examples. The highlights are also really really strong in everything which is super confusing in the drawings with more muted coloring everywhere else. Nice work overall.

the third one is terrible lol i dunno why i posted it :P and the quick sketch was quick so i didnt really take much time over the lighting. i just like strong highlights though.

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