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At 5/11/07 03:57 PM, PeterPUNCH wrote: u can draw this guy so good.
is dragonbalX ur favourite program to?

Shut up and get the hell outta here!!!
Art Forum is NOT an anime place!

At 5/11/07 03:20 PM, poxpower wrote: Ok for today, the 11th, this one is worth hum...
like..
40 cents

GO

Frank Sinatra...

At 5/11/07 03:03 PM, vonDark wrote:
Oh god, you've been inspired by garfield.

STOP RIGHT THERE! I did not get inspired by garfield, I was just seting an example of a 1 perspective view. I mean: I got inspired by Kid Paddle, but who the hell knows him?!

That comic owns a lot of them, mind you! ^^

Damn.
Oh well, if you wanna do that how about giving the character some more focus? Right now the background is dominating the scene.

Nice idea!

Well, fine. However, it does really seem surrealistic to me how things just appear in front of him with no sign of him moving any where.
How about something that tells me the character is moving?

I've been thinking that myself. The character's too static, right? Normally I make him hop, but I probably forgot.

And what in the second frame is it that doesn't tell me where he is? If you're planning on using the same sceneries and character for other comic, there's really no reason for it.

Missed my point: I want to show it's a regular day. It would look strange if he just FOUND a clover all of the sudden.

Well I don't get it now either. More hammer impact, please?

Because of you, I will give people the hammer impact they're waiting for...

At 5/11/07 02:44 PM, vonDark wrote: Consider redoing the panels. The timing is rather akward.
Also, the way you only use one point of view doesn't really contribute to building up the point of the joke, which I didn't really think was to meaningful, as a matter of fact I had to read it some times to understand what the hell it was about.

Yes, I know this sentence ^^
I'd like to use a 1-perspective comic like Garfield or something.

The scenery also appears to me as being static, if you want to show so much of the background try placing some random elements in the scene to define wherever he is.

I have deleted the scenery: it disturbed me. Final ^^

Some things to do with the panels:
Your first panel is totally uneeded, doesn't really tell me anything else then I can see in the other panels. I would've skipped this one and jumped straight to the second panel to set the mood at once, and devoted one more frame to him finding the horseshoe instead.

Na-ah. It's a regular day. That's why it's there. To show where he actually is.

The way you arranged the elements in the third panel made me see the hammer first, and that killed it for me. As I said, try it out with a seperate panel for the discovery of the horse shoe.

I did that, but people told me they didn't quiet get it. I added the hammer later on.

Then maybe make something a more dramatic panel of the hammer hitting his head.

And why isn't he looking angrily at the horseshoe in the last panel? It would've clarified your message a LOT.

So yeah, some advice. Try looking at other comics and see how they builds up to the final punchline.

Well, thanks, and I'll try another one. Believe me, making comics is fun, but finding inspiration is hard to find when drawing "funny" shorts...

At 5/11/07 01:47 PM, Lopas1 wrote: It is pretty nice..

BUUUUT...?!

that's my point! I need advice, not recognition (or however you spell it)

At 5/11/07 01:28 PM, Wildcarousel wrote: It's a picture I really want to share with everyone, the matter is I wonder how it could be better. Anything would be nice, except for negativity, I don't roll with that. And someone teach me how to color, please. By the way, I used Flash then exported the image.

Critisism without negativity?
Doesn't exist man...

Nice, but the head needs lines as thick as the body. It doesn't match.

A comic drawn by me, scanned by me, coloured by me.
I'm just not 100% happy with it. Colouring went pretty hard and... well you say what's wrong with it.

Give me advice, please.

At 5/11/07 12:25 PM, KatfleaZ wrote: Everybody knows the famous Mona lisa. now we will draw our computer mona lisas wit only MSPAINT!

Shut up.
Seriously.
...
Bad idea.
Spam.
End thread.

At 5/10/07 01:19 PM, TurkeyOnAStick wrote: I recks Bitey can't jump with these legs

Aaaaah... Turkey. You make every pencil having ADD + A coffee addict.
In a good way.

At 5/10/07 03:09 PM, PeterPUNCH wrote: When i goes to partys, i usually go upstairs and wach my old pikachu movies all day.
is so funny :3

Um... Is that by huge coincidence an alt?

No proof needed

At 5/10/07 11:44 AM, jackofall wrote: hi these works are representative of some ideas iv had in the pipeline for a while, and are examples of a kind of creative collage approach to creating a work of art, which i have found rather fullfilling.

It's too empty and too monotonous. More details would be nice.
But it could just be not my cup of coffee

At 5/10/07 10:59 AM, test-object wrote: SHUT THE HELL UP, ALL OF YOURS!!

Let this thread die with the minimum amount of dignity.

No more posting beneath THIS line:
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To say it with the memorable words of Mindchamber:
"I give up"

SHUT THE HELL UP, ALL OF YOURS!!

Let this thread die with the minimum amount of dignity.

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At 5/10/07 06:25 AM, yokojakomoko wrote: I wonder how many NG shirts poxpower has?

He owns an NG t-shirt boutique. Or he simply opened a bank account...

At 5/9/07 04:30 PM, MeMB wrote: Sex.

Life suddenly all makes sence!!!

If you want to get banned for a couple of days, you can just ask it...

At 5/9/07 03:31 PM, zef7 wrote: of the contest?

Pretty obvious, yes.

At 5/9/07 03:40 PM, bird-man wrote: Im sorry but this is spaming.

Rule no. 1: Mods can't spam. Only regular users can.

General!!!

Tom Fulp has been attacked by an evil creation of SYNJ! He didn't stand a chance, SIR!
His games fight back and are winning territory, SIR!

Over and out, Otacon!

Who the hell am I talking to?

At 5/9/07 08:05 AM, MindChamber wrote: why are the signatures in this piece and your alien piece, completely different?

CSI Mindchamber will ban the hell out of you.

"God said:
Let NG be a place filled with sick and genious people with 3 messia.
1 genious, 1 sick and 1 both; thus creating Tom Fulp, Wade Fulp and Stamper.
The Art Forum will be led by the 3d Messias."

Your pic (and the story behind it) made me think Deviant got imported in Newgrounds in a
.jpeg format...

Well... It's nice.

It will have more effect on me when the Flash is done.
It's a GREAT style but an average pic for that style.

At 5/7/07 03:55 PM, InsertFunnyUserName wrote: How's my shit?

No shit, Sherlock.
It's... okay, but it misses a point of attraction.
I searched through the pic and haven't found a "bang"

I'm sorting it in the "good with no buts" section: 7,854/10

At 5/7/07 03:29 PM, NobGoblin wrote: Read above

Mmmh.... makes me think of tribals a bit...

At 5/7/07 03:29 PM, RyanPridgeon wrote: You can't use onRollOver like that because it's a on(); paramater, not an onClipEvent style one.

Mm... Damnit.
Still, If someone knows a way how to go to the 3d
frame with rolling over a button, please tell me. Thanks in advance.

At 5/6/07 06:28 PM, ShirtTurtle wrote: why?

It's Paint, sketched too roughly and my personal taste thinks it's ugly.

this stuff is better than 50% of the shit here.

Don't overact: 20%

And its hilarious.

Yeeeeeeeessss...?

Get a fucking sense of humor.

I have one, thank you very much.

Just calm down, man...
Your hair's not on fire.

At 5/7/07 03:08 PM, Metal-Chuy wrote: Maybe:

brug.onRollOver = function(){gotoAndPlay(3);}

Na-ah... exactly the same.

At 5/6/07 03:33 PM, sysrq868 wrote: brug.onRollOver = function(){gotoAndPlay(3)}

Thanks, I got rid of 1 error but another one came...

Scene=Scene 1, Layer=Layer 5, Frame=1: Line 1: Statement must appear within on handler
brug.onRollOver = function(){gotoAndPlay(3)}

1 word: GIMP!!!

free btw! Now, bugger off...

At 5/7/07 12:07 PM, katfleas wrote: I know, man, it was a friggin joke!

Mmmh... I checked through all of your drawings and they're all quiet blurry.

At 2/22/07 08:44 PM, Killer-DuK wrote: I thought i would try something new. So, here is an abstract drawing of a face.

You're quiet good, actually! I suggest not only use Flash, but also Photoshop or even Paint!
It's a great excercise using more various tools.

Mmmhh... You TAKE requests?!
Awesome!

I'd like Gollem chasing a cat up a tree X)