Part 3 Boiled Over

He felt as if he was in there for about 20 minutes, he had to pick up the pace or he would be severely scalded. He pushed forward coming to twist and turns but finally reached another fork, he went with his guts and chose to go down even though it was even darker still.

Now moving by feel alone Arthur was in total darkness. He couldn't afford to slow down so he continued on. He came to a fork and chose the left path. There was another fork a few seconds further and he went right. There was still another fork, he went right again but after a minute it was a dead end. He crawled backwards and chose left.

Now with only a few minutes left he had to chose the right path or else he'll be burned. Then he saw light, it came from the right path, he followed it and came out, more or less rolled out, into another open area. Only a few seconds later and the sound of water could be heard rushing through the pipes.

"Congratulations, you've made it so far, I'm sorry it will have to end here." it was Mr. Pierrot again.

"Where the hell are you, show yourself," he was frantic.

"I'm sure we'll be meeting real soon, but if you can bring your attention to your right. You'll see your lovely wife suspended above a water chamber. In about 10 or so minutes the chain she is suspended by will be lowered and she'll be boiled alive. I hope you enjoy stew." Mr. Pierrot walked out now from behind one of the machines. He was wearing some unusual armor. It covered his whole body and it was very noisy.

"What the hell is that?" asked Arthur.

"Oh this, this is my steam-powered body enhancement suit." He picked up a steel bar and bent it with a little effort. "Now imagine that was you." He was laughing again. "This lever behind me is the only way to save your lovely wife from taking a hot bath."

Arthur knew that he couldn't just charge at him and expect to get through. He had to come up with a plan. He saw some chains and came up with an idea. He grabbed them, but while he was doing that Jean Pierrot was coming toward him. Arthur was able to grab a chain and rolled under a conveyor.

Jean Pierrot smashed the conveyor. "Hiding won't help you Mr. Nobles. You're wife wouldn't like it if her husband was a coward." He was having to much fun with this.

Arthur saw an open spot in his armor, there were gears moving everywhere. He tied an end of the chain to a thick valve and waited for Mr. Pierrot to come closer.

Mr. Pierrot now had a steel bar in his hand, "Oh joy," He swung the bar around in an attempt to hit him. Arthur was fast on the other hand, the armor couldn't move fast enough to avoid Arthur shoving the chain into the opening on the armor.

The armor gave a great screech and began to buckle. The rider's scream couldn't be heard over all the gears grinding. The armor was twisting in ways the human body shouldn't, it could be inferred that the rider was now dead or pretty close. The machine came to a halt.

Arthur pulled the lever and the chain holding Catherine stopped lowering. Arthur found his way up to the platform close to her and pulled her over and untied her. She was unconscious, probably from shock. He carried her out the door to the factory.

"Looks like it was a job well done." Arthur was wrong unfortunately, as there really was a problem with the boilers which blew up soon after they left. The factory was burned to the ground with all the inhabitants inside.

***

Several months after the incident Catherine had her baby, a healthy daughter. Arthur was a little disappointed at that but they can always try for another. Business is as usual, it's good enough to keep his family fed and clothed but not really enough to get them ahead.

Part 2, Boiled Over

Arthur was now alone, the only sounds other than those you would hear in a factory were his struggling and the pendulum swinging. With every pass it lowered about a cm, in about 10 minutes the blade will reach Arthur. He was pushing and pulling on the ropes. They didn't seem to loosen. He pulled and even tried to knock the chair over, but it was bolted to the ground.

He let out a scream of aggravation as pendulum was now about 4 minutes away. With one last bout of strength he was able to get his arm free. He used that to untie the other. It will only be a few minutes until the blade reaches the crown of his skull. He was struggling to with the knot behind his back. He could only guess now that any second the blade will reach him.

Luckily for him now was not his time and he was able to remove the knot just in time before the blade reached him. The chair, was a pressure switch and without him on it he could hear a passage open up.

Mr. Pierrot's voice came from one of the tube networks. Unfortunately for Arthur Nobles, the labels were removed. "I see you were able to escape the chair, well there is a lot more factory to cover. I don't want you to get the idea of alerting any authorities, you're oh so precious wife is with me now."

"Don't listen to him dear, get help."

"Leave my wife out of this," there was a tone of fear in his voice.

"I'm afraid I can't do that, this is the most fun I've had in such a long time. I also don't want lovely Catherine to miss this. You see, we can see you, but you can't see us." This was true, they were behind a new type of mirrored glass. "I hope you enjoy a good brawl since my men will be coming in few minutes. If not, I'd suggest you run. Farewell Mr. Nobles."

Voices could be heard approaching. They were far too many for Arthur to handle so against his pride he made a run for it. He went down the new passage that the chair opened. The passage was long and dark and there wasn't much to be seen. The music of the factory could be heard all around him. The haunting medley of hisses and clanks.

Unfortunately for Arthur there wasn't much more path to go down. At the end was a pit, a chasm if you will, and behind he could hear the men growing closer. There was an intricate set of gears which could be reach the higher levels.

He had to make a move now or else he'll be captured by and his wife will never be rescued. He took a few steps back and dove across the chasm and landed on a level gear. It was able support his weight and moved at a manageable pace. He grasped a adjacent gear and began his ascent.

Several times on the way up Arthur almost lost a finger. He also heard that some of the men who followed him met their end. But this was no time to be careless, Arthur was near an opening and he had only one shot at it.

His escape was almost close enough to jump through, Arthur saw some chains, he was able to grab one and pushed off the gear. With some luck Arthur was able to make it across. The climb took a lot out of him, and what is ahead will deal more.

For when he went through the passage he saw something that could easily end his life, giant pistons were pumping all around him. The path was very linear so if he made one mistake it was the end. Somehow one of the men was able to reach the top. Arthur could feel his presence. He took a deep breath and ran through the first piston. He was able to get through before it slammed down.

Arthur tried to keep at least one piston between him and the sole pursuer. It wasn't long before he reached the end of this ordeal. The path wasn't that long, but it was terrifying and Arthur hoped he'd never have to go through that again.

Arthur kept running until he reached a dead end, there was no where to go, the door was locked and the guy following him was right there. Mr. Pierrot began to speak, "I see we got ourselves into a little predicament. The man in front of you wants to tear you limb from limb, and the door behind you won't let your through. I tell you what, I'll open the door for you.

The door behind Arthur unlocked and Arthur ran inside, it was pitch black and he couldn't see anything. All of a sudden a dull light filled the room and Arthur saw that the room was full of swords. He grabbed a rapier and stood in a fencing stance. The other man grabbed one as well.

Mr. Pierrot spoke again, "splendid, absolutely splendid. Let me tell you what, if you put on a good enough show I might just let you and your wife go. If you don't though, I'm going to enjoy ravaging every inch of her body. So, good luck.

When Mr. Pierrot was done speaking the man lunged at Arthur. He parried the attack. Arthur threw a counter attack but that was blocked. Each attack was met with another and they weren't able to go anywhere. Luckily for Arthur he was able to knock the guy back until he was at the end of a cat walk. He grabbed a chain and descended to the lower levels. Arthur did just the same.

Arthur stumbled a little after realising he was standing on a conveyor. Footing was very difficult and the man was able to gain control before Arthur and he attacked again. This time Arthur fell down and couldn't get back up. Arthur deflected hit after hit until he realised that he was nearing a furnace. He reached his arms up and caught something, it was a hook used to carry stuff around the factory. It hoisted him up and took him around the workshop, higher and higher.

The man was right behind him, and they fought while hanging from dizzying heights. Arthur was beginning to tire, the guy on the other hand wasn't. Arthur jumped off and landed on another conveyor, the man followed. It was do or die, Arthur lunged but the man deflected the sword down, Arthur grabbed the guys leg and he fell to his doom. The sound of him landing was a sickening splat.

He dropped the sword and found his way to the other side of the work floor. He opened the door and in front of him was a maze of pipeworks going every way. There was a single entrance.

Mr. Pierrot could be heard again. "I see that you were able to survive my men. I guess that just means that there will be more fun for me. You're at the labyrinth now, I hope you have fun. The tunnel goes every which way up down, left right, over and under. Have fun, but you better hurry, your wife can't keep herself off of me."

"Help me, he-" she was interrupted.

"Enough of that, have fun Mr. Nobles, that labyrinth will hot water running through it in about half an hour. I'd get going if I were you. I got the path idea from Mr. Konami."

Arthur had no idea what this meant but he crawled into the entranceway. There wasn't much room to move around in. At some points the path would get tight and at others there would be almost enough room to sit down. The path began to curve and Arthur met his first break in the path. He could go either left, up and over, or right. He decided to choose the right path but that quickly became a dead end.

"At least I can see," this was partly true, Arthur was near the exterior of the maze which allowed light to get in from the windows. He worked his way back and chose to go up instead. The It wasn't far until he had to choose another path, this time he went straight ahead. This seemed to be the right choice since it lead too another fork. It was down, left, and right.

Arthur chose to go left, but found that it quickly became too tight for him to move. He took the right path as well, but that led to a pit. He had no choice but to go back and down. It wasn't that far of a drop, he was able to right himself. Unfortunately it got almost too dark to see.

Part 1, Boiled Over

Back in the 19th century there was this unremarkable man. Nothing about him was special, he had a wife, and was in the middle class. He wore a vest that was tan and made of cotton with had buttons that were made of brass. Under that he wore a white shirt which often got dirty in his line of work, there were soot stains all over it. His pants were also tan but made of a khaki material. Black leather shoes completed the attire, and one could easily see that they were well-worn.

His hair was short and brown, with knots here and there. He also had some serious stubble around his chin and a moustache that laid flat against his upper lip and curved down. Of course there were plenty of other gentlemen who could fit this description but our story isn't about them now is it. Our man's name is Arthur Nobles, and he is an engineer, specializing in steam.

Now Arthur's day started off like any other, he would sit behind his desk, read the paper, and on especially slow days he would take a nap. Most of the time his job consist of someone saying their car broke down, or they can't get their water heater to work. These jobs can be done fast and don't get as much pay.

One time Arthur tried to upgrade someone's vehicle and it ended up catching on fire and singing his left eyebrow clean off. He decided that maybe that isn't the best choice for his line of business.

This day though a curious man would walk through the door. He looked to be in his 30's, maybe his 40's. There was an air of urgency surrounding him.

"I need your help, one of my boiler's at my steel mill burst and now my men are refusing to work. Without the boilers nothing can move around the factory." He sounded as if he needed help. Arthur figured that there would be no one else coming in today so he agreed to go check it out.

"Oh thank you so much, my name is Jean Pierrot. You will be paid handsomely for you work. Now I'm going to be busy all day so I was wondering if you could come by tomorrow instead." This didn't bother Arthur, what also didn't bother him was the crooked smile that Jean Pierrot gave him.

Jean Pierrot left and Arthur decided now was a good time to close up. On his way home he spotted a young man riding a curious instrument. It ran on two wheels and beneath the seat. Arthur asked if he could check it out.

The young man didn't see anything wrong with it and let our protagonist check it out. He paid close attention to the engine, it was very small and didn't have a water tank. "What do you use as a fuel source?" asked Arthur.

"Petroleum," replied the young man, "it's a brand new source of fuel. It'll probably beat out steam and coal power." The young man picked up his motor vehicle and pulled a cord which started the engine up. A grey smoke came out of an exhaust pipe and the vehicle took off.

"Hey, what do you call that thing?" yelled Arthur.

"A motor bike. Unfortunately I can't get a patent for it until I prove that this thing will run properly." With that said the young man lost balance and fell. "Still got a few kinks to work out."

"Good luck with that." said Arthur who now left to go home.

***

On the outskirts of the city sparks could be seen in the second story of a factory. Inside you could see Jean Pierrot moving around like a madman. "Finally, after all this time, I am prepared to exact my revenge on that bastard for stealing my woman." Sparks flew again and quickly died.

"It's finished, after months of sleepless nights it's finished. There's no way he'll survive this. Aha aha bwahahahahahahaa!" He continued to laugh later into the night, for he has created a great monstrosity, it was shaped exactly as a human body. It was manufactured in a way so that it's user's strength could be increased 10 fold.

Elsewhere at Arthur's place of residence, his wife, named Catherine, was preparing a meal for him. She was pregnant, about 6 months is a good guess, and she had gorgeous red hair. It's easy to see why someone would get upset about losing this.

"So how was work?" asked Catherine. She was now setting the table for their meal.

"Average, I do have work for tomorrow though, a strange gentlemen wants me to check out the boilers in his factory." No one had any real interest in this conversation and the meal was silent. After that the two resided to the bed room where they together and talked about the child.

"I hope it's a girl," said Catherine. "I can teach her how to cook and sew."

"Well I want a boy, that way I can teach him the trade and one day he'll surpass me." the two went on into the night, until one of them could no longer hold their eyes open. The two drifted off and prepared for the day tomorrow.

***

The morning fog was thick. Arthur had a lot of problems trying to find the factory. He met an old man and asked for directions. This particular old man looked way out of place, his skin was all in folds and face was cracked in all directions. What little hair he had on his head was silver and he had a great a beard.

"I wouldn't go there if I were you, a lot of strange activity has been going on there recently." The old man told him.

"Listen, I have a job to do, I'm not afraid of some silly little rumors." Arthur said sternly.

"Don't say I didn't warn you," he showed Arthur the way. He thanked him and left on his way.

Arthur arrived at the factory, well on the outside it looked like a factory. He opened the door and it was dark on the inside. "Mr. Pierrot, I'm here to inspect the boilers." There was no answer. Arthur took a few steps forward when the door behind him closed. He was cast in darkness.

All around him he could hear noises, the sound of the steam coming out of the pipes, the metallic clank of the machines as they ran, and a strange scraping sound which was coming closer. Before he could register the sound he was knocked on the head by something solid and hard and was knocked out.

He awoke and couldn't move at all. He was also blindfolded. Arthur struggled but the rope binding him didn't budge.

"I see you've finally awoken Mr. Nobles. Not much work is going to get done I'm afraid." the man burst out in laughter.

"Is that you Mr. Pierrot, what the hell is going on?"

"You don't remember me that well do you. Well I wouldn't expect you to, the reason we are here today happened a year ago. That's about the time you and Catherine got married correct." He was laughing again.

"How do you know my wife? What have you done to her?" Arthur was starting to get frightened.

"All these questions, I guess that's all you can really do. Well I guess I'll tell you, before you met your beloved wife I was courting her. I brought her flowers and gifts but these never really caught her eye. But then YOU came along with all your gadgets and gizmos and she instantly became infatuated with you. It broke my heart. But then I decided that if I couldn't have her no one could. So I bought this factory and studied up on engineering. After all those months of hard work I was able to complete my true vision. The Steam Asylum. Bwahahahaha." After he said those words he ripped off Arthur's blindfold.

The entire area seemed to be alive, everything was moving in and out, up and down, and left and right. The factory seemed to be a spawn of the devil if he had any interest in this kind of stuff. Above Arthur was a pendulum. It began to swing left and right, lowering with each swing.

"Well this is where I make my grand exit. Adieu Monsieur Nobles." With that Mr. Pierrot went through a door that was behind Arthur. A tumbling sound was heard and the door was locked. "I'd try and get out of those ropes if I were you." With that Jean Pierrot was gone.

http://some-stupid-idiot.newgrounds.com/
news/post/388852

I've done more with the story, I've made the antagonist more demented and added more stuff.

At 10/15/09 01:54 AM, FalanX wrote: What songs are they playing?
I'm going to see them on Nov. 12th.

I remembered most of the line-up, there was the Intro song, Bloodlines, Burn The Earth, Hatredcoptor, Dethsupport, Black Fire Upon Us, Awaken Mustakrakish, Murmaider, Thunderhorse, Birthday Dethday, Dethjingle, The Gears, Go Into the Water and Fansong. That was the St. Louis set list, I'm not sure about your venues setlist. Just so you know, The Gears is an awesome video to watch.

At 10/14/09 09:13 PM, TheSporkLord wrote: im pretty sure its actually kirk hammet and some other people who play for the cartoon, and then there's the actual band

Only Brendon Small and Gene Holden play for the show. They are both quite talented. The lead Guitarist is Mike Keneally who played with Frank Zappa, and bass player Bryan Beller. Seeing them play was great, their style is so reserved yet the give off this immense energy when they play.

At 10/14/09 04:01 PM, iateamexican wrote: Going to see Franz Ferdinand at the Manchester Apollo this coming Tuesday.
Not exactly the same thing, but still.

Definitely not exactly the same. Who else is playing? I actually liked those guys but I wouldn't go to a concert for one band.

At 10/14/09 04:44 PM, Hellraiser wrote: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wS6cDCrkt AE
They play live with the cartoon projection in the back.

We didn't get Deth Harmonic, we got The Gears though.

At 10/14/09 03:59 PM, SomaGuye wrote: What the hell is wrong with you? You got to see Mastodon AND High on Fire and you're happy about Dethklok?

I enjoyed High on Fire a lot, and Mastodon "mesmerised" me. But the place went wild when Dethklok came on.

They perform like a regular band and they show a video on a monitor behind them. Murmaider was awesome.

It was probably the Highlight of my year, far better than graduation. The crowd I was in was awesome, we moshed and had a great time. The other bands were good too, except for Converge, they sucked. I've never been to a metal concert before and I have to say, I went both deaf and temporarily blind at one point.

If I had a camera I would have taken pictures. All I got are some reall fuzzy ones taken with my cellphone.

Ideas for Steam Factory of Death

I've been going through several ideas when I write for my horror. Here are some ideas I chose, you can add some if you like. I also found I'm much better at action and comedy than horror. So don't expect to be scared as much as entertained.

Also what type of factory could accomodate. Textile mills can't have everything.

Pipework Maze
Pendulum Swing
Giant Gear Climb
Strapped to a conveyor about to enter a furnace
Rivet Gun?
Piston Tunnel (Thwomps)
Battle with steam powered mech suit
Sword fight on conveyors, gears, catwalks, and on the ground
Creepy old person
Should I go Steamboy?

As you know there are plenty of stupid people in this world. Some more stupid that others. I found that you can find most of them just by waiting in line, any type will do.

One of my favourites was while waiting in line at McDonald's, the only thing nearby at the time, there was well this quite large women. She ordered a double quarter pounder with cheese, double royale with cheese, supersized meal and she said, "Make the soda diet, I'm trying to cut back,". What is a little bit of sugar going to do with the pound of salt your about to eat.

one time at a movie theatre, unfortunately not the Chevrolet variety, there was a woman, luckily in another line, who waited till she got to the ticket counter to pick out her movie, the thing was she didn't even know the title. I bet you can guess that her description went along the lines of, "you the movie with that guy who does that thing and then some other things happen," well it was kinda like that. Well in the other line I got my ticket for Zombieland and well I could only guess at how long she stood there.

http://some-stupid-idiot.newgrounds.com/
news/post/383505

Here is my story revised and well pretty much redone.

Boiled Over seems to be an appropriate title.

http://some-stupid-idiot.newgrounds.com/

Check mine out, if you review it, I'll review yours.

Let me put the movie this way, myself and 4 other friends went to see that movie and let me tell you, the intro is literally the best intro ever. Slow motion to Metallica's For Whom the Bell Tolls. There is enough said.

And Bill "Fucking" Murray.

I'll try even harder this time. I'll reach down I'll spill my guts, I might even crack a joke or two. My next entry will be both bigger and better.

At 9/24/09 09:04 PM, HibiscusKazeneko wrote: Urusei Yatsura?

Yup

At 9/24/09 02:45 AM, someone-else wrote: So did you have an operation or what?

If by operation, you mean killed someone and took their kidneys and placed them in my body then yes. I'm lucky that guy and I shared blood types.

First thing's first I wake up to find that my legs have transformed into french fries, but I realised those were just my pyjamas. Then I go to eat breakfast but there is no one at home. I go to the fridge and inside is a brain. But then I realise it's just a package of ground beef.

I take a walk around the house when all of a sudden in the sky I see Mothra, and I don't mean any old moth, but mothra. It's destroying buildings and fighting Godzilla. It's soon to my amazement that I am actually in Tokyo. Now I'm wondering how in the world I ended up in Tokyo of all places. So I began to ask around but everyone is yelling and screaming and I could understand a word coming out of their mouths.

Out of the corner of my eye I see something that almost broke my heart, a poor little kitten was lying in the middle of the road, oblivious to the fact that Godzilla is about to step on it. Without hesitation I rescue the cat in triple take manoeuvre, you have no idea how hard those are, but all is well as the cat is safe.

I place the kitten down on the ground and it leads me somewhere. Being in Tokyo any road I walk down will be a road I've never been down before, but still the cat leads me down a road I've never been down. All of a sudden it went dark and I found myself no longer in Tokyo but a moist cave. I look around and I find someone, he says his name is Gipetto.

I asked him where was I and where did that kitty go. He says "Who the hell are you and what happened to my soup?" This guy was insane, I couldn't let him live, so I did a close-up punch to the skull and he was digested. Digested?... I'm in a fucking fish dude. I begin to panic, but I see a light and the cat. I run toward the light and end up in space flying an X-wing.

Holy Shit what the hell is going on. "Don't be afraid, just use the force and everything will be all right." Dude who the fuck is talking to me, get out of my head. So I kind of just fly around for a bit until something is behind me.

Pew pew pew- right thrusters damaged, fix that would you robot.

I preform a barrel roll and I deflect the next shot fired at me by the tie fighter. I then do a backflip and shot a homing charged shot and take it out. Before this day could get any weirder my ship blows up and I end up in a giant factory full of orange midgets and candy everywhere.

To my left was a chocolate river, I dive in that shit for some odd reason and I drink the whole river. Some old dude comes out of nowhere and says what the hell are you doing here, this is private property you jackass. He plays a little flute then the midgets start singing.

Oompa Loompa Doopity Doo
Have I got a little story for you.
Living your life in a very strange way,
don't know how to get throught the day,
you wake up in Tokyo,
and you follow a little ne-ko.
What the hell is wrong with you?
Oompa Loompa Doopity Doo
you better be glad that you weren't whale stew
What do you do when you drink a river
I have no clue but I have a sliver
What do you think of that man up there
Don't you think he's slightly odd
Maybe he's a lunatic
Oompa Loompa Doopity Doo

Enough singling I get the picture, my day was pretty fucked up, all I want to do is go home and sleep.

Home says the old man, you are home. I look around and see that I'm back in my living room, and there is that darn cat.

What the hell did you do to me cat?

The cat just looks at me then walks away. I then look down at my chest and see that that son of a bitch took my kidneys. Well, let's just say that my new kidneys kick ass.

Wow, ummm just wow.

Dude, my bedsheets use to have the same pattern as those.

Ani is pretty awesome.

At 9/23/09 09:07 PM, 95688kage wrote: i just watched music on youtube.

No, just no, you don't watch music you listen to it. There are music programs or last.fm where you can listen to music whenever you please.

If it was a Twilight fangirl you'd be dead.

Scooby Doo was always one of my favourite shows throughout childhood. I know 3 of the intros, Scooby Doo, the one with the guest stars, and A Pup Named Scooby Doo. Man were those the times. Now we have these hacks who couldn't draw shit without a computer.

I just finished watching Nadia, and I so called the Marie Sanson hook up.

Probably one of the few originals.

Space bitches.

Now I love movies like Wall-E and Toy Story, but I still have a large place in my heart for the 2D animations I grew up with. I also prefer 2D to 3D because of the fact that it is much easier to look at and it doesn't do all these lame camera effects. One movie I saw recently in 2D was Ponyo, and that movie made me feel like a kid again, 3D movies can't seem to do that.

At 9/20/09 02:50 AM, UCanCallMeJesus wrote: I was extending my ubuntu partition and I got a error I lost all of my anime plus my setup. I have ubuntu all set up now.

Ahhh, that sucks, I backed all my files up before making the switch to Ubuntu. It is a great OS once you learn the ins-and-outs.

I've been watching Nadia and yes Disney did rip so much from this. Good show though, I did giggle at some of the sound effects too.