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At 6/26/07 06:17 PM, RandomRandy wrote: is it good or bad. i want your honest opinion and constructive critisism. i do this with all intensions to improve.

Out of Good or Bad ?
Bad

Fix these things:

Face looks like a Dorito chip.. Give her some jaws.

Shoulders slacking a bit too low

I use to draw people with hands behind their back too because I was too lazy to draw hands, or sucked at it, but you should draw her with her hands exposed for practice.

She needs some thickness esp. in the leg sand arms... looks like her legs are about to snap.

Waist is too narrow..

Ear is too far up.. or not there a all...

Boobs are pretty good though.. Try getting the other parts of the body right >.>;

Check out the post Stamper did in
This Thread orsome of the crap I did http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic.php?id=69 1828&page=3

At 6/26/07 05:53 PM, Jawdyn wrote: He's still required to include a picture with the post, as i have been reminded to do many a time. ...well actually once, so.

trust me.. I know >.>;
I was too lazy to post the link to the rules.. T_T

Anyway, he implied he has a picture to show us because he said he couldn't upload it without it being a .jpeg or .GIF.

It is a bit sad isn't it? oh well...

At 6/26/07 05:29 PM, haxoreaper wrote: Hi My Alx.Is Ms Paint bad or good for begining manga?

No.

~ End of Thread~

*cough* >.>;

He wasn't even trying to upload a picture in the first place...

He was just asking a generic question..

lol.

At 6/25/07 03:11 PM, Superperpel wrote: i personally hate all of them. sorry.

heh.. >.>;

JohanL

You know how it is..

Not the greatest but the latest..

My CG I did for ChoW #1 : Aurelie - The Red Knight

yeah I'm just getting done too.. Iost power and had to start from far as hell back T_T

~ Vortex00 ChoW #1 FINAL ENRTY ~

Aurelie - The Red Knight

“Legend speaks of an unchallenged manifestation of power and hatred in the form of a lustful woman, with a long red mane of hair, which resides in the depths of the Black Realm. The jewels she bears, slowly bleeds out the souls of those unfortunate enough to cross her. She is said to bear artifacts from the most powerful demons to the weapons of gods. Once this entity has enough souls, It is said she will come to the prime realm and I fear no challenger will be able to stop this ‘Red Knight’.”

-Phillus, The Wandering Bard

Hi RES

At 6/18/07 11:32 PM, ReNaeNae wrote:

At 6/18/07 11:16 PM, s1nt3ch wrote: This forum is for artists and browsing thru some of your posts, I see that you have no fucking art.
so fuck off you cunt and never come back.

LOL!! I've been having a terrible day, and that just brightened! Thank you!! :D

I'm working on something too ! o.O

I'm not big on creatures either..

I LOL'ed too.. >.>

a new one of these eh?

The thing about RP stuff like this is you need (at least) one person to be the bad guy(s) >.>;

and..

people can't be so anxious to see what happens next but wait till the person makes a post.

and..

bla bla bla.. >.>;

At 6/13/07 07:02 AM, Gorglore wrote: Just because it's in paint doesn't automatically make it worse.

If he did it in flash I probaly would have sateted.. not bad for flash..

To each his own.

At 6/13/07 06:47 AM, cmkinsac wrote: hey, shut up, vortex can draw circles around your ass (figure of speach meaning he is way better than you. I know some idiots that would take it literally) so he knows what the fuck he is talking about.

I lol'ed

/joy

not bad for paint.

! next time use the attachment feature, located under the message box.

can't use img here.

At 6/12/07 10:04 AM, Ani-x wrote: amazing.
you got the eye size and distance, even nose lengths perfect.

great improvement from the orignal

Thanks. Now that I look at it again it seems made the pupils too big on the face at the bottom of the page.. like it's dilated =/

At 6/12/07 12:26 PM, a-kitten wrote: your art is amazing

^_^

At 6/12/07 01:08 PM, RedSkelton wrote: d0 n0t qvvuesti0n VOERT3X he knOwSwhat works so keep it SHUTUP'd

heh. ^_^

I need feedback to improve! :O

At 6/12/07 09:00 PM, knuxrouge wrote:

All me. Any words?

Nice.

just one problem I have is as RandomRandy stated:

proportions on the girl with the black hair.

-Her head is too small
-Or her body is too big

but based on the perspective in the room.. the head is too small.

Results:

I also put what age I was shooting for next to the face.

As usual,
~ All critique / constructive criticism / comments, are always welcome ~

An old sketch I found...It kind of sucks.. But when I found it I decided to do a little drawing exercise, sketching this characters face at different ages. And redrawing it overall, to compare and contrast. I only messed around with drawing the head.

Old sketch..

At 6/11/07 10:50 AM, MindChamber wrote: you're developing your own style :O

O.o!

/joy

At 6/11/07 11:07 AM, Ani-x wrote: a big head, small neck and squatty body was rules of thumbs when drawling child like figues,
wile sharper jaws, longer necks and stretched out torso and hit would show adult.

Hmm... I guess I don't want to make them too "long"... It might be my style.. 0.0!
Well how old do you think they are? I usually shoot for late teen or early twenties.

- The guy with the leaf in his hat, I was going for about 20-22 y/o

- The sketches of the girl with the pigtails I was going for barely legal

- And the guy with the braids and the girl next to him I was shooting for 20-21 y/o

At 6/10/07 05:57 PM, AniGen wrote: this is actually really, really good

Thanks. in RL.. busy, busy.. =/ not a lot of time to draw lately -_-; Perhaps I'll get time to post more later.

At 6/10/07 09:47 PM, MindChamber wrote: congrats,

Thanks. I'm going to tackle some dynamic poses with the arms since it seems I about have it right.

and the faces on the girls in the last piece are at least diferent enough from most of your anime faces.

Yeah, on the other ones I would see some anime, and be like "oh that's pretty cool. I’ll try to imitate that style, but with my own characters", but I put it behind me and just started sketching to see what I sketched like after looking at the anatomy stuff. My goal was go for something semi-realistic, but still fairly simple for sprite animation purposes, because I do some hobby 2D game making in Multimedia Fusion. Meh... here I go writing books again... >.>;

cant wait to see more.

Keep scrolling down.
raw scan, also in the process of adding color.

At 6/9/07 04:10 AM, TarThoron wrote: The top right one looks the most realistic to me.

Yeah I'll just have to do some color ones it seems.

check back later ^_^

after I finish my COW#31

At 6/9/07 01:44 AM, AniGen wrote: fuck i love girls ffffffffffffff

heh.

update

At 6/9/07 01:06 AM, TarThoron wrote: To quote MC, they look like linked sausages that were chewed up by dogs.

Argh! What does that mean!? XD

..But I just realized it's probably because I use muscle anatomy pics as reference (no skin)

Thanks for the critique, and taken into account what you mentioned, and the reference pics, here's what I produced from it..

WIP

At 6/8/07 09:37 PM, Monkey-Boy wrote: You waited 2 minutes.

2 FUCKING MINUTES!!

LMAO

At 6/8/07 08:37 PM, BetaVolt wrote: your pretty great at drawing what program?

Photoshop 7

well 3 pages and no chicks.. four isn't going to happen.. oh well >.>;

more practice..

omg tits! grow up -_-;

At 5/24/07 09:33 AM, Vortex00 wrote:

At 5/24/07 09:21 AM, MindChamber wrote:

It still does boggle my mind how badly you draw the male anatomy.
I mean a skeleton is a skeleton..

That previous pic I wasn't using one. I'll take some time and seriously draw him, after I finish this one. Still doing the final line art.

Here's the redrawn version..

next

btw all this is the stuff I drew trying to incorporate my anatomy stuff with my anime

At 6/4/07 07:31 AM, SmilingIdiot wrote: vortex i have to admit you got some good stuff here...

Thanks.

you could have this cookie

^_^

Just posting some of the stuff I've been doing art wise off the PC

The next few post are going to be results of my ongoing Anatomy studies

I’m almost reluctant to post anything with the recent flaming that been going on >.>;

~ critique / constructive criticism / comments, are always welcome ~

TomAzza

At 6/2/07 03:19 PM, Illu wrote: "Pro"?

Yeah, I'd say this stuff is professional grade work. Very crisp and clean, neat with attention to details despite its Anime style.

Keep it up, I like ^_^

Just one thing I noticed.. on your "3rd of four pics:" on the first page the girls ear looks too high.

Thanks for all the compliments ^_^

I started with resizing my sketch to fit 595x700, so I don't have a bigger image sorry =/

At 6/3/07 02:32 PM, Illu wrote: Niiice work.

Thanks ^_^

The latest CG.

COW # 30