In order to fix the strip on the first magazine cover, try making a rectangle and then rotating it accordingly in order to make sure the lines are parallel rather than guessing. i would also suggest a different color for it, the reddish color or whatever isn't pulling it off. This is what sticks out most in my head. The cover is also very flat and has no depth. I would recommend changing Entertainment into one color rather than having two separate colors splitting it up. Also, I would lose the 'Do The Test' button. The first thing that pops into my mind is "Are you [the maker] gay?" There are thousands of subjects you could put on there rather than a 'Gay Meter'.
Presuming that you will be turning both magazine covers in together and that both pictures are supposed to be of the same person, the second magazine cover that you have made lacks the tattoo on the neck. I would suggest just getting rid of the tattoo since your skills of distorting accord to the skeletal structure aren't very experienced.
Disregard the previous paragraph if the tattoo does not have to be on both pictures. Thanks for taking the time to read my advice and I wish you luck with your project.