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Please reply here if your interested. You don't need to do colouring, just the animations.

Will you paid? Hell yeah! how much? we can discuss this but around $100 for about a few days work.

Why help?Cause it will help your profolio and it will help me!

How good do you need to be?decent or better. Im not expecting gods work here.

At 5/23/11 03:44 PM, DeftAndEvil wrote: How come the alien cannot just control Arya the entire time?

Well I didn't want to say it now but the alien explains that since he got hit from her grandpa he lost some important cells based upon taking control of Arya. To be honest its more of a mystery atm but the alien will be explaining that in this chapter when arya even asks that own question, and I don't want to reveal any "critial" information on the story just yet.

When the hobo was killed, why wasn't Arya detained? She may not have been a suspect, but the police needed a witness.

She was, but I didn't bother putting that dialog in at the moment. Like I also said there were countless others. I know I didn't write that in anywhere, but don't worry I will be putting this in.

What is the intention of the worm? It came from a galaxy far, far away just to murder? Motives please.

You will learn about them later on, its really going to be exciting!

If what the alien says is correct, why does Arya enjoy killing?

The alien effects her, before she was a cheerful and honest child. Now she is different and the alien is explaining that to her.

Why does the alien continue to possess Arya? Why doesn't he pick a stronger/more influential vessel, such as the president of the US (or whatever country this takes place in)?

Thats a good question, but thats because he can't just leave his host. He is somewhat inner connected with the child since the 'mutation' or 'take over'. Like I said before since he lost some cells from the attack, he couldn't take control of arya fully. Sure he can leave the body and use someone else, but Arya is already following the alien and since she isn't really betraying him or not doing what she says, why would he leave? A human has a choice to follow the alien, well in this case at least.

What is the direction of this story? The worm controls everyone-the end?

No comment on this as of yet, and the worm's goal is not just to murder and take control of the earth. Its bigger than that. But the direction is at world conquest and I'm not going to lie about that. But you also need to understand is that arya is now immortal but she isn't invincible.

Anyway's I know there are MANY questions, but they will be answered in the flash. If not then in future episodes / chapters. I guess I just wanted to know how the story is so far.

Let me just say this first before reading.This is rough work and it is just what is going to be happening, no dialog is written here. This story is based upon one main character. This is just the first episode / chapter, there is plenty more to come.

Here is a rough sketch of the family tree. Ignore the evil/good.
Here is the main character (rough work atm).
Here is the early work of the flash (its still work in progress, only spent a few hours on it so far).

So here is the story now, make sure to have the family tree with you or else you may get confused.

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Scene 1:

You see an meteor in the dark sky. The Profit family goes for a small vacation to see their grandparents. Klaus was unable to attend the vacation due to work. They go there by a yacht and some maids / butlers come with them. You see an overview of the island. You see Arya talking with the other children, and then Olivia comes in to inform the children that they have arrived.

Scene 2:

The whole family is at the dock, you hear slight chatter among the family adults, but your p.o.v is with Arya so you barely hear them (they are talking about their luggage and that it will be there later and that they will be brought by the maids / butlers). Arya is humming some small song, and then Arya's father comes and tells her that they are going to be walking to the house since it is not that far away. You see the kids go and run off ahead of the parents. Logan bullies Arya but then you see the parents come from the distance and then Logan stops.

Scene 3:
The family arrives at the house, then Arya runs to grandpa and hugs him. John and Noah say to the kids "go run off and play while the parents work, make sure to come back soon we will be having dinner!" Black screen comes and then you see the family eating dinner. You hear some small chatter, and Grandma is wondering where Klaus is. A few moments later, the kids want to go play again since they finished early but Arya wants to go hiking with Grandpa like last summer. Arya goes hiking after 1 hour (its 10 to 11 pm right now). They start looking at the sky and then they start seeing a bright star, but then it starts getting bigger, then it hits near them. After a few seconds, they both get up and get closer to the meteor. An alien worm comes out of the meteor, and it attacks grandpa. It fails because grandpa hits it with his cane. The alien worm decides to go for the lower being; Arya is scared and does not move. It goes in her skin from her hand and into her brain. You Arya having black eyes and Adam looks terrified. A few moments later, she falls down unconscious, and then the grandpa comes towards her slowly. Arya spurts out the word, "hungry" in Arya's own voice but a bit darker than usually. You then see her arm point to grandpa and then some weird alien stuff comes out and (you don't see what happens exactly) and then you see grandpas body mutilated all over the meteor so it looks like it was smashed from the impact, most of the blood is there but almost all the meat is gone. Arya then goes back into her normal eyes. Her body is covered with blood and then she goes unconscious.

Scene 4:

Everyone comes rushing to the death, kids are pulled back just before they see ANYTHING, but the parents see all the gore, Arya gets pulled up by john just when she wakes up (and john is all happy because his only daughter is alive). Arya asks what happened, john ignores her and picks her up like a doll and hugs her (he can't see her face, no one can) asks are you okay, she says weakly, yes I am daddy and then her eyes go black yet again for a second and smiles. Grandma is informed when they arrive back to the house and she cries. The next day, they go back to the city again to have the funeral. You see Klaus there this time.

Scene 5:

After a few days of the funeral, while she is walking home from school to the subway alien starts talking with her; at first she is scared because she thinks she is hearing things. However, in fact, it is the alien and it is communicating with her. The alien explains to her that now since he is inside her she has to change her life to fit his needs, he explains that she has changed for the better but she does not agree. He says to her that now she will be much more intelligent and stronger. That she has a lot of power now and that no one can stop her anymore, that no goal is unreachable. He also explains about her life and how she will no longer die like the rest of the humans, she does not quite understand but she just listens in fear. He then explains that she will no longer have any feelings or emotions. She notices it when she talks to people. She does not like being happy or nice, in fact she enjoys other peoples suffering. However, the alien says to continue putting up the mask. After a few weeks with the Alien Arya becomes friendlier with him and you also see her becoming dark. One day while walking to the subway with her maid, the alien is telling her that he needs to feed, she was wondering what he was talking about so the alien explained. After some thought Arya understood what she needed to do. Now in the subway cart with it being full, she was beside a homeless man. She smiled at him and then he smiled back greedily. While no one was paying attention, she let her eyes go black and then the thing came out of her hand and it ate him whole. Obviously, everyone started panicking because there was blood splatter everywhere. The wet maid comes to her and grabs her so that she can be safe. She closes Arya's eyes, and then a few moments later you see the wet maid talk to the police about the incident. The police look at her, and ask her what she saw. She replies saying "I didn't see anything mister." in a frightened and childish tone. So, the police let the maid and Arya go.

Scene 6:

You now see John and Emily worried about Arya saying "thank god your safe!". John says to Arya that you no longer need to be scared; he explains to her that now she gets two bodyguards to keep her safe and that the maid will no longer be with her anymore. John tells her the names of the bodyguards but since the alien told her to keep that mask up of being a cheerful idiot like how she was before she ignores her dad and calls the one to the left "lefty" and the one to the right "righty". The parents pull a poker face, and the bodyguards go like wtf, they look at each other but in the end shrugs at each other and then go whatever. Parents both go away after being a bit embarrassed, but that is after saying they have to go to work again. Then Arya starts walking to her room, and then goes to a drawer where there is some candy, but then her eyes go black and then she infects them with some alien worm/bug. Then the bugs go inside the candy and her eyes go back normal. She turns around and then offers the two bodyguards some candy. The candies were in fact a type of mind control that the alien can use, and that Arya can use too. Then Arya says to lefty and righty kneel before your god and they obey.

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Please tell me what you think of the story so far? If there are any corrections I need to make or if you have any suggestions that would be great.

I did one of my main characters for that new flash I am creating, but I highly doubt I will continue with this high of a quality. It would take me forever to do the rest of the characters, this character took 2 hours (I am using a mouse mmmk and im no art professional). I think ill down grade my character art, but I like this look for my main character :) hopefully I can get some feedback.

I have a higher res and quality link here.

At 5/19/11 04:14 AM, Flowers10 wrote:

At 5/18/11 11:53 PM, tabshell wrote: Here is a small update, I drew a yacht for my next scene. I would love feed back for any of the drawings if anyone has any.

try adding shades and highlights and this could be really awesome!

Updated the yacht, I added some shading and fixed up the front with a cleaner lining.

Here is a small update, I drew a yacht for my next scene. I would love feed back for any of the drawings if anyone has any.

Hey everyone I know I'm knew and all but I plan to post some of my art here. I'm currently working on a project that should be pretty "epic" when its done. I will be posting art here every so and then. Anyways I should shut up now.