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Response to: Need critique on a game's narrative Posted July 8th, 2014 in Writing

Thanks a lot! Appreciate the feedback :)

As you can see, we're trying to experiment with methods of storytelling with Petite. And we've tried to create a calm and soothing atmosphere within the game, so the players can sorta relax and go through the game at a leisurely pace.

This is also my first time writing for a "published" project so to speak ^^;

I'm trying to get as much feedback from the community as I can right now. Hopefully, we'll be able to launch a completed product soon enough.

Do rate the game and drop a comment if you can. And share the game around a little maybe? :P

Response to: [help] 2d Psychological Horror Game Posted July 1st, 2014 in Collaboration

Hi there!

I'd like to apply for the writer's position if it's available. How do I qualify?

Need critique on a game's narrative Posted July 1st, 2014 in Writing

Hi all!

Newbie here. Been browsing on NG for a whole now. Finally decided to become a member :P

I'm currently working on a game called "Petite", which is a narrative driven game. Link: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/641650

This is the first time I've written anything for a game, let alone a story-dependent game. I'd like to hear some critique on it. The game's still in beta, so there's still time to improve on it if possible.

Thanks for your time ^_^

Need critique on a game's narrative