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Meanwhile... back at the frontlines. A lost hero emerges after hearing word, from TheSnakeSkull, that the allies needed some help. Will she make it in time?

The story continues..

At 5/8/07 05:50 AM, PandaMime wrote:

At 5/8/07 02:02 AM, Vortex00 wrote: Shiva
Final Fantasy XI
Photoshop 7

meh.. not the best but it's the latest. Just finished it.
I had a background but I was being way too lazy and it sucked to I took it out >.>

Remove the lines and it'll look great.

Yeah I have a habit of keeping those bold lines in there.
I had already compressed the layers ><, I would have to re-color it XD

I dunno tho, when I take out the lines my pictures look like a water color painting =/

At 5/23/07 12:28 AM, SavvasSavvinidis wrote: Your anime girls are hot.

Just wanted to say that.

Thanks for the comment!

Meh..
Started drawing glasses then came out to be Pistol Santa heh.
10 min on sketch and another 10 messing around in photoshop with shading

At 5/8/07 03:59 PM, PrinceFlea wrote: i can not describe how great,awesome and malevelous your art is .they just ewzes and screams out in pain of natural talent!you must have been born great at art.

^^;
well I dunno about all that heh.. but thanks!
The latest pic, finished today

wasn't even supposed to be a pic, just working on a new style of drawing / coloring eyes I picked up on the net.

But then it turned into a Viera from Final Fanstay series.

constructive criticism / comments always welcome

At 5/9/07 04:09 PM, UnderARock wrote: I really get bored in Math and I drew this in like <20 mins with pen, so I didnt really shade it..
Do you think I should

A: clean it up and color it
or
B:Dont color it, its not worth it

Plus take in to consideration im 14, so dont tear me apart with criticism.

A

Shiva
Final Fantasy XI
Photoshop 7

meh.. not the best but it's the latest. Just finished it.
I had a background but I was being way too lazy and it sucked to I took it out >.>

At 5/7/07 12:01 AM, ZekeySpaceyLizard wrote:

At 5/6/07 11:56 PM, Vortex00 wrote:

At 5/6/07 03:20 PM, B-C wrote: Here's some little doodles I've done. It's slightly anime, and I kind of hate my self for that.

why?

Because it's overdone.

meh >.>. I guess..

At 5/6/07 03:20 PM, B-C wrote: Here's some little doodles I've done. It's slightly anime, and I kind of hate my self for that.

why?

sketches for a series, hopefully...
So yeah, thanks for checking out my stuff if you did. I'd like some advice on how to make it better, and other things of that nature.

Keep it up man and get the Flash stuff done. This stuff looks promising

At 5/6/07 01:39 PM, TheSnakeSkull wrote: Vortex if you don't go to Story Art then join here.

Why are there 2 SA threads?..... -_-

I'm not feelin' the randomness. that's why I haven't posted anything in here. I've been reading along tho if it make you feel any better lol..

At 5/6/07 10:46 PM, reality-monkey wrote: ok, heres the pic of what i have now.

Looks good

if it ain't broke don't fix it!

At 5/6/07 09:36 PM, TheAmateurAnimator wrote: I think I'm doing this type of manipulation a bit too much...

This pic owns!
Good job
props 2 u on this

gotta love them furries ^^

At 5/6/07 01:37 PM, TheSnakeSkull wrote: Is that you Vortex?

huh?

More photoshop trees
smudge/ lens flare

Thanks guys

Fantasy Tree...?
photoshop 7
smudge/ lens flare

This is a pretty godo start.

The text / lettering will dictate much of how the end result will look tho.

At 4/29/07 12:36 PM, the-amazing-joe wrote:

At 4/29/07 12:23 PM, Monkey-Boy wrote: This is against the rules. :(

I meant to word that differently.
I'm not trying to steal photoshop.

i'm sure he means these rules.

If you are starting a new topic, you MUST start with a piece of your own original art. If you are looking for advice, please share your work as an example of what you are trying to accomplish.

Here's mine:

Rose Keyblade

At 4/28/07 10:00 AM, Baller22CT wrote: Here's my shield rate it from 1-10.
1 being total shit 10 being epic masterpiece.

4/10

At 4/27/07 07:12 PM, Krayon wrote:

At 4/26/07 06:34 PM, Vortex00 wrote:

At 4/26/07 06:22 PM, Krayon wrote: not bad. you could have rendered the hair strands rather than just texturing the hair

The hair IS rendered!! it took like 20 min to render all that.

in that case well done. the whole pictures IS very good nevertheles. But i still think you could have done the eyebrows as actual hairs rather than a texture and the hair is a little jagged in some places, make it smoother a bit, say increase the polys

Yeah, I could have made the eyebrows hair strands..... but i'm too lazy -_-;

Yeah the hair is jagged, each hair has only about 20 joints.. i'm still kinda a noob at rendering hair. This model is actually my first attempt at it, after watching a basic video tutorial.

here's another angle:

Rotoscope

At 4/27/07 12:49 PM, Gonzossm wrote:

At 4/27/07 02:51 AM, Vortex00 wrote:

Actually i just clicked on the topic and saw a ninja and a marshmallow and i was bored so i decided to add on to the story. but u guys got all mad n shit. lol

heh.. look.. i'm done, it's not even a big deal.. I dont want to harp on this topic.

why dont you start a new story or something?

please direct any other messages else to me via PM

At 4/27/07 08:57 AM, MindChamber wrote:

At 4/27/07 01:37 AM, Vortex00 wrote:
it's seems you are biased ..I dont even know why I botherd typing this >.>;..

meh.. im not baised, I just couldnt tell which art was the spammy art, it all looks sloppy and rushed if you asked me.

but Gonzo's is definitely more interesting to look at, and way more dynamic,

you could learn a thing from him when you tracing over generic anime girl 10115

It is all rushed (mine and his), not traced though lol, that gave me a chuckle as i read it, had to read it twice.

At 4/27/07 01:41 AM, Gonzossm wrote: Wtf just draw it on flash thats what i do and they come out nice and its quiker.

-Yes yes i know you draw in Flash it's obvious
-how they look is an opinion base on what you compare it to.
-yes it's quicker, but is it a race? no.

-Gonzossm spare me the wtf. you didn't like our thread

but no one was forcing you to read it.

-So you make an alt and come in here to ruin it. You did it, grats. happy now? still bored? maybe you will spam other threads now under a new alt? or were you just picking on us?

Photoshop is nice too as I will post my last part of this story...

A New face arrived into Sui-Mays dojo back on Earth only to find it ironically empty everytime she enters...

At 4/27/07 01:20 AM, MindChamber wrote:

At 4/27/07 01:03 AM, orochimaru556 wrote: WHAT THE HELL!! You are not a very good moderator!!

This SCUM is breaking a lot of RULES which where put here for a reason!!

Please moderate well or i wil seek other peoples services...

I dunno...

you and the other dude pretty much just spam the thread with the same pictures over and over, and simply add new word bubbles.

Gonzo's on the other hand has provided the story with fresh new work in almost every submission.

would it really be fair for me to squander such creativity?

many people presently arent on at time time. some because of this problem -_-; and other personal reasons they have stated in previous threads.

The point is to progress the story. the stuff i create takesa bit time to do, has backgrounds, some photoshop effects, and crap in the hair and certain backgrounds. if i was doing stuff in flash with no BG where it auto corrects my drawings and solid color flood fills, i'd be chunking out new stuff each time too -_-;

the point of same pic but making new bubbles is so I can multitask(draw my next picture) while encouraging other to build onto the story. thats why in many i post i have.. i'm asking questions...

but

it's seems you are biased ..I dont even know why I botherd typing this >.>;..

Will the ninja ever convince the organization to listen to him for the greater good after stealing from them? things look grim..

the story continues..

At 4/27/07 12:17 AM, MindChamber wrote: I got a complaint that Gonzossm was spamming up this thread.

this is a tuff call,

being that Gonzossm art so far, is the best art posted.

XD nah... I'd like to think mine is >.>;

it's not disgusting penises
and follow the basic plots outlined on page 30. please condiser this.

Back inside the factory in a room that exsists in a parallel dimension. ( basically none can just waltz in as they please >.>;)

the story unfolds....

Suddeny before she makes her move Roi steps behind Sui-may wit ha legion of members fro mthe organization. With a new plan...

Sui-May a bit irritated that all the zombies got blown to hell, sets her eyes on ninja man ( not you spammer i know ur reading this leave me alone -_-; >.>) with a still current order given to her to get back that which was taken.