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At 7/2/13 11:41 PM, Makeshift wrote:

At 7/2/13 11:19 PM, YumeSin wrote: Seems like mostly everyone in this topic is graduating from college or leaving pretty soon. Oh well, here goes:

I'm attending college this fall, with a planned major in Accounting.

I'm starting out too. Television Broadcasting. After two years of that I'll expand into a graduate program.

I'm thinking after earning my bachs, I'll got for my masters. Since the CPA requires 150 credit hours and the bach degree requires 123, I need the hours if I can't find an internship.

Why do you want to do Television Broadcasting?

Seems like mostly everyone in this topic is graduating from college or leaving pretty soon. Oh well, here goes:

I'm attending college this fall, with a planned major in Accounting.

At 6/21/13 08:18 AM, SCTE3 wrote:

At 6/21/13 12:04 AM, YumeSin wrote: Hey guys, not sure if you remember me that much. I just finished high school and going to college in a couple of months. I feel like I'll have a lot more time to review like I used to, now that everything has settled.

May I rejoin?

If your reviews are like they were when you were a member in 2011 (but possibly even more helpful like the reviews current members :) ) then feel free to join again. Always nice to see old faces joining again.

and congrats on graduating high school!

Thank you! It's been such a long time since I could actually post on newgrounds like I used to. I'm glad to see you're still around. How have you been?

Hey guys, not sure if you remember me that much. I just finished high school and going to college in a couple of months. I feel like I'll have a lot more time to review like I used to, now that everything has settled.

May I rejoin?

I got inspired to write this by a movie my Creative Writing teacher showed us called Slam. I hope everyone enjoys it : )

These
Walls they call them
Construct me into this
Person they wish to see but
They can never quite get the picture right
They crop and resize me until I
Appear just right in their mind but I
Can't seem to feel healthy
With this concept of self-preservation and sympathy
Apathy of anarchy
And this content with augmenting
Who I am
With what I should be.
But I'll take a break and conjure up the strength
'That shall slice
These corners
Those wrinkles those things you call mistakes
And throw them into the trashcans
With the bits and pieces
And tidbits of "feces".
They are
Only small things that you need to step over in order to break into you
They say
Things that get in your way so the opposition can usurp the king
They say
They can only be
Those things that you must ignore and turn a blind e7e to
Because these walls we built for you
Are where you must stay.
There is no
Easy way out or quick conclusions
Those
Assumptions of winning this battle you are already losing
And
The thought that you can no longer turn back the knife that has been pointed
And jointed with your toes and fingers
Are ridiculous.
Are you really going to throw away the path painted for you,
That path so pretty and dawned as a new dawn of a new era of a new day
That path
You see so clearly and obviously have the tools to make it through the days
Where
There will be no sunlight and no moonlight for you to convey
Those
Things you find as weird as they may seem
Are the very things that can save you.
You see we live in a world where the fittest survive
And those who are ill equipped
Or fall into the systems elliptical
Run for miles
And miles
Seeing an outstretch piece of land
Waiting
Hoping
Make-BELIEVING
That there is a sunrise
An end to this nightmare
On this day, a very dark day
To the point at which they can no longer see
That they are running on
An elliptical machine
Running on societys scheme. . .
Don't worry that goddam head of yours
I've raised and seen and sunned and bleed for
Don't
Walk outside of that box I so nicely built for
You
And to that
My voice finally shines out
Blending with the colors I have learned from the holes I managed to poke through
These walls
Seeing the hatred
Outside
Others are
Belted and blighted and pounded with
And I now say, and I now admit
That this box is a construct
Of guilt.

My dream last night scared me...I'll write about it.

Though I'm more sure I'll finish my art submission than my story :/

Ahh...I think I'll be able to enter this one.

I hope PG-13 is accepted.

As much as I hate to resign, I have to.

Current events in my life have become to stressful for me at this point...

Thanks and goobye RRC. : )....

But don't be shocked If I join back somewhere next year!

No update yet, please...it's been a rough Saturday, and it would do well if I had a good sunday to do these reviews X_X

19x5 = 95
19x1=19
95+19=114+3(post)+7(all done) = 124
(I could've sworn this posted DX)
How is everyone doing?
Doing something special for the summer?

19 x 5
19 x 1
95 + 19 = 114+3(post)= 117+7(done) = 124

Ah, finals are coming up. I really hope i got this job too T_T Gonna be busy this summer, which is what I want.

I'll make sure to sneak in a review or two though : P

Ah, glad my birthday is over. ^-^ Seventeen now!!! Wohooo!

5 x 11 = 55
11 x 1 = 11
55 + 11 = 66+3(post) = 69+7(all done) = 76.

I'd like to mention as well I'm going to start a comic series over the summer, the story and main characters' picture should be up by the end of June.

I'm going to incorporate a bit of Marvel and Capcom stuff within it, but it's going to follow my main character Lunificer.

Hope its' success, and my drawings don't induce blindness ^^;

22x5 = 111
22x1 = 22
111 + 22 = 133+3(post) =136

Ah, such a busy week this one has been.

Even busier next week for my birthday(woohoo) and my family is coming down here to celebrate it.

Might not finish all of them next week, but I will try my best : D

Did all reviews, but missed one RRC with "The One You Really Love" xD

Ah, enjoyed it so much I had forgotten to put it.

5 x 19 = 95
1 x 18 = 18 + 95 = 113 + 7(?) = 120
Point total: 120

I did the reviews early since I know it's gonna be quite the busy week for me with finals coming up, as well as some other needs that need to be taken care of.

At 5/9/11 03:28 AM, Supersteph54 wrote: Update will probably be sometime today!

At 5/8/11 06:47 PM, SCTE3 wrote: Glad you took up my offer :P

Yay that's 5 points for you.

At 5/8/11 07:04 PM, YumeSin wrote: Okay, I'll start my reviewing now : D

You've got some good reviews so far - if I had to complain about anything it's that you're being a bit too kind with your scores but then again I have that habit too...

One tiiiiny question though:

Am I the only girl working here? T.T (I know it sounds kinda...eh, but I want to know...for, i dunno, random reasons.)

We used to have others - I think Animith and maybe someone else, but yeah not many girls seem to like reviewing I suppose :P.

Ah, okay. It's just everyone has such nice work here, barely anything I find wrong xP I'll try to be a bit more condensing on the scores though. I enjoy reviewing actually, I have nothing better to do other than write/type.

@Points, did I do them right?

I reviewed everything on page 174(on that list you posted, had 18 things), posted RRC on the bottom of each post.

That's 108 points I believe? Yeah.

Hmm...and I actually have something I'd like you guys to review. I've started a blogish(?) type of thing, and I was wondering if any of my writing was any good.

It's a collection of things of what I hope can inspire people if they ever are going to writers block, or don't know what quite to draw. If anyone could review it, thanks! I'm particularly interested in what people think of "Love No More", but reviews for the other two will do just fine : ) You guys do writing, right? (T.T')

my...thing?
^ Link

This balloon is grayer than the rest
It stays on the ground and can't be lifted into the sky
Every child who sees this balloon cries
It looks as if it were made of nothing; but sadly only from the clouds which bring depression

For why this balloon was made, no one ever knows, it merely exists.
Too afraid to ask the balloon man themsevles, they gaze at it with a plain look, only to get a glare filled with melancholy back.
Some mothers try to cover this balloon from their children, discreetly scolding if the child dare gawks

It's shimmer of light brings almost a tingle of happiness
But it's color, brings nothing but memories.
These memories are not of the candy apples ate at picnics and carnivals
Or of the wedding day dress and reception.

Rather the anamnesis of envy
The glance of an old nemesis
A pain in one's heart that can't be swatted away in mere seconds
It forces you to savor the dull memories, to double back.

Within the crowd of all the other colors, some favorable more than others,
the gray balloon often stands alone, quiet, passive as the others get plucked off one by one.
It watches, not in anger, jealously, or hatred
More in a settle, cradling mood that has accepted it's fate.

Until the balloon man sees one try and take it
one trying to grasp that does not be
He will take it,
and choke it with a hue.

Just a poem I made, posted it on a few other sites too.

I'm new around here, and I enjoy writing obviously :P

Feel free to criticize it.

At 5/8/11 07:13 PM, SCTE3 wrote:

At 5/8/11 07:04 PM, YumeSin wrote: Okay, I'll start my reviewing now : D

One tiiiiny question though:

Am I the only girl working here? T.T (I know it sounds kinda...eh, but I want to know...for, i dunno, random reasons.)

Aside from saramary3 I guess you are. :C
I guess we just don't get a lot of chicks joining, then again we don't discriminate in this crew or most other crew for that matter.

That's good to hear, given the discrimination i got in some other places ^^'

I like all these things people want to get reviewed. They all seem interesting and good in their own way, you know?

I've always been an artsy person, though I've only been good in writing. I might post a few drawings I do when I'm bored in class. But, to warn everyone beforehand, they aren't too...well, pretty.

Okay, I'll start my reviewing now : D

One tiiiiny question though:

Am I the only girl working here? T.T (I know it sounds kinda...eh, but I want to know...for, i dunno, random reasons.)

Uhm, I'd like to join this place..if there's any room...someone told me check this out, and I'm interested.