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Response to: Shadow of the Heart Posted December 7th, 2012 in Writing

Twilight nodded her head. She then sighed and started where she left off.
"Dear Princess log, hold my thoughts, hold my dreams, for no one within the world wants love from me" Wrote the princess.
I Fled to the confines of the deep wood that MY family had planted for the ponies of this empire out of love and compassion, after an misunderstanding at the berry farm. I was crying, sobbing as I usually do, when this... this pony that I've never seen before came to me as i had my face hidden crying onto the soil. He... touched me. My horn. At first I was scared, angry and defensive. But then he came from the shadows... And revealed himself to be similar to me. He too had a horn. But smaller and red! I think he would be the pony what is called a unicorn.
He opened his mouth and told me that he'd been... watching me... that he... knew me... His eyes

Suddenly the balcony doors burst open. The candles blown out by the howl of the winters winds. The nursing ponies that were attending to her wings looked around and the guards got close to her bedside. The Princess herself looked around. She then looked at the ceiling and saw a shinny glint, flash within the darken roof. She Squinted her eyes and breathed in deeply.
"You can leave my service for the rest of the night" Said Quartzia to her servants.
"But my fare-mare, you are injured" Said a guard"
"Since when do you care"
A mysterious voice echoed into the room. A voice that the princess recognized.

"WHAT EVIL IS THIS?!" Cried one of the guards.
"If you wish not to find out then leave my chambers. I can handle this... visitor" Demanded the princess.
The guards looked at each other. They told the princess that they would be right outside her door. Everyone left. Princess Quartzia Arose from her bed and closed the balcony doors,pulled the curtains and then re-lit the candles with her magic. She turned back to her bed and saw that stranger unicorn.
"What is the meaning of this?!" Yelled Quartzia.
The stranger unicorn as reading her diary. He then looked forward at her and smiled. The lining of his smile caused her to gulp and turn her head sightly, still looking upon him. The unicorn cleared his throat and looked on at the princess with lowered eyelids.
"I do know you..." Said the unicorn.
""Then why not I know you!" Demanded the princess.
The unicorn laughed and then slid off her bed. He went forward to her. The princess stood her ground as this bold, mysterious pony came within inches of her face. They stood there looking at each other. The princess looking at him intensely. The unicorn looking at her calmly with sight humor.
As the night went on the princess and the stranger unicorn, now she knew as Sombra, talked with each other. Sharing feelings and emotions.
She discovered that as a young colt he was abandoned by his family for being a unicorn He was too a crystal pony. They kept him long enough till he could be of schooling age and then dumped him into the forest. This is where he discovered his ability over the shadows.
The princess and sombra were laying in bed together. Holding each other. She was just under his chin as she wrapped her front legs around his torso. He held her also, rubbing her shoulder as they both looked at the roof being it by the light of the moon.
"Then a few years later, I saw you. You were crying... in that spot as you always do... As you did today... I had heard of you but had never saw you... You frightened me... The wings and the horn... But... Then my fright grew to curiosity. I heard your father call you an that's when i saw you fly."
Sombra looked down at Quartzia. She felt his over powering green eyes softly looking down at her. She quickly looked up and then away again.
"I frighten you?"
"No-no... I just... Never been this intimate with any pony... especially someone as..." She said as she darted her eyes away.
"Strange and unusual as I be?" He asked
"Mesmerizing, enchanting and beautiful... oh! oh-my did I-" The princess confessed, loosely.
Sombra laughed and dropped his head back.
"Well if your going to laugh you can just leave!" She pouted.
She released him, sat up and turned away. Crossing her front legs and closing her eyes. Sombra chucked some more and reached toward her.He then stopped and looked out toward the balcony.
The princess looked back at him and uncrossed her front legs.
"What is it" She asked
"(Sigh) I Just may have to leave you... For now"

When the sun started to line the horizon, sombra looked at the princess, and the princess at him.

Like a bat going back to it's cave, sombra revealed his ability to turn to shadow and like a mystical myst, flew off into the darkness of the morning.
Quartzia galloped toward the balconies edge, wanting to fly after her new friend. But then she saw the ponies below and then with a heavy breath looked back up as the magical myst of her friend disappear.
"Oh... Oh, no..." Disappointingly said the princess.
She lowered her head and started back into her room. She was disappointed , but at the same time a feeling that she never thought she would feel. Love.
"What is this that I hear of you getting injured?!" Said her father as he burst threw her bedroom chambers.
"FATHER! WHY, you should be in bed!"
"Not when my foal is getting hurt!" He snapped.
The king started to cough and wheeze, falling into his daughters arms.
"FATHER, NO! GUARDS! RETRIEVE THE NURSE MAIDS, AT ONCE, POST HASTE!" Quartzia screamed.
The sickly king started to cough up blood onto his hoof. The princess gasped and started to cry in fright. She held her father close and started rocking him. Quartzia petted his head with her free hoof, laying her cheek on top of his head. She looked forward at the open balcony, as tears dropped from her eyes like slow rain.
"Not yet father... Please?... Not when I finally found a friend..." She pleaded.
"Oh... My dear child... Then I can truly be released... For you know what love is... You must rule with it.-"
"Father... Father!... Oh... Oh, oh, oh by the stone nooo.... noo..."
The princess could almost feel her fathers spirit being lifted with the suns rose in the sky. For a moment she hated the dawn. Making her new friend go away. And now her father pass within her very hooves. But she would please her fathers wishes. To rule with love.
"Yes father... I shall..."
The nurse maids and guards rushed into the room. They placed the king on her bed. The princess just walked forward, feeling light as a feather and so very detached from her surroundings. She walked onto the balcony, looking toward the arising sun. The smell of a promising morning, the thoughts of the night with her friend and then the current memories of her father passing.

Response to: Shadow of the Heart Posted December 7th, 2012 in Writing

The Crystal Princess was becoming tired. She was using her hooves all day to pick and pluck. When she thought no one was looking, the princess took up a berry bush with her magic. Unknown to her there was a worker picking at the bush and he became entangled within the floating bush.
"OH, DEAR ELEMENTS! NO! NOOO, I'M SORRY" He cried.
The princess gasped and shook her head. "No, no, I meant no harm! Truly I was-"
"I have a wife and 15 children-please!!!" The worker sobbed, as the princess carefully put him down. She tried to comfort him, almost laying a hoof on his back, but he looked at her wide eyed, kicked dirt in her face and ran. She quickly rubbed her face, taking away the dirt with her hoof, gasping and crying. Quartzia then heard angry voices, but her eyes were watery and red. When she looked over the ponies became very scared and ran.
"no... NOOO!!! I-JUST-WANT TO LOVE MY FELLOW PONIES!... NOOOO.... NOooo... no...."
The distraught princess ran into the forest that the ponies had grew with her families help and direction so many generations ago. Now it would be a often place for her to hide. She would come here at nights and wonder the wilds. The animals and flora did not mind her appearance. She soon went to her favorite place to lay and lowered her head. Closing her eyes.
"Am I that much feared as this Discord they talk of? My strange wings and long horn. WHY WAS I BORN THIS WAY???" She Yelled and demanded from the heavens above. The princess then put her face in her front, folded legs and sobbed. Suddenly she felt something... or somepony... stroking her horn... Quartzia immediately arose with her wings open and neck straightened.
The figure was seen behind a tree, within it's shadow. The princess squinted her frosty, sky blue eyes,within that direction.
"Horn, you say?" Said the Mysterious Pony. "You are not the only one with a horn."
The Princess gasped as he stepped forward. He took off his cloak and revealed himself as a silverish-grey pony, with black going down between his eyes, stopping at the beginning of his nose, and a voluminous black mane. "At least your horn is the same color as the rest of you." the stranger said.
His green eyes and deep baritone voice instantly pierced her heart. She became within a cold sweat, darting her eyes around. He then stepped forward. She locked her eyes on him, almost becoming dizzy.
"I know you... I have been watching you... "
The princess gasped at this admitting and forgot the hatred of magic and one of the rare times flew. She flew fast and Hard threw the trees, cutting and piercing her wings, but got threw the canopy of thick tree tops.
'"No! Wait! I-I did not mean that I-... Sigh..." Said the unknown unicorn.
He lowered his head, darted his eyes around and stomped his hoof into the ground. He then replaced his hood and went back into the shadows.

Twilight and Celestia looked at each other. Celestia then turned her head away and begun to ponder the reading.

"You see, I have complied this binder with recovered diary notes, witness accounts and time lines from the empires library archives and the Crystal palaces chambers." Pleaded Twilight sparkle. "I... I think that the earlier belief that the crystal empire was-"
"How much have you studied?" Asked Princess Celestia.
"All of it..." Twilight said as she looked away with despair and worry.
Celestia lowered herself to twilight's level. She put a wing over her beloved student and smiled.
"Then you can just tell me what you have discovered... Without worry. Everything will work out." Assured the Sun princess.

Shadow of the Heart Posted December 7th, 2012 in Writing

"Princess Celestia! Princess Celestia" Cried twilight as she galloped down the grand hall of the canterlot palace.
The sun princess was standing with her back turned, facing one of the stained glassed windows. She blinked and darted her eyes at the coming twilight. Twilight stopped. She lowered her head in exhaust. Twilight was holding a book up with her magic. Princess celestia turned to her eager student. She then took the book from twilight and started reading it. The princess then closed her eyes and turned away, dropping the book to the ground.
"You really love your history" Said the princess.
"But is this true?!" Asked twilight. "Could this be the reason that Sombra did all of this? I'm not justifying his actions but it calls into order the ways of these crystal ponies. their practices-"
"My sister and I are also from that era" Interrupted Princess Celestia. "But I will read along with you this account. 'am pleased that you found an book of the Crystal Empires History"

Twilight and Princess Celestia start reading the book. It tells of the famed and mysterious past rulers of the empire. The crystal monarchy.
After Discord had been banished by the sisters, some of the ponies in the young and unformed Equestria went their distant ways. Wanting to help the world free it's self from the remaining chaos, Celestia and Luna flew all over the lands ridden disorder. The ponies from the Gem mines Discord had force to mine the precious and powerful gems left, far, far up north to rid themselves of anything magic and over bearing. They just wanted to forget their lives as mining slaves.
But they also put their skills to good use. Being earth ponies and miners they were in tuned to the earth. The area they had picked for their new homeland was vast and cold. No trees, no rivers, just frozen. They luckily found caves. these caves had warming and emotion adsorbing crystals that could be used for building. It took them decades without magic and flight, but they built a grand empire founded on the belief of peace and education.
After mining with these crystals there outer appearance became similar to that of the mined mineral. So to outsiders and the rare visitor from another town, they were soon known as crystal ponies.
The leaders among them were strong not only in muscle, but in brain as well. The first queen, a strong mined and loving mare that took care of the youth in Discords mines birthed 3 colts. All but one of those colts died and had another son, who married a beautiful mare of the fields. She died in child birth. leaving the king with a daughter. But not just any daughter. This was one of the few new fillies and colts that as evolved to be truly born with the crystal appearance. They all loved the princess and dove her Quartzia of the Crystal empire. the Chrystal Princess.
Unfortunately like his ancestors before him... the king was starting to get failing health and at a relatively young age. The Princess would care for her father and help him to walk around their beautiful empire. The ponies were nervous about this monarchs coming to pass. Not because they would lose such a valued member of the empire. But because the princess herself was not like other ponies. Somewhere within the family of the monarchy, they had alicorn ancestry And alicorns are the most powerful known type of pony with vast magic.
She could not hide her wings or her long pointy horn. She was raised among the people and they loved her as a filie, but as she grew... so did their fears.

It was said that Quartzia would try to treat her fathers pains,but that the nurse maids would tryto shoo her away, fearing that her magic would hasten his death. The palace guards walked far from her. The chefs would make too much food so that she would not ask them to cook within the palace for days.
Quartzia did so very much for her people. She opened the largest school known in the world. Funded the library by 30 percent and even helped in the fields during harvest. it was at one harvest when things would go down hill for her even more...

Shadow of the Heart

Response to: Writing Forum Lounge Posted December 7th, 2012 in Writing

At 12/6/12 11:35 PM, starwarsjunkie wrote:
At 12/6/12 12:44 PM, warror wrote: i have written some new stories and i wanted to post them,but the shy part that im having trouble with is that they are My little pony based.
so dont be surprised when you guys see a MLP story or two ok?
We will not. You're not the first to put MLP stuff here. I can't guarantee a reception though.

Well like i said if they read it they read it... but you did make me feel better about it :)

I'll post it and then sit on it for a week to see how many people respond to it.

no im not the best writer or artist. but i love to write and im a fan of many things. from x-men to MLP. I love rock music and classical.

i just want to share my ideas like any other writer. i might get like 3 people that like it and that will be enough for me :)

p.s. is there still a writing review tread?

Response to: Writing Forum Lounge Posted December 6th, 2012 in Writing

i have written some new stories and i wanted to post them,but the shy part that im having trouble with is that they are My little pony based.

And i dont know how many ppl would even pay attention to it.

well like someone else told me a long time ago

"if they read it they read it" if they dont, they dont"

so dont be surprised when you guys see a MLP story or two ok?

Response to: Lucky Week for NG Posted May 27th, 2012 in NG News

your always so very nice about the artist. Watching a artist grow like edd did(god rest his soul in a bath of coke) or egoraptor over the years is very fun, the script mostly stays the same but the quality gets better as technology does.

I hope to see more budding artist come out.

Response to: Writing Review Request Thread Posted May 16th, 2012 in Writing

well im sorry for flooding the writers lounge, this request thread is hard to find sometimes.... you most likey seen my third istallment by now but heres a link if you havent.

i really dont want to be known as some "pusher" or spammer...so i'll only come around once a week or so...

http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1304836

Response to: Writing Forum Lounge Posted May 16th, 2012 in Writing

well i wanted to get my work out there to see if people liked it... it is hard sometimes for people to find something if i kept it on one website, and like i said, newgrounds is more of a flash animation site.

and about the request thread i didnt see it. thanks for posting it. im more of a writer and sketch artist. and im a fan of the art of newgrounds. why are you on newgrounds? do you also do animations?

Response to: Writing Forum Lounge Posted May 15th, 2012 in Writing

At 5/12/12 10:39 PM, warror wrote: well chapter 3 of chaotic kiten is up... im going to start a once a month. check 'er out

http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1304836

Response to: Writing Forum Lounge Posted May 15th, 2012 in Writing

well i was also trying to liven it up with a fan fiction, but people mostly come to this site for viewing videos and games, not really artwork and writing.

i thought that writing stories would help, but i guess only really deviant art and fan fiction.net are more reading places.

i know what you mean. i even recently got a scanner to try to add traffic to my story, with original fan art.

check some out.http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/warror/tuni-and-hank-
manga-color

Response to: Writing Forum Lounge Posted May 15th, 2012 in Writing

POSTED..............

a color version of tuni and hank manga.

it took forever to color. i know this is a writing forum but it has to do with the story im posting, and i think it looks better colored. i had to use regular paint because when i tried MURO on deviant art the file kept messing up.

you can see it if you wanna

  • TUNI AND HANK MANGA(COLOR)
    TUNI AND HANK MANGA(COLOR) by warror

    A COLOR VERSON OF AN EARLIER MANGA I HAD ILLUSTRATED. FROM MY FAN FICTION 'CHAOTIC KITTEN"

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Response to: Chaotic Kitten 3: As Pure As The Wi Posted May 13th, 2012 in Writing

Special Tribute to hank mccoy

http://youtu.be/J32T0dKA0-8

i made it.

Response to: Writing Forum Lounge Posted May 12th, 2012 in Writing

well chapter 3 of chaotic kiten is up... im going to start a once a month. check 'er out

Response to: Chaotic Kitten 3: As Pure As The Wi Posted May 12th, 2012 in Writing

Well you have done it again... You watsed another 20 or more Minutes of your life reading my Fan fiction. Thanks! Come again.

NEXT TIME: STORY EXTENSION!!!
The first ever CHAOTIC KITTEN NIBBLET!
(A even shorter story that etheir extends the main story or is just a side story that barely has Tuni in it at all).

Response to: Chaotic Kitten 3: As Pure As The Wi Posted May 12th, 2012 in Writing

Mr. McCoy sighs and shakes his head. He puts his arm around Tuni and leads her out of the lab.

The following morning, Mr. McCoy awakens to a plate with a bottle of syrup and a fork and knife on it. He looks at it curiously. He takes a shower. Gets dressed and takes his plate of odd things with him out of the room.
The smell of pancakes fills the house. he realizes that it must be somekind of special breakfast Tuni cooked up for him. He goes downstairs, expecting everyone to have their faces full of pancakes, but the faculty dining table was empty. He then turned his head and Saw the front door open.

Mr. McCoy Stepped outside and saw the faculty and students in a buffet line receiving not only pancakes, but a variety of other breakfast goods. Tuni, Jean and Anne-Marie were serving. Mr. McCoy steps upto them. He then sees a banner over the face of the buffet table. It read "McCoy-Fast".
Mr. McCoy looked on at Tuni and was taken aback by the honor. Tuni sees Mr. McCoy From the corner of his eye. She asks Anne-Marie and Jean to take over. Some people clap and cheer momentarly when they see him.
Mr. McCoy nods his head and waves his hand lightly. Tuni takes him to a special reserved table in the driveway. It had a Sunflower in the skinny vase, sitting ontop of w white table cloth, on a round small table and was seated for two.

TUNI: Now you sit here... I'll get a special plate that I arranged for you.
MR.MCCOY: Hurry back, my dear.

Mr. McCoy looks around at everyone enjoying a nice breakfast in his name. He thought that Tuni and some of the others must have waken early to do so. As he looked around, some students and other faculty waves and gave him thumbs up. He waved back and nodded. Professor Xavier came over to greet him.

PROFESSOR: You know this was HER... Idea... She really cares for you, Henry...
MR.MCCOY: Yes... i know... But sometimes I worry How long this kindess will last...
PROFESSOR: Her memory...?
MR.MCCOY: Sigh... Yes... I've avoided it too long.
PROFESSOR: No matther what happends, henry. Live for now. You cannot control the future. And With your friendship she seems to be opening up more. What ever will be, will be Doctor McCoy. Try to enjoy life when it gives you blessings such as a friend that cares of you enough to serve a buffet for you 7;30 in the morn.
MR.MCCOY: But it is past 8 a.m.
PROFESSOR: Well there you go. Oh, and it looks like that little blesing is coming with half of the bufets for you.
MR.MCCOY: Oh, dear.

Tuni lays a filled platter of breakfast delights, from fresh fruit and fried eggs infront of him. Mr. McCoy claps his hands and then rubs them together.

TUNI: I... Was thinking... if we could share...
MR.MCCOY: Sure! I might have a hearty appetite, but I surely cannot finish this Cornicorpia of Delights myself.
TUNI: Delights... oh no Mr. McCoy... I cooked most of this myself. Jean and Anne-Marie Helped with the toast, and fruits. I'm not that good.
MR.MCCOY: Every meal you make, I absolutely enjoy to the utmost pleasure of my tastebuds.
TUNI: Golly... You sure say nice things... I guess I know how you feel... I jsut don't feel that talented enough...

Professor Xavier nods his head and leaves them to their conversation.

TUNI: Does it hurt your feelings?
MR.MCCOY: Yes... It does... Because I... I care about you...
TUNI: I guess I'm a bit of a hipocrat... But if you can have some pride then I can also... Becauseno matter what happends... I beleive... that we are soulmates... Of a kind... And that I came here... With everyone... To you... For a reason... And I just want you... to be happy. Hopefully I can help.
MR.MCCOY: You already are...

Tuni's eyes shined and twinkled. She was happy, that she was making him happy.

TUNI: OH! I need to get you some Juice! Orange?
MR.MCCOY: Yes, that will be fine. But make sure that it is the biggest glass you can find. And put two straws in it, so we can share.
TUNI: Really, Sempi, Sama?

Mr. McCoy nodded and winked at Tuni. Tuni nodded her head, waved at him and smiled as she turned and walked back over to the buffet.
Mr. McCoy put one hand over the other, resting his elbows on the table. His hands resting on his mouth. His feet tapping, he thought of the things that were important to him. All of the relationships he had. And where him and Tuni were going.
Mr.McCoy suddenly saw someone sit next to him. He turnedand greeted the person with a smile, taking their hand to his lips.

ORORO: Oh, thank you. Last night was a missed opportunity, but this is a new morning.
MR.MCCOY: Oh, Ororo, I did'nt-
ORORO: What a heart Breakfast. I guess you would want to keep your srtength... with all that you have.

Mr. McCoy looked for Tuni. He found her about Ten feet from the table, holding a very large glass of orange juice, with two straws. Mr. McCoy shuffled in his chair as Tuni walked over.

MR.MCCOY: Well Tuni, your here, so umm, Ms. Monroe,-
TUNI: Here you are Mr. McCoy. A large glass of orange juice, with two straws. Special ordered.
ORORO: Oh, thinking ahead, are you, Henry?
TUNI: Of course! He is one of thee smartest men in the world.
MR.MCCOY: Tuni-
TUNI: I umm... Have to go back to the buffet... Oh and Ororo, that breakfast is big enough for two, also, you know. So you-
ORORO: Oh, I'm saving my appetite...
TUNI: Oh... alright. As long as the both fo you are happy. I'm happy.

Tuni says with a smile. Mr. McCoy puts one hand over the other and places them over his mouth. He releases his hands and lightly raises a hand towards tuni, but her back was already turned and going toward the buffet. Mr. McCoy replaces his lapped hands over his mouth. His eyes dart away from Ororo. Mr. McCoy's foot taps rapidly. He then feels Ororo's hand on his knee. He turns his head and looks at her, loweing his hands.

ORORO: A bit excited, are we not?
MR.MCCOY: No... Not what YOU think.
ORORO: So how about we dig into some of this... Breakfast stuff.
MR.MCCOY: Actually, I'am not that hungry... thank you...
ORORO: Henry McCoy, Tuni made this breakfast in your honor. In many countries it is an insult. You would break her little heart.
MR.MCCOY: Sigh... you're right.

Mr.McCoy and Ororo Start partaking in the skillfully arranged platter. Suddenly Scott comes out. His visor not arranged properly, and the rest of him dissheveld.

SCOTT: Where is she! The demon!
JEAN: Oh, scott, not now...
TUNI: What is going, on?
JEAN: He did not get any sleep last night, and when I woke up this morning to help you, he was still up.
TUNI: What was keeping him up?
JEAN: Logan and Hanks... Areas of Privacy...
TUNI: Area's of-ohhhhooooo............. Ohh...
JEAN: I'm sorry, but he blames you.

Logan then comes rushing out of the house. A computer montor frame around his neck. At this point, Mr.McCoy goes over to tuni, resting his hands on her shoulders.

MR.MCCOY: When you said you "took care ofhim", what did you mean?
TUNI: Well I wanted to make sure that he would never try to do that to you again, or try to touch me, so I taught me a lesson. I did not expect him to sleepthrew the night. I put traps in my room so that I would wake up.
LOGAN: I guess yer' friend, McCoy Did'nt get that disapline in jus' right. But i'll give you all you need. COMM HERRRE!!!
MR.MCCOY: Tunieee...
TUNI: I'll meet you where we discovered that rock while hiking.
MR.MCCOY: The large one, with the moss?
TUNI: The very same.

Tuni starts backing up, looking on at Logan and Scott. They walk slowly toward her. Bobby gets infront of them.

BOBBY: Come on guys... We are supposed to be advocates for peaceful resolutions. We can work this out!
MR.MCCOY: Yes! Let us reconsider!
LOGAN: You chase her and i'll get in front and catch her. Deal?
SCOTT: Sounds like a plan.

Scott and logan shake on their plan and bypass Bobby and mr. McCoy. Mr. McCoy and Bobby make chase after Scott and Logan making chase on Tuni.

They ran down the street, past the property of the school.

THE END.

Response to: Chaotic Kitten 3: As Pure As The Wi Posted May 12th, 2012 in Writing

LOGAN: I though you were a super genioues with Super strength and agility. I Guess you also have the mutant power of petrification.

Logan lowers his eyes and lights a cigar. Scott puts his hand on his shoulders and shakes his head.

SCOTT: Poor girl... Gonna have nightmares.

Ororo and Jean burs out laughing and scaff at Scotts words.

ORORO: Not nightmares.
JEAN: I know right-

Scott crosses his arms, turns to the both of them. Jean and Ororo shut themselfs like sprung bear traps.

SCOTT: I'll show YOU nightmares!
LOGAN: As if you could.
SCOTT; WHAT?!
LOGAN: In any light, at least we know fer sure that he did'nt get any Tuni pie, due to her reaction and the fact that she would of been in the Clinic if he did. Well! I'm going to make a few bucks and sell these on XXX-Men.Net(***Not a for Real sight to my knowlegde!!!). Night!

Logan held up his cellphone and tipped it. Then he put it back in his pocket.

SCOTT: Hold it, logan!
MR.MCCOY: You would know of such vile and perverted things!

Scott and Mr.McCoy would usually take on logan, but they were more worried about the females in the hallway.
After 10 minutes, and Mr. McCoy sitting with tuni; who was curled infront of her door, sitting upright. The only bit you could see was her slightly widend eyes.

MR.MCCOY: Tuni, it has been around 10 minutes now... I need to skin a Gulo gulo.
TUNI: wha...?
MR.MCCOY: Thee Binomial Name for Wolverine, girl!
TUNI: Binary, what?
MR.MCCOY: Oh, my stars and gathers!

Mr. McCoy raises from the floor shaking his head. He slaps his leg.

SCOTT: So if I hear anything like Big-Blue garden hose or-
MR.MCCOY: Theregoes my reputation! Well Scott, we had a good run. I think I'll go to the Avengers again. They took me in last time... two or three times... The Hulk is a Big green anger managment case and Stark is half loaded enough to reach the moon without the IronMan suit, so I' am confident that Rogers will take me under his wing again, even if I' am the wrong type of internet sensation.
SCOTT: But you were wild in your twenties.
MR.MCCOY: And how long ago was that?
SCOTT: Look, hank, we will-
MR.MCCOY: They did say that they needed help with a script or writing, or something... I don't know. It was nice getting to know you Tuni... I will miss you gravely. But I'am sure that the responsible Leader, Scott Summers can put you in his nest and cuddle up with you.

This snaps tuni out of any brain disfuction she was having and brings her to her feet. Scott thinks of a hell--of a place where he has to watch over Tuni. Scott shakes his head and rushes over to Mr.McCoy. Tuni takes a hld of his arm and starts sobbing.

MR.MCCOY: I thought that might get you both out of it. Now here's the plan.

Logan was almost done downloading the infomation from his phone, when his computer system suddenly crashed. Logan started to curse and hot at the montior. Then he thought that something or someone was hacking into his system. He raced out of the room and down the hall.
Suddenly Tuni appears in logans room. Wearing an offical X-Men Uniform, with the yellow X over the body and mostly black-blue coloring.
She searches for the phone but realises that he must of take it, smartly so.

TUNI: Dammit! My first mission and it is already compromised!
LOGAN: I knew it!
TUNI: But you-
Logan came threw the window and jumped onto his bed. He looked down at Tuni and ejected his Antimainium Claws.
LOGAN: Looking good in that suit darlin'. I'm not yer' ol' Hanky. I will shredd that thing off you like it's going out of style.

Tuni darts her eyes around. She quickly thinks of a plan. She sits on the edge of Logans bed and lowers her head.

TUNI: (SIGH), You know as everyone else does, I love Mr. McCoy. But He sees me as a child. Did you see the way I was dressed?

Tuni takes off the attached face mask, loosens her hair and then laces her fingers together on her lap.

TUNI: All I wanted was some attention. People have wants and needs.

Logan hops down, and then sits very close to Tuni. He puts his arm behind her and puts his face close to hers.

LOGAN: Oh, I'll give you all th' attention you want, darlin'. But ya aint gettin' my fuckin' phone.

Logan winks at her. Tuni turns her face to his. She looks into his eyes.

Unknown to logan, Mr.McCoy, Scott, Jean, and Ororo were listening in. Mr. McCoy sprayed a nano-microphone solution on Tuni's uniform. So she was like a walking microphone. They heard everything.

TUNI: So if you are not going to give me, the "Fucking Phone"... what kind of fucking are you going to give me?
MR.MCCOY: Tunieee...... I Swearrrrrr.......

Logan nibbled the inside of his cheeck. He smirked heavily and raised his eyebrow.

LOGAN: What you think, darlin'?

Logan chuckled. Tuni stood up and then looked down at logan.

TUNI: Don't worry... I got this all under control.

(IN LAB)
SCOTT: See! Shes's trying to tell us that everything is under control.
MR.MCCOY: I hope so...

(IN LOGANS ROOM)
LOGAN: Who you talkin' to? Me or some guys listening in our conversation? I know yer bugged, sweety.

Tuni suddenly takes off the uniform. Luckly she had on a undershirt and boxer like underwear. Tuni then throws the uniform out the window. logans eyes get wide and shocked.

TUNI: Does it looky like I'm Buggy?

Mr. McCoy heard electrical disruption and the signal lost.

MR.MCCOY: Umm... That suit's nano-microphone technology was feeding energy from Tuni's natural electrical signals found within her nervious system. Dr. Prym And I designed it Our selfs.
SCOTT: So?
MR.MCCOY: ...The only way the signal could be lost, is if the person actually died, but the signature of her electrical nervious sysem would still give off for at least 10 minutes if not longer. this was a quick disruption. Which means... She must of...
JEAN: Oh, dear...
SCOTT: At least she she'll get the phone.
ORORO: Scott, really?!

Mr. McCoy starts out of the lab, but the combination of Jean's telekeneisus, Ororo's winds and Scotts pulling kept him there... Mostly...

MR.MCCOY: No! No, no.... I never meant for her-
JEAN: She would not do that. Even if she was... with logan... It might be too late...
MR.MCCOY: It's never too late, if you guys just let me go!
ORORO: There, there, Henry, I'll make it better... Now that Tuni is engaged to logan, what about our situalation?
TUNI: Well that was easier than I thought.
ORORO,SCOTT,MR.MCCOY: TUNI!!!!!!!!

Tuni held up the phone and waved it around. She then tossed it to Scott. Tuni was wearing a pair of pajama's Mr. McCoy had purchased for her.

MR.MCCOY: Tuni!

Mr. McCoy rushed Tuni taking a hold of her shoulders, firmly.

MR.MCCOY: Tunieee..... What happend... to the signal...
TUNI: Oh,... that...
MR.MCCOY: Did logan-
TUNI: Oh, he tried. I needed to show him that I was not bugged. So I took off the uniform.
MR.MCCOY: Oh, good, god...
TUNI: But I was wearing stuff under it. You know that! I did'nt get naked. lets just say I put him in his place. he might be a bit sore at me tomorrow.
MR. MCCOY: We will talk more tomorrow. It is late. Scott erase all that... "infomation"... can you? I would but my brain is... swimming. And I would feel better if I escorted Tuni to her bed an dlock myself away for the rest of the twlight.
SCOTT: You owe me...
Scott Starts going through logans phone. He then yells in discust.
SCOTT: Oh, God Do you owe me!
MR.MCCOY: Oh! You found it.
SCOTT: No... Not yours... a video... with him and some woman... Controband!

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MR.MCCOY: Tuni...

Tuni strightends up and retracts her hand. Mr. McCoy puts his other hand on her upper thigh. He looks up at her and sighs threw his nose.

MR.MCCOY: I get it... revenge... And don't think I did not know that you speedlingly went into my room when I was taking to Scott and Bobby. They even sensed you, and their senses are not as high as mine.`

Tuni rolls off of Mr. McCoy's belly. She lays on her back and rests her palms ontop of each other. Mr. mcCoy scoots over and turns awayr from her, resting his headon his palm.

MR.MCCOY: As if you would reay want me....

Tuni rest herself on her elbows and turns her head to Mr. McCoy in shock.

TUNI: What are you talking about?!
MR.MCCOY: Tuni, your a young attractive lady and
TUNI: And your a smart, sucessful, hansome man, that is one of the smartest people in the world! Who would'nt want you?
MR.MCCOY: Because of all of this!
Mr. McCoy turns to tuni, sitting up in bed. He graces his hand up and down his body. He then lowers his head, turning it away, resting his hands on his lap.
MR.MCCOY: At first I was soo scared. Then people actually accepted me for a while. I would go out on so many dates and paint the town red. I found out it was partically due to pherimones that i can excreet, to arose humans. So i don't know sometimes if someone really wants ME... or is just attracted to my hormones. Why would they be?
TUNI: Because of the person that you are... Een if it is your hormones, they still have to get to know you for the man that you are. Your geneious, caring, charity, engineering, bravery, strength, witty, etc, etc. I admire you. Infact was hoping to spook you. I thought you wer going to scream at me or something, but you saw through me like water.
I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings...

Tuni reaches over to hug Mr. McCoy. She wraps her arms around his shoulders then slides down, resting her head on his lap. With her arms now wrapped around his lower torso, Tuni looks forward and sighs. Her hair becoming slighty chilled and blue.

TUNI: But if anything... when you talk about yourself like that... I admire you so much... It HURTS-MY feelings.

Mr. McCoy looks down at Tuni. He sees her lightly blued hair. Mr. McCoy puts one arm around her and then pats her head with his other hand. With a slight squeeze from Mr. McCoy's arm, Tuni unraveil herself from him and from under his arm.
Tuni And Mr. McCoy look at each other. Tuni looking more intensly at Mr. McCoy. She then turns her head to his chek and gives him a kiss on the cheek.
TUNI: Goodnight Mista McCoy, Sempi.

Tuni scoots off the bed and stands. She reaches for the door. Suddenly her hand is taken away by Mr. McCoy. She turns to him. He looks at her as if pussled. Tuni Looks at him up and down and then nerviously chuckles.

TUNI: Mr. McCoy?
MR.MCCOY: You... Don't feel like you need to stay?
TUNI: Like a sleep over?! That would be SO COOL! But oh... I didn't bring my toothbrush and cleaning things, or an outfit. Then, what would the others say... I would not want to tarnish your name... But maybe tomorrow night... I'll sneak in my pillow and-
MR.MCCOY: No, no, not that... I mean... do you feel... That you might... want me...?
TUNI: I want to be around you all the time... And I hope that I can get my full memory back so that we can get even closer... scott was right... I would not want to turn into something that you might hate... But I do have some... Some type of NEED to be with you... Because I care about you as a person, a man and my best friend... Your the best and only friend that I have in the world right now.
Sure everyone one else is nice, but, our souls just click... And I enjoy time with you. And like i said it hurts my feelings when you talk like that... So around me, unless you really have something to get off your chest... don't down yourself. It really hurts...

Mr. McCoy sighs and rolls his eyes.

MR.MCCOY: Oh, Tuni...! Oh my stars and gathers...
Mr.McCoy hugs her, with a tight squeeze, then releases her. He looks down at her laying his hands on her shoulders. They search each others eyes.

MR.MCCOY: If only there were more pure hearted girls like you.
TUNI: I'm sure there are.
MR.MCCOY: May I escort you to bed?
TUNI: If you so wish.

Mr. McCoy bent his arm and looked at tuni. Tuni wraps her arms around his large muscular arm and he opens the door.

SCOTT: So I said, "what makes you think that your the team that is going to defeat them?" An- WHOA!!!

Unknown to Tuni and Mr. McCoy, Scott, Ororo, Jean and Logan were having a late night talk in the hallway.

LOGAN: I knoew it... bout' time you stuck it to 'er.

Mr. McCoy and tuni Looked at each other, then back at their associates in the hall.

MR.CCOY&TUNI: It's not what it looks like!

ORORO: What are you doing with that infant, when you have a woman like me around Henry McCoy?

JEAN: Yeah, Hanky Panky... I thought we had a secret crush on each other.

SCOTT: JEAN! WAIT! HANK! Have you been using your Goddamn hormones!

JEAN: I do feel a little strange.

ORORO: I don't.

MR.MCCOY: Oh, my stars and gathers, I knew it...

TUNI: WHAT!?!

Tuni pushes away frm him crossing her arms.

MR.MCCOY: I can explain... All of this...

Mr. McCoy explains that Tuni was trying to get revenge, how they talked about things, and that is why she was dressed the way she was. Then further explained that he wanted to test and see if Tuni was immune to his hormones.

MR.MCCOY: And it appears she is.
SCOTT: oh...
ORORO: So what does that have to do with you being with me tonight?
MR.MCCOY: Umm...

Tuni Lowered her head and went to her bedroom door. Her hair fully blue and giving off vapors. Mr. McCoy rushed over to her and took her by her shoulders.

MR.MCCOY: Tuni! Tuni, it's not what YOU think... I was not trying to... I just wanted to see if you really, truly liked me for... ALL of me...
TUNI: My word is not good enough...?
MR.MCCOY: I have just been hurt so many times, and-
TUNI: And I'm not those people!
Tuni Turns to him with flaming hair. Her hair and eyes quickly goes back to normal. Mr. McCoy lowers his arms and sighs.

TUNI: I don't even know who I'am! If I have any family... But what I do know... or thought I knew was that I could trust you... to trust me and my feelings... Because even with a empty head such as mine... I do have all of my emotions and a heart.
MR.MCCOY: I know... At least I know fully now... I'am Truly sory that I went about it in that way... Could you-

Tuni wraps her arms around Mr. McCoy. She Sniffles and sighs. Mr.McCoy looks forward in shock that she forgave him so quickly. He then gets over it and raises his arms to hug her. Mr. McCoy lowers his headinto the space inbetween her neck and shoulder. He breathes in her essance and the raises his head.
They release each other and hold both of each others hands. Mr. McCoy and Tuni look pleased with each other as they forget about the world, looking at each other.

TUNI: Goodnight, hero...
MR.MCCOY: Dito, my turtle dove... Fare-de-well.

Tuni giggles at his antidote. Mr. McCoy turns and starts to walk away. Tuni opens her beroom door, but before she could open she hears a tumble and fall. Tuni turns around and sees Mr. McCoy arising from the floor. Tuni rushes to help him, but he waves his hand and raises himself back to his feet.

MR.MCCOY: These pajama pants are too baggy! Not the first time that has hapend, my dear.
SCOTT: And not the first time THAT happen etheir, man!
MR.MCCOY: What?
LOGAN: Not a little breezy, Doc?
MR.MCCOY: What are you-

Mr.McCoy looks down at himself. He sees that the pajama's also took his underwear with them and he was standing, half nude, from the belly button, down.

MR.MCCOY: Oh, my stars and gathers!

Tuni covered her mouth with her hands and looked on wide-eyed. Mr. McCoy scurried to pull up his underwear and pants.

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Tuni nervously looked on at a ever coming closer Mr. McCoy. She wraps her arms around her elevated knees, lowering her head , behind their not-safety, and looks at him threw the tops of her eyes.
Her jaw tightends and her face turns a beet red. Tuni's hair reacts also, turning yellow with a slight electric charge. Yellow lines form in her eyes. Mr. McCoy sits beside her. His face gets close to hers. Mr. McCoy then takes her face with his hand, and lifts it toward his.
Their Faces within mere inches of each other. A insured smirk lays on Mr.McCoys face.

MR.MCCOY: Oh, do not fret, darling... I'm a doctor.
Tuni's eyes slightly gloss over. She then turns her head and sees his other hand with a light blue rubber glove on. She looks back at him. He releases he face and stands up, putting on the other glove.
MR.MCCOY: Your emotional reactions are quite interesting, my dear... Hm,,hm, you ARE going to make this interesting, aren't you?
TUNI: When did you-?
MR.MCCOY: I'm a man of many talents, dearest... And i thought you were a fan...

He says with a snap of the glove. Tuni gulps. Mr. McCoy laces his fingers and bends his palms outward, "cracking" his knuckles. He looks down at tuni, as he lowers his hands. He seems to mumble something. Mr. McCoy then turns away and goes over to the room closet, that was electronically locked, with a numeric passcode.
Typing in the numbers tuni could only wonder what was in that closet, that was so important. she soon found out as her eyes widend to something that would have Mr. McCoy questioned by the Pentagon.
The closet must of been 20 feet deep and 10 feet wide. Their were all sorts of weapons, bullet belts, armors, knifes, guns,chains, restraints, etc, so neatly arranged. And... Whips... Some unfortunately looked electricly charged.
TUNI: no...
Yes... Mr. McCoy reached for the metalic-spine looking one. But then he shook his head, with a pout and placed it back.
MR.MCCOY: No, no...
Tuni sighed in releif.
MR.MCCOY: Too, soft.

Tuni's ears Perked and her eyes and hair really went yellow. The electric charge from her was so great, that it dimmed the room for a second or two. And Mr. McCoy's secret closet. He lloked around and then quickly looked at tuni from the corner of his eye. Then Mr. McCoy went back whip hunting.
MR.MCCOY: Oh. come now, dear. Do not start without me! I thought we were friends. Tsk, tsk.
TUNI: Mista McCoy, I know that i have a bit of a way of talkin' sometimes and im sorries for that. But I promise that-is that duct tape....?
MR.MCCOY: Very good... Yes, yes it is...
TUNI: Sugar and stroke... Mr. McCoy... I swears it...
Mr. McCoy comes out of the closet. Then electronic door closes itself. He walks over to the bed and dumps all of the gatherings down. Tuni scoots away, looking down at it.

TUNI: Now Mr. mcCoy-
MR.MCCOY: Ah, ah, ah... Tut, tut, my dear. The wheel is already in motion.

Mr. McCoy retreives a blindfold from the other nightstand that he did not move. He places it on tuni. Tuni is now blind to the world. within a kind of purple darkness, the color of the cloth over her eyes. She feels his large hand against her back, with a gentle forcfulness , pushing her to lay on her belly. Tuni complies.
She then feels her arms being pulled to her back, then suddenly being binded behind her. Mr. McCoy's hands disappear from tuni's senses. Then they reappear on her ankles. Tuni now feels her feet being binded together, which is a slight sign of relief for her.
Tuni feels Mr. mccoy raise from the bed. She then hears his foot steps move close to the head of the bed. Then there is a heavy bounce on the bed close to her shoulders. Tuni hears him sigh and hum. The sound of drawers opening.
Tuni suddenly hears the crackling and pop of a whip hitting the floor. She jumps and wiggles. Her jaw tightends as she gulps.

MR. MCCOY: Now where should I start...?
TUNI: Oh, god Sempi! I Swear, I'll start better taking, -a-talking, better.
MR.MCCOY: Well, I shall make sure of that.

Mr. McCoy dropped the whip. He then quietly opened a pack of red licorice whips. Mr. McCoy could'nt help but chuckle to himself. He was going to trick her.
Mr. McCoy took a licorice whip into his mouth and held it lightly with his teeth and lips. He then twist a bunch of them together.
Tuni flet a tap behind her neck. She wiggled and pryed at the feel of the leathery whip.
MR.MCCOY: This is going to be good.

JEAN: They have been up there for a while now. Like 45 minutes or so.
LOGAN: The longer the better... She needs a good talk'n to, wit that mouth of hers an' destroy'in the academy lik' that.

Suddenly everyone hears a loud BOOM, as if a door slamming open. They jump and go to the foot of the staircase.

TUNI: LICORICE WHIPS?! WHA-
MR.MCCOY: Would you have preferred the real thing?
TUNI: OH! AHhh!
Tuni goes into her room, her hair and eyes red and hot like hot iron. So hot that a warmth is left within the hallway. Mr. McCoy shakes his head and goes down the stairs. The faculty look on at him with the highest of curiousity.
Mr.McCoy rest his elbow on the stair railing, crossing his ankles together. He then laces his fingers and smirks.

MR.MCCOY: Well i beleive that after a trial of not looking at me for several days, that her tone of language should be a bit better.
PROFESSOR: What did you do?

Tuni cools down mostly and opens her bedroom door. She puts her head out and listens in. Tuni can just see everyone at the bottom of the stairs talking. Scott and Mr. McCoy share a "high-five".

SCOTT: That'll teach her.
This gets tuni within the vengeful zone. Her eyes shine red, like a passing car light. She then calms down and closes her bedroom door.

TUNI: Two can play at that game.
The wheels start turning in tuni's head as she goes over to her wardrobe.

LATER THAT NIGHT:

The faculty finishes their nightly meeting and everyone retires to bed. Mr. McCoy talks to scott and bobby in the hallway. Their heads all turn, toward Mr. McCoy's door.

BOBBY: I thought I saw something.
SCOT: Yeah...
MR.MCCOY: Hmm........ Perhaps dust particles.

Mr. McCoy wins at them. Scott and bobby look at each other and strugg it off.
After another 20 minutes of talking, Mr. McCoy retires to his bedroom. With a wave goodnight he closes the door.

45 MINUTES LATER:

Mr. McCoy finishes his nightly washings and gets into a pair of baggy pajama's. He bouches into the empty bed and then turns to the lamp on the nightstand. Then suddenly a hand takes ahold of his wrist. Mr. McCoy hops and turns to that direction and sees shimmering, honey colored eyes and brown freckles stairing back at him.
Mr. McCoy sighs and relaxes as he lays on his back.

TUNI: Good evenling, Mr. McCoy...
MR.MCCOY: Indeed...

Tuni chuckles. She then takes the thing blanket and pulls it off the bed, completely, throwing it on the floor. Tuni reveals a silken, sky blue teddy-nightgown, with a very transparent, long robe.
MR.MCCOY: So we are modeling for Victoria's Secret now, my dear?
TUNI: Oh don't be so "coy" Mr. McCoy. We are both adults. the chasing me around. Closeness. Lunch dates...

Tuni hops onto his belly. Mr. McCoy grunts slightly then chuckles in humor. He then reaches behind her, and laces his fingers together, resting them just below his abdomin. Tuni slightly leans forward, with a devilish smile. She raises a hand toward his face as the other rest on his firm, muscular chest.
Mr. McCoy sighs and then turns his head away. He looses his hands, putting one on tuni'supper hip and the other takes the hand that was reaching for him. he then looks up at her and softly shakes his head.

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Scott Summers walks away with his head down. He kicks his foot slightly a few times while walking down the hall.

Later that evenling, everyone as in the lounge after dinner. Tuni, as usual was sitting all over Mr. McCoy. Everyone else had gotten used to this extra attension that tuni as giving to Mr. McCoy. everyone except Scott. Scott as sitting on the same couch as tuni and Mr. McCoy. But at the far end. He just did not like the openess that Mr. McCoy as giving her. And said so... again.

SCOTT: You still did not answer me, hank.
MR.MCCOY: About what, scott?
SCOTT: About you and tuni still being so chubby after she gets her memory back.
MR.MCCOY: Scott listen...
TUNI: Are you afraid of me, scott?

The rest of the room gets okwardly quiet. They glance over to tuni. Scott lowers his head and crosses his arms. He then popped his head up and as about to anser her, with a dry mouth. Tuni suddenly interupts him;

TUNI: Because I'm afraid.

Tuni shocks the entire room. Or makes it even more okward. Scott slightly froze and was suprized by her response. His head lowerd humbly and his lips let go a soft breath. Scott turned his head away, slightly bending his neck.
Mr. McCoy rubs tuni's back. Her hair turns slightly blue and blue lines streak within her eyes, but the honey color is still strong. Tuni sighs and lowers her head on the top of Mr. McCoy's head.
Mr. McCoy raises his hand to her shoulder and lightly rubs it. His jaw tihtend as he glanced at tuni, threw the tops of his eyes. then Mr. McCoy sharply turned his gaze to scott. Scott flet the stare like ice in his brain. Mr. McCoy slightly frowed at him, with a head turn of dissaproval.
Tuni sighed and then raised her head. She then arose from Mr. McCoy and sat next to scott. Scott turned his head and was starteld to see tuni very close to him. Scott sighs and gives her his attension.
Tuni looks down at scotts arms. Still folded. She lightly put a hand on his arm crossed ontop of the other. Her head and eyes raised toward him like sunflowers leaning to the sun. Tuni's head and eyes froze still when her eyes met his vizor. She could just see his bright pupils. His blinking was almost moris code.

TUNI: It is alright scott. You are just being a good leader. I admire that and you have bravery to tell the truth. And to help your friend. But trust me... All of you have become my friends. And if i feel the slightest bit of evil or malice, i ill dart off or lock myself up so tight i would make a chasity belt look like noodle soup.

Scott sighs. His arms loosen. Scott, puts his hands on his lap. Tuni pats his hand and then laces her fingers, putting them on her lap.

TUNI: I would never... hurt... any of you... I promise. In fact I give you!... Special permission to blast me into the next life time before that happends.

SCOTT: Deal?

Tuni is slightly supriseed at his willingness, but then chuckles. Her eyes dart aay from him as a closed mouth smile raises her freckles. Tuni makes visor to eye contact ith scott again. She extends her hand toard him.
Scott looks down at tuni's hand and then back at her face. He takes her one hand into both of his, shaking it vigoriuosly. After a good 5 or 6 shakes he lets go. Tuni brushes strands of hair back to her scalp with her fingers. Mr. McCoy intervenes and scoots close to tuni. He drops a arm around her and rubs her shoulder and upper arm.
Mr. McCoy slightly rocks from side to side, as he crosses his legs and looks over to scott with a stone-sturn face.

SCOTT: Lets keep tuni for as long as she needs to. In fact we have so many chores and other hat-nots that need done, and that room is;nt going anywhere... She can just call this home.
MR.MCCOY: Oh I bet.
SCOTT: What? We-
MR.MCCOY: Target practice?
SCOTT: Hank... we just talked...
MR.MCCOY: Alright, alright... I won't shake-iff the boat. I guess that is the best we are going to get, dearest.
TUNI: No one is perfect like you, Mr. McCoy.
MR.MCCOY: Tuni... we have been over this... I have-
TUNI: You have been so good and pacient ith me.
SCOTT: Too dammed pacient-
Mr. McCoy sighs, closing his eyes. He pinches the brigde of his nose with his free hand, as his head lowerd close to his chest.

MR.MCCOY: Scott-
TUNI: Your as pure, as the wind driven snow...
MR.MCCOY: ...tuni...
TUNI: I bet that if you were in the snow it would be jealous and stop.

Mr. McCoy seemed slightly perturbed at her comment about him. His head turned to her. Mr. McCoy tapped his fingers on the armrest of the couch. He then started tapping the fingers from his other hand on tuni's shoulder. this made tuni giggle. She takes his fingers and holds them with her hand, while her other hand pats his lap and then rest there.
MR.MCCOY: As pure, as the ind driven snow?
TUNI: I mean this guy had me alone tied up in a bedroom and didnt even look at the lable of my shirt, none less rip it off... unfortunately-
MR.MCCOY: WHAT?!

TUNI: I trust you with my life Mr. McCoy
MR.MCCOY: As if i do not have a strict bone within my body....
TUNI: Strict? HA! But the math was scary... please... no more...
MR.MCCOY: We will see about that!
TUNI: Dammit! I gain one friend and lose my BEST friend. At least Scotty Dog does not think I'm from satans, bubbling-scrotum, anymore.
MR.MCCOY: Tuniiieeeeeeee.........
Mr. McCoy put his head down, his head leaned forward and took in a heavy sigh. His hand that was not around tuni met his face, wiping it, then the fingers pinching the brigde of his nose. Mr. McCoy was left with a agape mouth as he rested his elbow on his twiching knee.
PROFESSOR: Good, god!
SCOTT: I never said that!
MR.MCCOY: I know... I know...

Mr. McCoy quickly raised his head and looked at tuni. He rested his forearm on the twiching bouching leg. He looked on at tuni, with tounge in cheek. Tuni gives hima huge smirk. His face turns to stone. Tuni's smirk begins to diminish...
MR.MCCOY: As pure as the wind driven snow? Well, young lady, I think it tis' right time to show you the much needed disapline that everyone is hounding me to preform onto you. And trust me... I will make your mathmatics Phobia seem like a sail in a lake.

Tuni looks on as Mr. McCoy stands to his feet. He suddenly takes her by her upper arms, and then puts her over his right shoulder. Startled, but too avidly-humored to say anything she just looks to the floor, with a few grunts.
Mr. McCoy starts toward the stairs. He then stops at about two or three steps upward. He then turns his head to the side, facing away from tuni.

MR.MCCOY: If you hear any load movement, screaming, thrashing about or fureniture moving, please, do not come upstairs into my chambers.
SCOTT: Wait, hank!
TUNI: Oh, god, please don't suggest whips...
SCOTT: No, umm... hank... She was Nice tonight... So take it easy on her, huh?
MR.MCCOY: I'll see what i can do. oh, and tuni... Good idea of the whips.
TUNI: what...?
Mr. McCoy starts upstairs again.
MR.MCCOY: I just happen to have some...
LOGAN: MAKE HER SCREAM, BUB!

Everyone looks at logan in a slight, but not suprising, shock. He looks around at the disaproving crowd.
LOGAN: What...?
They Just all sigh and shake their heads in their individual matters.

Tuni And Mr. McCoy make it to HIS bedroom. Tuni Has not been in his bedroom since she accidently got lost on her first day n the mansion. Mr.McCoy closes the door with his foot and rolls tuni off his shoulder onto his bed.
She lands with a grunt and "oofh". Tuni Quckly sits up scurringing to the bed post, with her knees to her chin. Mr. McCoy, in his special way, starts whisling "Singing in the rain". He then starts pushing around things in his room
Mr. McCoy put the dresser and night stand against the door.
TUNI: Um... Mr. McCoy...?
Then moves his large wardrobe infront of the window.
TUNI: Why... are, you....
And Finally the other night stand pushed against the bathroom door.
TUNI: Oh, cheese and republicans ruling the senate....

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CHAOTIC KITTEN 3:

AS PURE AS THE WIND DRIVEN SNOW

AN X-MEN/MARVEL FAN FICTION BY TUNI PEACE.

Tuni always admired her hero, Mr. McCoy. But she also wonderd WHY he was so nice. She knew that it was easier to be nice and get along with others than just to be rude and put up some front of toughness. But going back to when she blew up the lab a few weeks ago... was there ANYTHING... ANYTHING... that was really bad about him?

Tuni sat in Mr. McCoy's favorite recliner, within the lounge. If it was called sitting. Her back laying on the seat and feet pointing upward towad the ceiling, as her legs rested on the back support of the wide chair.

He would always give to charities. Dress up as Santa Cluas for christmas, and has a great humorist.

TUNI: He has been so nice to me... even after blowing up the lab, and temporaringly making scott go crazy. I don't want to break him, but it is really a virtue that he is so upstanding...

Just then Scott Summers and Mr. McCoy come walking into the lounge. Mr. McCoy was on the cellphone and scott was trying his best to hold in laughter. Tuni arose from Mr. McCoys lounger. He almost did not notice tuni standing to the side of the lounger, as he went right into sitting in it.

MR.MCCOY: But Reed I'm telling you... Look just hear me out... Well... Yes! Look! Look, how long have we known each other? I know... And I'am not?... Just one trip! For at least an hour or so... No, wait... Hello?... Hellooooow...? CONFOUNDED!

Tuni wraped her arms around Mr. McCoy and sat on his lap. His head was turned away from her, resting on his closed hand, with repaired blackberry within it, in treat of being crushed again. He sighed and then put the phone into his pants pocket.
Mr. Mccoys arm slowly went around tuni's shoulders. Tuni then gave him a kiss on the cheek. He rubbed her shoulder and sighed, still looking away and bent away from her.

SCOTT: So no go with Reed, huh, hank?
MR. MCCOY: You should of heard what he was saying to me! "Maybe you should take a vacation, or think about your retirement".
SCOTT: OH, GOD!!!

Scott bursted out laughing, he was sitting on the couch facing away from the recliner. tuni lloked at Mr. McCoy, then at scott, then at Mr.McCoy again. Mr. McCoy now tapping his fingers on the armrest of the lounger looked on at the back of scott's head moving in various directions of laughter.

SCOTT: What did black panther say?
MR.MCCOY: "Maybe that explosion blew away some of your brains" And "If you want to do that, then you should buy one".

Scott went into a laughing fit again. Tuni could not hide her curiousity any more. She looked on at scott and asked Mr. McCoy what was going on. Mr. McCoy strightend up and looked on at tuni, with slightly widend eyes. His face then relaxed as he put his other arm around her and looked at her with a loose jaw, slightly biting the insides of both his cheeks.
TUNI: Well...?
MR.MCCOY: Oh, my stars and garthers... So what have we been upto, my dear? Any evil or chaoticness?
TUNI: I'm working on it.
MR. MCCOY: Good to hear.

Scott turned to the both of them, like a record on a turn table. He then stood up and went over to the happy couple.

SCOTT: Do you give this girl any disapline at all, hank?
MR. MCCOY: Scott-
SCOTT: And I know that she is a grown woman, but you baby her! "what kind of evil" How about boot camp!
TUNI: Scott, dont be a speckled richard.
SCOTT: You mean the english pudding? It is called speckled dick!
TUNI: well you said it...!

Tuni chuckles, raising her fingers folded over her palm. She looked at them with lowerd browns as her other arm crossed her torso. Mr. McCoy sighed and rolled his eyes, awaiting a boxing match of words. Mr. McCoy gently shook tuni in his arm, then rubbing her shoulder.

SCOTT: You little, hell cat! What part of hades are you from?
TUNI: Legion 667 of the West River Sixx District, and we "FUNK"-ING, RULE!
SCOTT: Your just going to let her talk to me like that?!

MR.MCCOY: Now tuni, try to have some respect for our senior faculty.
TUNI: Alright, I'm sorry... Sorry that your an interloper that does'nt want me to breath two steps of personality!
MR.MCCOY: Tuniieee....
TUNI: Scott I do respect you, but you just seem to jump all over me like a frog on another, during mating season.
SCOTT: It is because I feel that you are getting away with alot of stuff that everyone is just letting flying over their heads.
Tuni looks down and away sadly... Tuni arises from Mr. McCy's lap. She then walks away, with her head lowerd and fingers laced together, infront of her. Mr. McCoy looks on at her with some concern.
Mr. McCoy arises from the chair and looks on at her. He then sighs and turns his head to scott.
MR.MCCOY: You still do not trust her...?
SCOTT: No... She's not a spy... But I do think that she does have some kind of brain damage... And your not helping, man!
MR. MCCOY: I'am helping more than you think I'am, dear chap. Who is the doctor? And she really does like you.
SCOTT: Likes me so much that she goves my gift away-
MR.MCCOY: TO-an-kindergarden class, scott... You should be proud...
SCOTT: Look buddy-

Scott pulls Mr. McCoy to the side, away from tuni. He then looks over his shoulder toward tuni, whom was standing in the corner, next to the recliner. Scott crosses his arms again and looks intoMr. McCoy's eyes. Mr. mcCoy makes a soft sigh and holds his hands together infront of him, like a prisoner in a trial.
SCOTT: You have a very soft heart buddy... But... We just do not know much about her yet. Your memory machine can only be used on her twice a month, and then she only has about 35 percent of her memory.
MR.MCCOY: Your point?
SCOTT: What if she changes? What f this girl-young woman that you Re making such GOOD friends with, is not the same after she gets her whole memories...

Mr, Mccoy rolls his eyes and turns away from scott. Mr. McCoy traces his mouth with his fingers, pausing them under his lips. His eyes dart around with a slightly elevated brow, but lowerd eyelids. Scott nods his head and sighs.
Scott then pats Mr. McCoy on the back and then looks on at tuni. Scott leaves the lounge in utter confidence that Mr. McCoy will now be more caucious about tuni for now on.
Mr. McCoy sits back into the lounger. He turns his head to tuni. She heard him sit down. Mr. McCoy clears his troat, getting tuni's attension. She slightly turns her head to him. Then within sight-shot, Mr. McCoy pats his lap, as if calling a cat to jump on it. Tuni turns her head more. Her fingers still laced, tuni looks at Mr. Mccoy up and down.
Mr. McCoy smirks, almost smiling as he pats his lap again. Tuni lightly smiles. She lands on his lap, shifting and making herself at home. Tuni then wraps her arms around his shoulders.

MR.MCCOY: Do not mind him... he is just concerned about me.
TUNI: Hmpth! Some concern! He was laughing at you! I did not like that.
MR. MCCOY: Well... I do not blame him there...
TUNI: But why? I-
MR.MCCOY: He was laughing at me, making phone calls to all of my scientific friends and colleages. I was asking them for a favor.
TUNI: SO?!
MR.MCCOY: oh, my stars and garthers... A collabritive shopping outting, to Toys"r"us.
TUNI: What?!

MR.MCCOY: I was so impressed by your science experiment, that i wanted to run some "Maguiver" such explots to the products of the store.
TUNI: Golly, and they all said no?
MR.MCCOY: (SIGH). Yes...
Tuni hugs Mr. McCoy sligthtly tighter, and rest her head on his shoulder. Mr. McCoy wraps his arms. He then rest her head on hers.

TUNI: And scott can be concerned without being such a butt pill.
MR.MCCOY: (SIGH) Basically a pain in the arse, huh? Or Placebo, as we doctors like to call it.
TUNI: Yeah thats the one...

Mr. McCoy and tuni laugh. Scott hears them going on with each other in the living room. He shakes his head and sighs.
SCOTT: Don't go don the rabbit hole friend... there might be a snake...

Response to: Latest from your Favorites Posted May 12th, 2012 in NG News

thats good, now i can just pop in and see my fav artist without swimmg threw the river of newgrounds... I like the cut of your jim.

Response to: Writing Forum Lounge Posted May 11th, 2012 in Writing

At 5/10/12 09:41 PM, warror wrote: i know that this is usually a writing forum, but as you know i said i also do art work from time to time...

well i just went to deviant art and did a sucky muro and freehanded tuni and hank with my laptop mouse... its the best i coud do with my touch mouse... i'll try to scan in the future..

and im about 30 percent done with chapter 3....

finally........ sigh.... i present tuni chaotica peace...

you might have to zoom in for better features.

Writing Forum Lounge

my tuni preview Posted May 10th, 2012 in Art

if youhave been following my sub-par fan fic then you know about tuni and hank

i did a quick muro on deviant art with my laptop touch mouse..... it was the best i could do with the type of mouse i havve soo.... dont be too mean... im meaner to myself... but i guess that is what i get for posting it.

my tuni preview

Response to: Writing Forum Lounge Posted May 10th, 2012 in Writing

i know that this is usually a writing forum, but as you know i said i also do art work from time to time...

well i just went to deviant art and did a sucky muro and freehanded tuni and hank with my laptop mouse... its the best i coud do with my touch mouse... i'll try to scan in the future..

and im about 30 percent done with chapter 3....

Writing Forum Lounge

Response to: Writing Forum Lounge Posted May 3rd, 2012 in Writing

At 4/26/12 11:49 AM, warror wrote: chaotic kitten 3 : I'm s

Coming to a forum near you! MAY 2012.

Check your local listings.....

i messed up on my own fan fiction!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

the other title is

"as pure as the wind driven snow" I'm smart too was the latest one....
and i'll try to post t as ap but i just moved, but it WILL come this month...

logan gets real pissed...

Response to: Writing Forum Lounge Posted April 26th, 2012 in Writing

chaotic kitten 3 : I'm smart too!!!

Coming to a forum near you! MAY 2012.

Check your local listings.....

Response to: Writing Forum Lounge Posted April 17th, 2012 in Writing

how many fan fiction writers do we have out there?

i just wanted to do fan fiction because i enjoyed a certain story and the characters in the sotry. basically a fan.

i do my own original stories also, but they tend to be more serieous, and new grounds has always been a place of fun for me.

i heard of something called cupcakes. some fan fic about the my little ponies and it just seemed to blow up. and it is down right gory. nothing wrong with that i just did not know there would be such a big fan base for turning a childrens story gory.

i guess its because it was so innocient or something which is funny.

but we could do that to any other story, which we probably have. Like hello kitty, hamtaro, seseme street(which has been done millions of times), etc.

i only make fun because i love. it sounds werid doesnt it? i guess it is just because sometimes i feel that i can make a better life for some of the characters then the original writers like a MISERY thing "oh why did you kill her" or total hell for others.

Response to: Sherbert, 2000-2012 Posted April 17th, 2012 in NG News

is everyone dropping dead?

edd will give sherbert coke to drink...

Response to: Writing Forum Lounge Posted April 5th, 2012 in Writing

well i just got finished with thhe other chaotic kitten, and you can look at it is you wanna. But i was thinking you know. Writing is half of what goes into flash.

Lol i messed up and tried to post my story as a project and now i dont know how to erase it from the project system... I think i might leave it as a badge of honour.

I was up until 5 30 this morning finishing it today. My huband was like "come to bed, come to bed" and I was like "no, no, I'm almost finished...."

And almost finished turned into 3 more hours and then 5 30 in the morning.

I cant be the only one to have ever done that.... hopefully.

Response to: Writing Review Request Thread Posted April 5th, 2012 in Writing

CHAOTIC KITTEN CAPTER#2!!!

"I'M SMART TOO!!!"

Well I just got finish with the second installment. Just yesterday up until this morning 5:30 or so to be exact copying the notes from my note book to my word pad, then.... (pant) copy and pasting the whole thing just a moment ago.

Give it a review! Read to your heart content! ....Please?

Thank you guys!!!

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