At 6/5/10 12:10 AM, Sockembop wrote:
And right back out again. So please people, I'm begging you: tell me where i have gone wrong. I did this with no reference, so considering my lack of experience drawing anything near proper human anatomy I don't think it's half bad. Other than the shitty lazy hands and crappy feet, why does she look so awkward? What can I do to improve.
I feel the awkwardness comes from a mixture of the face, and the pose. See, not many people stand in that pose very often, as it's a very tense, straight and uncomfortable pose to hold up, so many people would tilt their weight to their left or right, especially so in females. Basically, make the pose a bit more fluid and less straight, and you're good to go.
for the face, it looks a bit... dopey? Im not sure how to describe it, but her face is kinda slanted and her expression looks very lazy for the situation.