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Question time again....

Could someone plz give me advice on how to proceed with the hair. I do like the outline of the hair, but I am not happy with the coloring. plz comment on this.

does anyone have good tutorials on blood making. You think I should keep a little transparancy on the horn, or just make it red (100% opacy)? I didnt work on the blood really, but hopefully someone has ideas on how to fill this.

horse isnt finished completely, but other comments are also welcome

the horse isnt completely my own design I mainly used this as reference. I tried to make it my own as much as possible

At 8/8/12 05:28 AM, aoisgd wrote: i don't know if i am doing a good shading work
please some opinions..

its a bit messy still to really appreciate the drawing, including the shading, but I do see a right shade on the teeth and a left shade on the body. I dont think its really coherent yet, but again its still a bit messy to really evaluate imo

also the teeth shade turn from right to left

At 8/8/12 05:56 AM, Kashi wrote:

At 8/8/12 12:16 AM, lovingthedark wrote: reflective tape?

I was thinking something along the lines of this, like a bike reflector lens or something.

wouldnt that reflect more then?

I have no idea what it is

atm the score's are

Wizbin-Y: 8 votes
Izzy-A: 6 votes
Cypress: 6 votes
Monsterparty: 4 votes

Izzy-A, love the dynamic, atmosphere and postures

At 8/6/12 03:46 PM, Luwano wrote:

These games are still running:

http://drawception.com/play/EJ2rXgfo8mqvfOgLJG94yffMc6qzYIxW 9S9aHnWlTT8/ (NSFW)

I only did this one because no one did, so yeah. but I still stand behind my drawing :)

At 8/6/12 05:20 PM, Tomsan wrote:

At 8/6/12 03:23 PM, KyotoTheory wrote:

Hope to hear from you soon,

How ' about this?

srry I just love this one, suitable for all requests. Maybe some headphones on it?

ah I forgot that with headphones has already been made.

top of the notch stuff, surely you agree

At 8/6/12 03:23 PM, KyotoTheory wrote: Hi all,

I'm currently searching for a graphics designer to create a logo for my bass music project 'Kyoto Theory'.

I'm open to all ideas as long as its in keeping with the genre of music I'm making. (Glitch Hop, Dubstep, Drum 'n' Bass etc...'
Preferably artists looking to expand their portfolio rather than their wallets as I'm a bit stuck for cash but prices can be negotiated if necessary.

Hope to hear from you soon,

How ' about this?

srry I just love this one, suitable for all requests. Maybe some headphones on it?

At 8/6/12 03:34 PM, Luwano wrote:
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Why not have another weird looking one? Here you go:

looks gross... Chicken filet?

At 7/23/12 10:02 PM, Night-Chao wrote:

At 7/22/12 02:38 AM, Kashi wrote:

At 7/22/12 01:17 AM, Night-Chao wrote: still working on perspective and space, its really an obstacle for me xD

I really have no idea where you were heading with her outfit.

wow laying down some mad skills on me. I really do appreciate it. Honestly you made it look to easy, I just guess its gona take another 10 years before I even reach this baby step <-<. Thanks a lot, will use as an example for my drawings.

haa I know that feeling, pretty humbling right.

I browsed trough your pics and my tip would be to adress something I am struggling with as well. Shades

make them bolder, harder. So you can use soft edges, but the color difference seems to low imo

At 8/5/12 05:36 PM, Luwano wrote:

At 8/5/12 01:44 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote: Feather duster

Nope.

At 8/5/12 03:26 PM, Tomsan wrote: Horse flower, not sure 'bout the english name. The flower that starts out yellow

Dandelion and no, that's not it.

Hint: It needs electrical power to fulfill its purpose.

well then it can only be such a space lamp thingy with long plastic hairs, changing colors. RU a 70s guy?

Horse flower, not sure 'bout the english name. The flower that starts out yellow

Whiskers

end result. I wasnt able to really make the changes I wanted, but I am currently working on a mac, and I absolutely hate it. I have this HUGE 27inch screen half a meter in front of my face. I just cant work on it. So I fixed the leg and didnt do much else really. maybe ill change it some other time.

I would like input on which version is better, with whiskers or without.

Looks like a drain, not sure

At 8/3/12 07:18 PM, Kashi wrote: Thanks guys.
Pretty much done with above pic. Tried a new method of coloring, and I hate myself for it.

Meanwhile, I made a bunny! :3

This bunny is definitely ''cute''

At 8/3/12 07:16 PM, Kashi wrote:

At 8/3/12 05:05 PM, Tomsan wrote: I quickly tried to implement what you suggested as much as I could.

Not as much as you could have.

Why did you think I was mad at you, btw?

At 7/30/12 04:53 PM, Kashi wrote: Stop making new threads for all of your art

Nice, like i said will work on it tomorrow. Will be difficult not to copy you to much, yours look very good. Also i now see how retarded the leg looks in comparison. Thx 4 that. And thx for the set-up

At 8/3/12 07:33 PM, Luwano wrote:

At 8/3/12 06:32 PM, J-qb wrote: Beer bottle cap thingy; still on the bottle.

Yes, that's it.
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Here comes another:

Easy one, i hope :-)

Its a button, like on a shirt

At 8/3/12 06:32 PM, J-qb wrote:

At 8/3/12 05:25 PM, Luwano wrote: You're fast today, art forum.

Beer bottle cap thingy; still on the bottle.

nice one, must be it

At 8/3/12 04:21 PM, Luwano wrote:
http://drawception.com/play/BIelsdMW58A1dDlCJmrMpMjnHtIhTe8l MDaAc67Q-Cg/ (1 of 6)

O.M.G I forgot the eyebrows. sorry... you'll see

At 8/3/12 05:31 PM, Tomsan wrote:

At 8/3/12 05:25 PM, Luwano wrote:

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You're fast today, art forum. More:

the edge of a circle saw

At 8/3/12 05:25 PM, Luwano wrote:

At 8/3/12 05:22 PM, Tomsan wrote:
oeeh 2 from 2

lets go for 3 from 3

its the top of a lighter

Yes, yes it is.
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You're fast today, art forum. More:

I am probably gonna break my streak, but I am going for the exterior of a lamp, (we call it seiling lamp) lamp that shines on the seiling.

At 8/3/12 05:19 PM, Luwano wrote:

At 8/3/12 05:17 PM, Tomsan wrote: A lamp bulb!

background would be awesome in the toilet, so maybe a lamp bulb in the toilet...

The background is just a lampshade. It is a lamp!
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New pic:

oeeh 2 from 2

lets go for 3 from 3

its the top of a lighter

At 8/3/12 05:17 PM, Tomsan wrote:
background would be awesome in the toilet, so maybe a lamp bulb in the toilet...

bathroom I mean

At 8/3/12 05:10 PM, Luwano wrote:

Hint: I did not use the flashlight when I took this pic. ;)

A lamp bulb!

background would be awesome in the toilet, so maybe a lamp bulb in the toilet...

ill work on it more tomorrow, I quickly tried to implement what you suggested as much as I could.

I am not sure about the whiskers though.

At 8/3/12 04:27 PM, Kashi wrote:

At 8/3/12 04:08 PM, Tomsan wrote: Could use some tips on the eyes. she must look as 'cute' as possible

Yeah, this doesn't look cute at all.

Try a more round head, big whiskers, get rid of the cheek fat lines that are on either side of its mouth. Bigger nose, either a ":3" face, and optional buckteeth below them.

Even for a cute little cartoon, you need to work on the anatomy. The body shape is lumpy, his front legs are two different thicknesses, and his back leg is just a disaster, sorry. The tail, if you're going for cute, should be more of a cloud-like fluffy, not just another sphere. His back leg is lower than his front legs, and he's missing a back leg.

The shading also seems arbitrary, without a real lightsource in mind. If you did a lightsource you were trying to follow, it has been executed badly. Speaking of, he also needs some shadow under him.

Don't forget to use references. Look at patterns and similarities, and use a lot of them to get some inspiration: 1 2 3 4 5

good, thanks, I thought you were mad at me ;)

I agree with most. I think I can fix the problem with the backleg by lowering the belly line a bit. That would also take care of the invisible backleg, wich would then be rightfully invisible. I'll see how I change this for the better.

the (our) right frontleg is weird I saw that when uploading to NG, funny I didnt see it earlier. needs work for sure

I'll try whiskers, I did think about it, but I thought it would make it to messy, for such a 'clean' picture.

I do like the cheek lines, I'm sad you dont, luckily you didnt say anything about the ears which were a bitch for me.

I am not sure how I am (in your vision) supposed to change the tail. please bear in mind that I 'have' to stroke the picture.

I did use about 4 reference pictures, one of which linked by you as well, I dont really see problems with the shading. I will however take another good look at it.

thanks, really helpful

Could use some tips on the eyes. she must look as 'cute' as possible. I used the graying technique learned here, but I think the eyes can do better. other tips? also welcome

for the rest I intentionally kept it simple

http://drawception.com/viewgame/GgaZ1NQGB5/aliens-took-my-wa llet/

oke finished

At 7/31/12 08:50 PM, Luwano wrote:

At 7/31/12 03:04 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote: I caved and made an account.

Blame Nae ;P

Hooray! I can't blame her, I want to thank her, though!

While we still wait for 2 longer games to finish, here's another 6 panel game:

http://drawception.com/play/8fIQkwP_KmO4sWp25aDRlkqs5bxI8n7A pjLbvjMurDk/

The sentence that needed to be drawn was a riddle to me. I watched the screen for like 5 min and had no idea what it actually could mean, then I figured I couldnt finish it anyway in 5 min. For me it was almost gibberish. Plz post the result 'cause I am very interested what anyone will make of that sentence, plus what drawing its based on.