i posted this in thw wrong section...but it got locked. So i have to post it here. I made this poem with my cousin.
Its sad at the end...well
hope you enjoy it.
Join this poem club if you are good at poems. It must be the topic listed.
but here is a poem story about someone who has a crush on someone but joins the army.
heres my poem
Poem Made by Spartan0794 & eric
8th grade,
i saw a girl,
being picked on by other girls.
I told them to back off. So they did.
I helped her up, helped her pick up the books as she dropped as she was being bullied.
She held my arm, she said "thanks".
"Thanks for being a kind friend to me".
And so she went to class.
I wanted to tell her, that i love her, but im too shy and i dont know why.
10th grade,
i saw i girl, the same girl being picked on before
I saw some guys harassing her.
I told them, Leave her alone.
So i fought with one guy, he got beaten up.
She said, wow...were...you...the one years ago?
I said yes.
Then she said...its good to see you my friend.
I wanted to tell her, that i love her, but im too shy, and i dont know why.
12th grade, high school graduation
She wore that buitiful dress, it caught me in the eyes.
She was like...the most buitiful thing i ever imagined though the party.
I started training for the army...then i went to the base, St Peters Army Base
I wanted to tell her, that i lover her, but im too shy, and i dont know why.
One year later, St Peters Milatary Base
I did my warm ups. I did everything Sargent Jones told me to.
But someone joined my squad that i was in.
That wasnt the only someone.
It wasnt.
It was the most pretty thing i have ever sighted in the base.
It was her, the one that i had a crush on.
She said...wow...i..didnt know you were here.
I was so shocked. I couldnt belive she joined the army.
She was in my squad.
wow...
I wanted to tell her, that i love her, but im too shy, and i dont know why.
9 months later,
Basic training was complete.
But...General Greener was sending us to Iraq. He sent 28 squads.
And the squad i was in was going.
That was me, the one i love, and 14 others in the squad.
We had a normal sized squad...of 16.
But we loaded on the plane...then said good-bye to the families.
And the plane took off.
16 hours later, in iraq.
We were in iraq. We unloaded our baggages and stuff.
General Clark was there. Giving orders to over 200 men and woman.
Our squad was ordered to patrol Graquk, a town of a population of 23 thousand.
We were ordered to go the next week.
The next week...
Todays the day. The day.
Me and my loved were in the same HUMMVE .
We were talking...about our familes.
She said, she was glad to be my friend.
10 minutes later, in Graquk,
Everything was okay...until...
An RPG hit 5 feet away from someone elses hummve.
I felt that.
It wasnt a good feeling either.
We were ordered to get out. There were 32 of us in total in the city.
Privite Fry was hit in the face with a round, and was killed.
4 others were down.
but...
My loved one...was hit 5 times by AK-47 rounds.
I moved her to the other hummve.
3 minutes later,
I keep yelling to hang in there. But here is what she said.
You know, i always wanted to tell you this
But since im going to heven...
I always wanted to tell you that i love you...but im just to shy...and i dont know why.
Then i told her
I love you too.
Then she passed away.
I cried...couldnt belive this day
The battle between us and the iraqis were over.
7 soildiers were killed in action.
Funeral,
She was in the coffin. Her younger sister cried
"Sister dont go!!!"
Her parents were sobbing.
I felt guilty for her death.
Then...i got up...told her parents about this.
What had happened.
And how was i responsible for this.
Days,
I left the funeral...
never to be seen again.
I was gone...
gone
As soon as i left...
i said to my self.
I always wanted to tell her that i loved her, but i was too shy...i dont know why.
Then i was gone...
forever
