Newgrounds.com — Everything, By Everyone.

At 12/2/14 01:58 PM, TonytheGamerDad wrote: Just wanted to share a recent blog post I did regarding Agents of SHIELD

http://geekcritiqueblog.blogspot.com...n-marvels.html

http://geekcritiqueblog.blogspot.com/2014/12/characters-who-should-appear-on-marvels.html

oops...

Just wanted to share a recent blog post I did regarding Agents of SHIELD

http://geekcritiqueblog.blogspot.com...n-marvels.html

Will the real Mandarin please stand up?

http://heaven4geeks.wordpress.com/2013/11/15/will-the-real-mandarin-please-stand-up/

Hey guys, I decided to bite the bullet and start blogging on my own blog. I hope you all stop by and drop some comments and hit those like and share buttons. I have 2 post up at the moment, 1 is a welcome and the other is a small bit on Victoria Hand appearing on Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D. complete with some pictures. As always, thanks for reading the post and clicking the link.

http://heaven4geeks.wordpress.com/

and...

It's Adventure Time...go tell your friends

http://heaven4geeks.wordpress.com/2013/ ... r-friends/

plus

Will Peter Parker return and become Spider-Man once more? Yes...the answer is a definite yes. Find out why here...

http://heaven4geeks.wordpress.com/2013/ ... to-an-end/

Hey guys, I recently caught the blogging bug and would appreciate any feedback you all could give. I'm going to leave a link to my profile and you can check out the insane amount of articles I've written in the last few days. Thanks!

http://www.bubblews.com/account/60904-tonythegamerdad

At 5/30/13 05:48 PM, belthagor wrote:

At 5/29/13 07:12 AM, TonytheGamerDad wrote: Did I win?

okay you win

What did I win...you said there was a prize...

Did I win?

Check out my thoughts on the Xbox One and Used games!

http://leviathyn.com/games/news/2013/05/22/xbox-one-charges-
extra-to-play-used-games/

When does the contest end?

The rain pored down
My cat was left outside
I said "my kitty was all wet"
Then some douche responded "That's what she said!"
I just face palmed my head

Hate bumping old threads but, I just wanted to say my theme has always been Twinkle Magic by Airi and Meiri! J-Pop FTW!

At 5/17/13 09:18 PM, belthagor wrote:

At 5/17/13 09:16 PM, TonytheGamerDad wrote: anyone interested I just popped up an article on the 8 best wrestling tag teams ever!

http://leviathyn.com/wrestling-2/2013/05/16/the-8-greatest-t ag-teams-in-wrestling-history/

Well well if it isn't you

Remember me from Purepwnage forums?? You did the same thing (advertise) there....

Ya know there are better ways to get popular than advertising............

Hey...small internet after all huh? Not trying to "get popular" dude, just trying to let people know I'm out there doing my thing. If I was trying to get popular I'd claim how cool I was or how great my writing was....which it is and I totally am fyi!

anyone interested I just popped up an article on the 8 best wrestling tag teams ever!

http://leviathyn.com/wrestling-2/2013/05/16/the-8-greatest-t ag-teams-in-wrestling-history/

Any updates for me?

At 5/12/13 02:30 PM, KisukeFanboy435 wrote:

At 5/11/13 03:14 PM, TonytheGamerDad wrote:

At 5/11/13 01:27 PM, KisukeFanboy435 wrote: sorry i didnt get back sooner. the only internet i have is a 3g wifi hotspot. lol. anyway, u want me to make him look somewat similar?

more or less....just be sure to include the name Night Fox, Issue #1, and include some sort of city backdrop.

k, ill get on that

Whenever you get the chance man...No real rush. I prefer quality over quickness??

At 5/11/13 01:27 PM, KisukeFanboy435 wrote: sorry i didnt get back sooner. the only internet i have is a 3g wifi hotspot. lol. anyway, u want me to make him look somewat similar?

more or less....just be sure to include the name Night Fox, Issue #1, and include some sort of city backdrop.

Not sure if this is ok or not but, I write articles on various topics for several websites and blogs and I'd love it if you all checked them out...here is my latest article.

http://leviathyn.com/games/lists/2013/05/11/the-5-lost-franc hises-of-video-games/

At 5/10/13 02:19 PM, TonytheGamerDad wrote: It's a character based off this public domain comic...

http://pdsh.wikia.com/wiki/Fox_(MlJ)

this link...

http://pdsh.wikia.com/wiki/Fox_(MlJ)

It's a character based off this public domain comic...

http://pdsh.wikia.com/wiki/Fox_(MlJ)

At 5/10/13 02:08 PM, KisukeFanboy435 wrote:

At 5/10/13 07:43 AM, TonytheGamerDad wrote:

At 5/10/13 12:36 AM, KisukeFanboy435 wrote:

At 5/9/13 11:27 PM, KisukeFanboy435 wrote: k, ill try to post back within a day.

watcha think?

This is pretty good, especially considering you did it in such a short time. Do you own a good set of markers or do you work exclusively in pencil/crayon? How would you feel about doing a web comic?

dont really use markers, i use mainly pencil or chalk pastel. i also have an art tablet. im learning to use it more effectively still not very good with that yet.

i would be very interested in helping you out if you would have me to. what kind of idea did you have in mind?

My idea is to start an online comic, possibly hear on Newgrounds, and hopefully have some fun. Think you could slap a cover together for a comic titled Night Fox?

At 5/10/13 12:36 AM, KisukeFanboy435 wrote:

At 5/9/13 11:27 PM, KisukeFanboy435 wrote: k, ill try to post back within a day.

watcha think?

This is pretty good, especially considering you did it in such a short time. Do you own a good set of markers or do you work exclusively in pencil/crayon? How would you feel about doing a web comic?

I wrote this as part of an English final in High School, the teacher told me it was terrible and that was one of the reasons I never went into writing. I have since started writing on a semi-professional basis and was wondering if this story actually had merit or was as terrible as I was told it was. Eventually I want to go back and improve it into a longer story. I imagine this to be a story within a longer story.

Also, when the wind is so cold it's below freezing the bits of ice and snow sting your face in an odd hot flash. At least it does in Chicago.

At 5/9/13 10:34 PM, IronGuy wrote: DAIRY!

no i'm lactose intolerant

[CENTER][B][U][SIZE="5"]The Jaguar[/SIZE][/U][/B]
[IMG]http://i687.photobucket.com/albums/vv237/Mukan_no_Teioh /The%20Jagverse/TheJaguarHead.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://i687.phot obucket.com/albums/vv237/Mukan_no_Teioh/The%20Jagverse/TheJa guarFull.jpg[/IMG][/CENTER]

Draw this, keep the basic design but feel free to put your own spin on it.

At 5/9/13 08:15 PM, KisukeFanboy435 wrote:

At 5/6/13 05:48 PM, TonytheGamerDad wrote: Still looking if anyone is interested...

im interested

This is a great piece of art! How are you working under specs?

Why not?

At 5/9/13 08:30 PM, shortstorywriter wrote:

At 5/9/13 05:56 PM, TonytheGamerDad wrote: I just read the Superheroes story and it wasn't half bad. You claim it is from the perspective of Superman, but to me at least, it didn't feel like Superman at all. To me it almost felt more like Black Adam or Superboy Prime.

This line...

[quote] I walked down the scum filled street, in this scum filled city of Metropolis.[/quote]

seems a little off. I think it could be better said like this...

[quote]I walked down a scum filled street in Metropolis. Which street? I can't even tell anymore. All the streets seem to be lined with scum now a days. In fact, the whole city is just a giant cesspool.[/quote]

To me most of your story is like your opening line...either too redundant or too lacking. I would love to take a crack at rewriting your story if you were cool with it...

Speaking of stories, could you check my story out and offer some criticism?...http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1339609

Can you explain what you mean by lacking? And it was meant to be redundant, in order to push the image that Superman had gone dark. It didn't sound like Superman because it's a dark, angry Superman. Not the normal Superman you see. Also, that story was among my least favorite. So really, I agree with you that it wasn't that great.

I realized it was about Superman going rogue/bad/mad/EVIL! but it still seemed off. I guess it is lacking the back story to why he has gone mad/bad. What set this moment apart from any other. Superman has failed in the past, he has been forced to kill even, so why was this special? As for the redundancy...you're too redundant. Reinterating to show madness can be done, you just have Supes sounding like Mojo Jojo from the Power Puff Girls. Also thanks for the critique....story is over 15 years old...I should update it.

At 5/9/13 07:50 PM, jjtninja wrote:

At 5/9/13 06:01 PM, TonytheGamerDad wrote: Here is something that has been bouncing around my head for years...

The Trinity: How can you save a man's soul when his God is dead?

Sounds interesting......

I imagined it as an anime back when I was like 13....The hook is that when Jesus was crucified he died and since he was God too then God died. Now Heaven is closed and God's power is lost to the void...

With the Lightning Thief focusing on Poseiden's son I would go for a lesser known god myself.

I have not read the full chapter as I lost interest in the story rather quickly. I think you are making the mistake of telling instead of showing a lot. An example is this line here..

[quote]Feet covered in fur boots
crunched through the early morning snow as he began the long stroll home.[/quote]

You may be better off saying something like...

[quote] The crimson fur of his boots were washed clean as he crunched through the thick morning snow. The long journey home seemed even longer now that his muscles ached with the burning sensation of a hard fought battle.[/quote]

I myself wrote a very crappy story that I would appreciate feedback on...http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1339609