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Yeah I noticed that too after I wrote it. Couldn't really think of anything better at the time, so I just went with what I could think of. lol. I have a bad habbit to forget where I was going with things like that if I don't do it all in one sitting, so I didn't want to stop and think of something better. :P

But yeah I'll most likely change it when I think of something that sounds less cliche. :)

If anyone would like to read a story preview I posted on dA I'd glady accept any feedback. And trust me, I love blatant honesty when it comes to this stuff, so if you think it's utter garbage, tell me. :P

http://fyrehart3000.deviantart.com/art/T houghts-Can-Be-Deadly-Preview-182887123

The title's only a working title by the way, was all I could think of at the time. Also I don't usually write in the style I wrote this in, so if it comes across as very iffy that'd probably be why. lol. I actually usually write in more of a "script" format (mostly dialogue, descriptive stuff when necessary but not high in detail) unless it's a character backstory, but since this was a story preview I decided to have a go at that style of writing. Descriptive writing's never been my strong point though so forgive me if it comes across as weird or generic.

Anyway, I will try reading and giving my thoughts on stories other people have posted, but it may take a while since I get very easily distracted. lol.