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At 4/25/07 12:21 AM, SUPADUDE111 wrote: Sleep time!

Indeed it is.. cya i'm out too

(hopefully we can come back and the thread wont be locked from Gonzossm posting all this retarted crap >.>; )

At 4/24/07 09:19 PM, PincushionQueen wrote:

At 4/23/07 04:56 PM, Vortex00 wrote: This art is something I created in 3D studio max 7

i really like her hair, but the eyeliner looks really fucked up. judging by your drawings, you check out a lot of girls, so look at something other than their chests for once and you might notice that no one puts on their makeup all the way around their eyes like that. also, the lips look a bit swollen and undefined.
Other than that, nice work, especially the second pic, i like the expression on her face.

you draw too many chicks tho, you horny bastard :P :P

thanks for the comments!

so look at something other than their chests for once

rawr? Yeah I realize the eye liner is messed up quite a bit, actually I think i'll fix this in the near future. I focus on the face the most (or at least I try to >.>;) Believe me when I say I feel like the face is always the most important part.

you draw too many chicks tho, you horny bastard :P :P

geez -_-; quick to jump to conclusions are we? ... >.>;

The samuri warrior Mystic Salami

are you serious? someone save teh Salami?

Well, its only temporary...so that he would not have to worry about getting mauled by some annoying thing while he is discusing the matters of his peace and surrender...

and they (death hungry shadows) will listen to you after you stole such a "precious" item from them? lol -_-;

From now on guys, it would help to check your PMs. Just incae of updates or something that is involving the story. It would help everything along...

this isnt a bad iead but i'm too lazy to add everyone XD

random note: it takes me a while to draw stuff -_-;
(if you havent noticed) (its cause i'm multitasking sry XD )

and i'll check it

Sui-May only watches, thinking as the battle unfolds, watching the (badass) fight for the side of good.

Retunring to the factory, the Ninja and Zombie Marshmallow are protected by the Amulet of Light, casting away all darkness near them, protecting them from the shadow beingins. With his newfound power, he is also able to stop any attacks directed at him during this time, allowing him to talk in peace...

dismissing all attacks towards you by making up items, is the randomness im talking about.. and i say that only because why direct story for us if you are just gonna avoid it yourself by making up random stuff and not interact with whats going on like we have to?

i realize your are adding to the plot and..
im not trying to be an ass but... just think about it

having said that..

Apathy is death >.>

If he exists anywhere they will be there

PS: they grow in power too >.> ^.^ <.< v.v;

Sui-May on the way to find the theif, hears rustling in a nearby bush >.>

SUPADUDE111: Being totaly gone makes no sense at all. thats why I made it where the ninja Man stole fake jewels..
(see the above posts with the blue haired guy [note: plot twist was here!] the guy still has them)

If you going to set events in motion that "large" you need to finish them.. ugh.. -_-;

As of now he is gone with fake jewels. he better come back and fight if he wants the real ones :P these shadow guys arent retards that can be fooled with tricks, you belittle them greatly -_-; there not even put into the story to fight anyone, just to be a sign of hope that the heroes have powerful yet mysterious allies -_-;

also the shadows will follow him forever just like he is gone, even when you decide he's gonna come back they are gonna be right on his ass XD

they are shadows no sleep no eating just pursuit.

About photoshop: I'd help ya if I could XD .. PM me

Sui-May rushes off to get the jewels she is curiously drawn to like a magnet.

But where is Roi?

The story unfolds...

The shadow assasins spawn out of ninja man's own shadow and the darkness around him and have surrounded him.

Can Ninja man truly escape when he is always bound to have a shadow? and on a world of darkness? in a universe of darkness? one last chance he has for peace!

The story continues!

note:
there are easier ways to imform them rather than blowing up their factory and robbing from them geez.. >.>; They see you as a theif not some saint trying to to good, to them you are Evil, because you approached them with crime.

At 4/24/07 09:09 PM, SUPADUDE111 wrote:

At 4/24/07 09:04 PM, Vortex00 wrote:

Hoping that the others will find this too, he starts calling for them to come and make peace with him.

uhhh... XD

But he wants to be friends, he WOULD be a great help...with his excellent sneaking abiltiies...

The Shadows close in on Ninja man! They have orders to attack on sight!

Spotted!! A theif!!! How will Ninja Man convince the assains towards peace when he is only seconds away from certain death?!

The story continues!!!!

(getting interesting ^^)

Hoping that the others will find this too, he starts calling for them to come and make peace with him.

uhhh... XD

*please note the scenery ^^: It's a CIty that's in eternal night, theres no grass/dirt in this city. and the buildingas are obscured, tiny lights cab be seen from buildings in the beckground*

Dun Dun Duuuun!!!!

LOL, Jurso looks like you got trouble commin >.>

And.. so does Ninja Man :P

yeah the factory is for the least amount of effort black not grey XD

At 4/24/07 08:26 PM, SUPADUDE111 wrote: Guys, just here to say that i will post here again around 9. gonna be buzy for a bit. also, in an earlier post, soemeon said that the factory is good. but that has nothing to do with what the ninja is doing, you have to wait and see what is going on for its true actions to unfold...

No SUPADUDE111 what I was trying to say was ... there's now way ninja man can be walking around planting bombs that no one knows about when 3 guys have been hovering above his head (for the past 2 or 3 pages) about to kill him!

Here i'll post the pic again for the fourth time -_-;

He has lots of fun dragging it off and sneaking it past inspections...(he bribes the female guard with yaoi) and quickly makes his way back to the place in which the other allies against Dr. Orange are..

LOL

okay, sorry. I'll show self control. Tell me, are you working on the next picture?

not yet, I gotta do some RL stuff (but soon)

But i'll leave you with this

At 4/24/07 07:52 PM, crazerfish50 wrote: he denies it.

as I have said earlier:

don't add dialogue ot other people characters ( especially mine >.>; ). I know you want to progress the stoty but you gotta wait till-

"that person responds for their own character"

It is a simple concept you should follow, its not that hard. just takes some selfcontrol.

and geez it.. SUI-MAY not uri-may -_-;

At 4/24/07 07:38 PM, crazerfish50 wrote: he's interogated!

I've noticed every time you post you quadruple post... try not to do this or even triple post..

I may triple post sometimes but its usually when lots of people are active at that time or I'm trying to explain something.

This is a story controlled by "everyone" not one person

I know they don't post as often as you'd like but you just gotta wait till they post something.

Get off the "dective" routine;

No one is trying to kill anyone.. Espicially not Roi and the Blue haired guy -_-; I think you misunderstood what the previous events meant. Just because he said to Roi about how something will bring about Sui-Mays death dosen't mean he is gonna kill her.

it might, it might not

please note while you are putting my character in scenes:

-Roi isn't as nice as Sui-May he'll prolly end up killing you :P

i'll brb in like 30 2 1 hr

At 4/24/07 06:06 PM, the-dunce wrote:

At 4/24/07 05:52 PM, crazerfish50 wrote: hey vortex00 let's continue the story. does she beleive me!

You two aren't the only characters in the story you know. I wanna be in :(

Just start adding stuff then!

; Maybe like getting Jurso outta Sui-Mays face >.>;

At 4/24/07 05:52 PM, crazerfish50 wrote: hey vortex00 let's continue the story. does she beleive me!

Sui-May is getting annoyed with Jurso

Should I make a new character?

If yes then here...

His name is Kalekou!

No. you shouldn't. use you're old.

Yes he should.

It kinda looks like walking Tofu >.>

At 4/24/07 05:26 PM, SUPADUDE111 wrote: With his propostiton for peace with the mysterious Man failed, the Ninja goes to work. He sneaks around the castle undetected planting bombs hidden in shadows. Nothing in the world could detect the bombs, no matter how powerful

I mean it! This is going to be important to the story!

When the bombs go off, the factory and castle will suffer a major blow, stoping Doctor orange right in his tracks...

Due to rubble, lol

ummm SUPADUDE111 this has already happened to Ninja man before all this.

and the factory is Good not Evil (it's just not all happy gay rainbow good)

At 4/24/07 04:12 PM, crazerfish50 wrote: well, here it goes.

Is Jurso telling the truth?

the story continues...

A seeker informs the blue haired guy

A vast sea of destruction is spread among the outer grounds of the factory

the story continues

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The cold blue haired was the one that blasted Jurso not the robots! But what caused this?

At 4/24/07 11:43 AM, Puppet-Lord wrote: Hey Vortex Did You See The Post Where Zek Turns Into A Gaint Candy Corn Or Should We Just Leave That Out

Up to you Puppet-Lord (Candy =/= FIre >.>)

But the jackets powers are only active while acutally wearing it (until it turns white). I noticed when he transormed it came off. That's just to give the character a weakness (for balance).

Another little thing I do.. Pixel Art.

These aren't modified from other peoples stuff its made from scratch usins MS Paint.

At 4/24/07 10:13 AM, katfleas wrote: Yea i've read it all but i still don't undrerstand the jackets! I just know that something weird happend to the guys who wore it... So, should I wear a jacket?

!!! everyone should take time to read this post !!!
warning : I didnt bother spell checking this >.>

To answer your question:
lol no it's just a fad or something >.>, to really understand you have to start reading from where Roi first showed up in page 15 or or so -_-;

It was the source of his power, after we remade the story I had introduced Sui-may who only had martial arts to fight with, but then when peeps started putting their powerful characters back into the story, I had made it where Sui-May was also one that wore one of these powerful jackets. SkakeSkull approached Roi and asked for a jacket, and he had that 1 to spare. Shortly there after Zek found a knockoff version ^^;

So now were are at the planet, and city where they are produced. to get gear. The whole story is the heroes getting more powerful so they can save a number of different planets

Basically the heroes decieded that the jackets will be a powerful tool in the fight against the Evil Doctor Orange.

PLUS

they look cool 8) >.>;

Ok I get that but why are some white?

The jacket isn't permenant. While a character wears it. It slowly transfers it's energies into the body of the character so they will have the power without the need for the jacket. Once done it turns white and brandishes red lables on it.

At this point someone can get another jacket or just go on with whatever they were doing but alot stronger now.

In the story so far..
The jackets in a sense are very rare, not many know about this factory.. and even though it's a "factory" they only are able to make 1 or 2. They make one when they have a strong body (usually of some alien) to make it from.

note:
If your character is as you described earlier and tries to kill the first thing it sees without reason, it'll most likely run into trouble while events take place around this factory/base >.> because all the people in the base have jackets and are ready to kill stuff. Also some people here are even more shady than the blue haired guy.. He's actually..... well you'll figure it out ^^;

==Basic Story================================
-Characters from different planets slipped into a portal that poped out of nowhere.
-evil doctor orange is trying to take over different planets
-heroes are trying to stop him ( because their own home planets are involved)
-Dr. orange is powerful himself, but he controls powerful things, etc. (the classic evil scientist)
===========================================

the heroes are trying to find clues as to where the Evil Doctor Orange is, so they can stop him from taking over the planets.

We all control the events that lead up to this. Following the basic story over all, try not to deviate too far from it. unless most agree that a radical change is needed.

However, there is a bit of randomness to keep things interesting!

sometimes you may see someone throw in a "plot twist"

WTF is that?

These gotta involve a character that none control. Like the blue haired guy, or one of the other members of the organization.

A plot twist is when someone throws the rest of us for a loop where the unexpected happens.

Good examples:
ie. #1 someone we are trying to save turns on us.
ie. #2 One that Puppet-Lord used earlier... where the planet was seconds from being hit by a meteor and the portal that we were so close to instantly vanished lol.

Bad examples:
ie. #1 Roi turns on everyone and starts attacking the heroes.
-This is only valid if I'M the one that does it because Roi is "my character"

ie. #2 Suddenly the building colapses above the heroes killing them all!
-please remember to use "right before impact (RBI)" scenes (unless it just a joke or someting)

ie. #2 (fixed) Plot twist! Suddenly the building colapses above the heroes! They're only seconds away from being totally crushed!!!

throw in a Plot Twist here and there they are fun!

Okay I don't feel like typing anymore so... >.>

At 4/24/07 09:15 AM, ALBQjew wrote: sorry about double posting but Id rew something new, and I would like people to critique it this time, my style normally is characters with large eyes and heads, and I can basicly say Im not a good background artist

-the tall guys right arm looks a bit dislocated.
-the neck does look a bit too wide (more than twice the arm size?) but maybe you want it to be like that.
-Why do use use a straight edge for the sidewalk and poster.. but then freehand draw the bricks?