ffs.. really? there's more locked threads than non-locked.

At 6/12/09 02:47 AM, theshyster wrote: Huh....I noticed why the bottem body looks so weird now. I know you'er trying to make it like she's shaking her upper body, but it's like she looks like boomerang....Her butt-waist isn't aligned with her spine XD

shaking? which one are you referring to?

The Art portal is going to be awesome

also remade a bit

these are remakes

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At 5/30/09 08:33 AM, BizarroJoe wrote: ...I couldn't help it. No sir, I couldn't

lol nice.
I got 2 otw, will be making epic close calls.

At 5/21/09 05:34 PM, johnnycancer wrote:

At 5/21/09 05:25 PM, poxpower wrote: Almost done now...

I have to say I'm excited to watch what entries are going to come in at the last minute since that's when the surprises seem to happen with Newgrounds contests.

*cough* *cough* >.>;

Artist LFG hit me up.
art thread

feels kinda like i'm back in a mmo >.>;

At 5/14/09 02:51 AM, LegolaSS wrote: Yeah... i think we could have worked that one out knowing its you :3... Great work... love the anime style you have going on... nice to see another familair face joining up to the collab... Ciao

Thanks :)

At 5/14/09 03:13 AM, johnnycancer wrote: My only criticism is that she's looking a bit too young for my comfort zone, but then again, a huge number of Newgrounds users are like 13 or 14 years old, so, I guess it is playing to the target demographic.

That was the general idea when I started.

btw. I recoreded the coloring process. I'll get that link up later.

..a request... kind of >.>;

I pretty much made something totally different than what was supposed to be going on with these items.

for the lulz

nsfw

Notepad Drawing Collab 09 entry

well, the full thing. yep. that's all of it =/
the line work is still there for the rest but I didn't bother coloring it.

hmm.. >_>;

NG Level: 17
Location: Houston, TX
Age/Gender: 23/M
Artists comments: yes, she was naked at the start of this drawing.

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Great job as usual. the perspective of the left eye is bothering me a bit, it's too obvious of a flip. probably should warp/distort it a bit to make it match perspective. Mainly on the left where it touches the brown fur, and also it would seem like the the buildings in it eyes would be the same direction. Just some stuff I noticed.

At 2/10/09 02:40 PM, threadwood wrote: i find it healthy to refresh myself with the basics every now and then by attending night-time figure drawing sessions at the local campus. unfortunately i seem to have lost a bit, these legs are terrible and i couldn't get her face right- something i'm normally da bomb at.

This is awesome. Nothing you mentioned is really noticeable at first glance unless your keen on anatomy issues but I like the lighting. Also most of your other works in here I like the use of those fine hair/fur lines, good job!

At 5/8/09 11:10 AM, vylent wrote:

At 5/8/09 11:09 AM, vylent wrote: Hey Guys
Im hoping this might be my last attempt at this before I post it in the finals thread
I thinned down the arm and added a tattoo
Im not to sure about the tattoo to be honest so i might just leave it out
but tell me what you think anyway
thanks again :)

I might help If I actually added a pic

Sorry about the double post :(

as CosmicDeath mentioned, you might want to look into a quick adjustment of that bust area to face towards the viewer POV a bot more.

At 5/7/09 10:39 PM, Luis wrote: Sending all entries from :
Australia, Brazil, Bulgaria and Norway

tmrw. Yes i reached my 150 quota by the end of the week as promised. i should get a prize or something.

good job Luis!

sorry man tis all I can do XD

At 5/7/09 04:37 PM, johnnycancer wrote: Not that you asked for any criticism or suggestions on this one, but the arch of her back does look a wee bit unnatural,

Criticism/Critique is always welcome here. :D

Actually the other one was the original or they both are. It branched into two different directions at a certain point the process of coloring.

Not surprised you mentioned this. I should have fixed it when I first noticed it ><. But stuff starts to look right as you look at it for a while, which is basically all of the line/coloring process for this one and the other. I'll have to fix it up. There's also a few more things I noticed now that I look at it ><;

At 5/7/09 07:49 PM, SirNightOwl wrote: WIP

I think I've actually done some half decent shading for once.

definitely need to bring those ears down. They should sit somewhere between the top of the eye and the bottom of the nose. I'd suggest making the eyes and lips smaller and loose that eyelash style. Maybe replace it with something thicker. and redo the shirt wrinkles >< longer lines instead of small squiggly ones. Also some folds can be achieved through shading/highlights.
I see you coloring lines, so I'd also suggest the skin lines to be more flesh tone.
Good job so far.

screenshot of this little animation I'm doing for a game.

Not feeling the hands but if I nitpick, and go back and fix every little thing I'll never finish.

fuggen around with my Ng Miniposters Girl submission.

nsfw click

Don't mind me ^_^;
Just a bump or two.

Hmm.. noticed quite a lack of shadows on that first pic.. oh well >_>;

Just finished this. There's some perspective errors of the guitar and lack of shading on the skirt.. oh well >_>;

actually I'll probably fix the skirt thing..

At 5/6/09 07:02 PM, LaserKarl wrote: An opinion shared with me.

and me :D

I find it hard to critique your sketchy style. It's why I don't much if at all. But everything in here is awesome. Your anatomy in these are on point. But the details are usually blurred or sketchy in most areas which only leaves to the imagination of the viewer exactly what the composition is. When looking at the less detail areas your eyes naturally try to make it look right, which makes it complicated to decide what's right and whats wrong. There are bursts of detail in them, but only in a few certain places of the picture. And these spots are normally done very well.

Plus I only critique when I have a pretty good idea of what I'm talking about because, I can't even seem to get my own stuff right .

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At 4/26/09 03:16 AM, Kuoke wrote: Also, anything I've missed?

nothing I can tell immediately. The only thing I would say is the perspective of the head phones. But that would depend on hows she's wearing them. if it's supposed to be over both ears then it's a little off, of not then it's fine.

At 4/26/09 03:26 AM, megashell wrote: But really what do you use? what program, or is this just the beauty of a wacom and skill in Photoshop

I sketch in photoshop cs2 bring it into flash 8 where I make the lines, then port back to photoshop to color. Indeed a wacom does help as well as some know how. But as I mentioned if I'm drawing anything at all this is typically the type of stuff I draw anyways. I would hope it looked at least half way decent by now >.>;

At 4/26/09 04:06 AM, SmilingIdiot wrote: hmm...well if you look at the shoulder...you will see there is presure on it...

Maybe I just have long as hell arms or something lol..

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did a lot of small changes you may or may not notice. I'm thinking this the final.

At 4/26/09 02:09 AM, SmilingIdiot wrote: and lesson learned...i dont have what it takes to draw on a canvas that big

Looking good. Now those arms need to be fixed so they look the same length. The arm that's straight is too short anatomy wise. Needs to be bent a bit. It kinda gay but if you try to sit like that you'll see what I'm talking about.

I think you have what it takes man keep at it. You said it's your first one? doing pretty good imo. Just takes more patience but you have this Hi res pic in the end that makes it all worth while.

At 4/25/09 11:21 PM, poxpower wrote: PeeKaPoo

in toilet water lol

poopasaur

that nasty green kind. yummy.

At 4/25/09 05:05 PM, megashell wrote:

At 4/24/09 10:41 PM, Vortex00 wrote: too much going on?

O_O you are ORIGINAL AND AWESOME! do not change a thing! WOW

Thanks, this is typically my cup of tea. I'll probably do something with the text though, just haven't worked anything out yet. And also fix a few shading issues I recently noticed.