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At 4/24/07 07:14 AM, crazerfish50 wrote: HEY! why is uri-may so freakin mean!

crazerfish
if u wanna narrate the story.. i'm not saying you gotta be good at art but...

it wouldn't kill you to at least put some effort into a decent Background, a blank BG ruins the setting -_-; Even a solid color of dark blue would retain the setting

in other matters..

dunce.. -_-;
It's a circle and a box..... not like it's some complex character to copy from here -_-; lots of flashes have a circle and box character.. -_-; Most here can agree that Orochimaru suceeded in making his character original, plus the little side story of the guy is pretty funny "comic relief". So they both have a blue head..not a big deal, please be mature about this and not post off topic posts in here about how much of an asshole you think someone is.

katfleas
We left the randomness of Candy Corn Island... If you've been reading along, what we've recently done you'll notice we now have re-established a structured storyline.

Also if you start from the middle of page 27 and read to this point you'll understand everything.. because.. i'm too lazy to type what happened -_-;

having said all that..

Hey vortex00, why don't you draw my guy in this, Jurso? please do

Right before Sui-May goes to help the others train.. Jurso asks for a Jacket

the story continues...

a bit later..

meanwhile while out heroes are goofing off.......

A twisted plot is starting to unfold!

At 4/24/07 12:34 AM, Puppet-Lord wrote: Vortex Does This Happen Before Or After My Post

After! The Ninja Assasin is viewed as an enemy to them, because he is snooping around in the shadows. They have many poeple in the organization with all kinds of jackets. Trying to hide (right next to the base I might add) is not a good idea >.>

and imma repost if for this page, cause somepeople are lazy to go back and read the previous pages (yes more than one)

At 4/23/07 11:19 PM, dalmo wrote: This is a face i drew took about 12minutes think i have any potential in drawing good?

why would you post something you only took 12 min on and ask if you have potential? in an art community.. what were you expecting? -_-;

actually take some time and do something, then come back and ask that question.

If you are a human being capable of learning, you have potential just like anyone else XD

Okay later then guys i'll go to then

but one more to think on >:)

Tricked! what the ninja assasin thought to be the blue haired man! instantly morphed into 3 members of the organization! Versus the awesome fury of the jackets what will he do now?! Will his ninjutsu be able to save him?! Any mistake can be costly! Can these dark warriors really be allies?

the story continues...

The mysteriouslong blue haired man reveals three peices of dark fabric. the coveted jackets!
the explain each one in detail. Now who will bear what jacket?

the story continues...

Who is this mysterious man? does he really have this much power!? How can a ally be this powerful?! Can Roi and Sui-Mays organization be trusted?

The story continues!

At 4/23/07 11:23 PM, Puppet-Lord wrote: Wait A Minute...

Frozen! what does this mean!?

The group finally reaches the secret base!

The hideout for the most leet people in the galaxy due to thier strange factory where mysterious dark jackets are produced.. from the corpses of dead powerful aliens they defeat in battle. A mysterious man approaches the group, his eyes glowing with cold fury, but he only sees 2 familiar faces that is the face or Roi ans Sui-May

The stroy continues!!

At 4/23/07 10:39 PM, SUPADUDE111 wrote:

At 4/23/07 10:36 PM, Puppet-Lord wrote: Hey Wait A Minute Weren't We On Page 29? Did Anyone Else Notice That

I think we were...weird. Anyway, what do you, Puppet-Lord, and Vortex00 draw your scenes with? MS Paint is just too annoying to work with, thats why i stopped for a bit...

I use Photoshop7 100% when I feel like drawing something kinda good..

but mostly i'll draw the line art in paint then color in photoshop

At 4/23/07 10:32 PM, Puppet-Lord wrote: Maybe If you Give Zek A Cool Jacket It Will Reverse The Effects?

Sui-May reminds Zek..

Roi had to bring Sui-May her jacket remember? and then gave the last one he had to SnakeSkull XD..

The heroes approach closer to the base all with hope of getting new jackets. But will they make it there unchallenged?

the story continues....

At 4/23/07 10:17 PM, orochimaru556 wrote: Hee hee dunce, let's see who the fag is when i submit flash using this character against you and the SS...because I have flash and you suxors because you don't have skillz....lolol sorry but i just really like your character...

Guys this isnt the thread to argue about petty stuff as this. post that stuff somewhere else!! or leave!

(though I would be equally pissed if some one copied my character exactly >.>)

orochimaru556 it wouldn't kill you to change something, i mean you copied the color and everything down to the line -_-;
Dunce had the char already, plus he's been here a while.

in my point of view you (orochimaru) kinda showed up and started causing off topic trouble. the kind that get threads locked -_-;

I wouldn't kill you to change the color or something to make him your own character...

At 4/23/07 10:08 PM, Puppet-Lord wrote: I Think Zek's Changing Too

Sui-May laughs at Zek

At 4/23/07 09:44 PM, the-dunce wrote:

At 4/23/07 09:40 PM, orochimaru556 wrote: NOOOO GAAHHH!!

But ive gotten so into this character...can i keep him?

Get. Your. Own. God. Damn. Fucking. Character. You. Fucking. Retarded. Shit. Head.

XD ... lol...
-_-;

anyways..

Snakeskull starts growing in size and Power, Roi seems not worried at all of the Large demon that once was SnakeSkull thats gaining power behind our heroes!

What's Roi really planning?

the story continues...

At 4/23/07 09:09 PM, crazerfish50 wrote: Okay Vortex00, I gotta leave. Stop the story untill somewhere around 2:00 pm tommorow, then well continue. Okay?

It's not up to me when to start stop.. lots of things happen while i'm aways too. I just help cut out the random stuff that ruins threads.

so having said that........

Sui-May offers Zek something unusual to eat lol

At 4/23/07 08:57 PM, Puppet-Lord wrote:

At 4/23/07 08:53 PM, orochimaru556 wrote: It's the new action packed adventures of THAT GUY!!!

Utilizing real world physics and a twig, he can defeat any foe, I MOTHERFUCKING GARUNTEE IT!!!!

AND he is the main character!!

BOOYAH bitches..

Hey This Isn't Mother Fucking "That Guy Show" Its "Story Art" So Please Stick To The Story Line ALL OF YOU Or Leave. Not Trying To Be Mean But Please Stick To The story

I agree 100%. Add something useful to the story without some radical change please. If you character is L33T please explain how/why (as I have done many times -_-;)

At 4/23/07 08:51 PM, SUPADUDE111 wrote:

At 4/23/07 08:46 PM, Vortex00 wrote: The team travels on in the dark streets unaware of the lurking danger

yes, for that lurking danger is the Assassin Ninja Man!

An Assasin Ninja Man lurking about but the suddenly!...

At 4/23/07 08:32 PM, crazerfish50 wrote: Oh yeah, again

The team travels on in the dark streets unaware of the lurking danger

At 4/23/07 08:15 PM, SUPADUDE111 wrote: Die you weird thing! Ultimate Mushroom uses telepathy to dsconnect the things head from its body! HAHAHA! Ultimate Mushroom is the new villian, bent on controling the world. And he has studied many attacks, protecting him from some simple and complex shots at him!

Go right ahead he can take over kooky Candy Corn Banana World LOL! theres so much madness and chaos there he'd fit right in XD

The team walks through the dark streets towards the hidden base

A lil bit later.....

The arrive on planet Rella! but something isnt quite right... what's really going on the the sahdowy streets of Darklight CIty?

The story continues....

Ok lets go! we need to find The Evil doctor Orange anyways! But first lets head to the Organization for more trainning.

At 4/23/07 07:33 PM, TheSnakeSkull wrote: Damian took care of him,.

Just to be sure >.>

oh yeah and the guy flicking the big guy off....

-his left arm is way longer than his right arm -_-;

At 4/23/07 07:21 PM, ALBQjew wrote: yeah im kind of sorry I didn't say my style, skipped my mind thats all, my style is normaly with lage eyes and head but a body that kind of balances it, I guess you could say its like metalmavrick but the eyes and body arn't extermely out of porportion and I am almost done coloring this so I might submit a colored picture today, I was a bit shaky when I was drawing this (it was 12:30 p.m. so I was around falling asleep). Thanks for the tips but the guy on the right has to have wide shoulders to identify aspects of muscularity.

See what I'm saying? based on what you said.. this is exactly how you wanted it to look. And if that is the case, then why rate it?

Critique it? Okay.

-The street dashes need to be straight
-The guy with the big arms glasses are un-even
-The trash can is pushed up too close up on the wall
-Graffiti will look better if done in the coloring phase with out making a black outline around it

Just sit back and look at it. or sleeep the look at it again when you wake up ( basically when you're fresh) and you will see all these little errors easily.

Keep it up tho, the style is your artworks "look"

quit making Sui-May look all "timid" and crap

She has a shadow alien bread insider her, that murdered its entire planet, and absorbed all the light from the nearby Galaxy to live in psycotic state of darkness for thousands of years.

Some little yellow men wont scare her LOL

PLus if you catch up from previous posts weve already pwned Millions of robots already. this battle is just a warm up for the heroes.

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Sui-May speaks to SnakeSkull and Roi

OMFG Rage!!!!!!!!!!!!
Some little alien man falls for the common idea that Sui-May is human!

And pays the price.

Sui-May is a shadow