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What's Good:
-I can see you're planning to get you're own style. You're gonna get to that!
-Flashy colors

What needs improvement:
-In the second drawing, the background isn't clear...
-Dog might need more reality.
Also, try to draw these 2 in different poses. For example in profile, this way we can analyse them better. A good idea is to do something with the eyes...

Really Nice Drawings!
A Four outta Five!

1. Read the post RIGHT above yours... B(
2. Look at the mountain... (400 ft)
3. Next time, please post a picture...

READ FIRST

I saw the mountain, and thanks to me it's f***ed up ^^
I changed the grey shiny background to white! I hope you can still change it...

Pretty okay for a first drawing in Flash. Not much too criticize... Just practice, practice, practice and you'll get there! Maybe you wanna change the eyes. It doesn't fit with the rest of the monkey...

Srry fr doublepost!
They keep getting smaller!

NEXT!!!!

Here's one of mine. Enjoy it...

Improve:
-Chest size
-Chest must move with legs
-Shading
-Let people SEE he's shooting (arms kicked back)
-And of course, a background, but I guess you were planning on that

The rest is good.

Meh... I tried...

Gabe wins... with 8.2 outta 10
Daagahs' would be better if he put some effort in the Background. Make it on a boat with other ships behind it.

At 12/26/06 09:53 AM, Phase-X-807 wrote: Ok,ive changed around a bit,and attempted to colour it.
I know im not that good,i'm just looking for tips on how to get better.

Yes... This one's better, but not very good. You need to put in even more shading and try practicing with sizes. For example, Try giving him a huge nose, in an other drawing tiny ears, in another drawing tiny eyes, etc... And you'll find a style that fits you. This one is styleless... However, certainly not worth a zero.

5,5/10

Yes, I like them... However, be glad people think you took screenshots. This means they're good! Make another one but invent a character. Then nobody can say it's a screenshot.
Except if it is one...

Cool guns and a character that get's blamed for everything... Always cracks me up!
Also, NO ZOMBIES... They REALLY aren't original any more... Make new creatures, people!!

The keyboard doesn't have a right perspective. As well doesn't the desk.
Keep upgrading it. I expect something super! At the moment, it's nice...

Well... here's mine...

PS: Don't think there's ever going to be a top

Not so Extremely good, but I did it in paint... Takes too long to start Photoshop...

further on...

I have a GREAT idea. What if we all just SHUT UP about emo's, it's the only way emo-topics will disappear... Doesn't matter if you hate them or respect them, just stop with these topics. I get sick of these topics, you get sick of these topics and anyone NOT reading my post also.
I hope I made a clear statement...

You're a very special boy...

Pick me... i'd like to see you try... >B)

Happy hollidays from Belgium
Here's my present!!

From: test_object
To: Newgrounds

Something no-one expected...

OMG!!!! Someone help the poor child...

Some people say Jesus was born 2 years AC... I'm not going to analyse this because I'm a disaster to maths... So many psychologists burst to tears. Full-grown men whining like little girls...

Alias: test-object
Web: none
AIM: none

Age: 15
Gender: Male
Habitat: The land of Chocolate
Job: Annoying people

20 reviews
3 Flashes (with Grumpy the Pirahna Plant)

Rank: Safety Patrol
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SAVES: Assisted in the protection of 70 quality entries.

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Batting average: 2.58 / 5.00 (B+)

Ima chargin' mah time capsule ^^

1. What is the Ultimate Question?
2. Why do you know the answer to any question?

If I'd ever mary, I'd take 7 women...

Wow... quite a story. I wonder how she gave birth on her own... Was there no-one to help her? Strange!

PS. What did she do? Did she nibble the baby's cord off or what?

-Luke, I am your father
-You want a piece of me??
-Toto, I've got a feeling we're not in Kansas anymore.
-I love the smell of napalm in the morning.
-E.T. phone home.
-Bond. James Bond.
-You can't handle the truth!
-Mama always said life was like a box of chocolates. You never know what you're gonna get.
-I see dead people.
-Keep your friends close, but your enemies closer.
-NOOOOOOOOOo, YOU MONSTERS!!! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO HER?!?!?!
-Hasta la vista, baby.
-My precious.
-I'm the king of the world!

Only a few ^^

At 12/22/06 11:37 AM, TheRat wrote: Alright, last night I had a dream that I was an Astronaut. We went to lift off and the shuttle exploded. Somehow, everyone falls into the ocean and back to shore and survives. Weird thing is, Discovery lands today and I had no clue it landed until I got up and checked.

Astronaut is a job every kiddy wants. So the reason of your dream dies (could be a person of event) and it falls into pieces. Don't worry, You'll get over it and live a further life.

:I dreamed that i was having sex with tails, I think that is how I became bisexual.

sex=> boy/girlfriend
tails=> best friend (of Sonic)
Easy, at that moment you were in love with your best friend

:I was Sonic, in a field of grass. Suddenly, I felt a squeeze take the life out of me. It was Amy, obviously, but when I turned around, it was a girl from my english class.

Sonic=> childhood hero=> perfect
Your image of perfect got ruined by a known person of you. You give up your dream and get the dream of that person.

:Me, my dad and my brother were riding on motorised bicycles (Just conventional pedal
:bikes with a little motor attached) on a race track. Then some guy came screaming
:past on a powerful racing motorcycle. He nearly knocked me over. I saw that he had
:crutches on resting on each side of his bike. We stopped in the pit area and the guy
:with the crutches was already there. He was a real weirdo. He had a gaunt, haggard
:face and looked like something out of a Stephen King novel. I told him that he should
:be more careful that he doesn't hit someone.
:Then he attacked me with his crutches. Me and my brother got into a really big fight
:with him. The weirdo was hitting me with his crutches scross my legs and it seemed
:to be hurting a lot. After a little while I grabbed a metal pipe and started hitting him
:across the head with it. But everything was in slow motion and I couldn't hit him hard
:enough. I wasn't causing any real damage. Then my dad walked over with a hangun
:and started shooting at him. I didn't see him die and we immediately appeared
:elsewhere.
:We were then in some kind of military tribunal. It was held in the catholic church for
:some reason. There no formalities, everyone there was dressed in filthy combats.
:The weirdo was back and walked through the door into where we were. I was
:screaming at the armed soldiers standing guard "Shoot him, he'll kill us all!". He pulled
:out a grenade, pulled out the pin and throwed it towards me. I shouted "GRENADE"
:and jumped behind a partition of some kind. I then woke up on the floor, I had thrown
:myself out of bed and onto the floor. Dad ran up wondering what was the matter,
:apparantly he heard me shout grenade and wondered what was up.

Man, this is WAAAAY too long! ^^
Your social life will almost be blown off by an easy to see problem. You try to prevent this problem for others, but you work yourself in to problems this way.
The solution you think that will work isn't having the effect, so you'll search to the last safe resort. However, this will not scare the problem, and the last thing you
see to do is preventing for harm. Personally, I think the problem stands for a fear you can't conquer. This is preety logical, but do something about it NOW!
It's a safer way...