It sucks. The title of this episode is wrong, because you don't actually explain HOW he thought up NG, you just show him talking about it.
Why he is with you, I have no idea.
I think it's pretty bad when you have to write your characters' names on their shirts. Try to be a better writer/artist and that won't be necessary.
If you're going to do a one frame comic, it's got to be pretty funny. This wasn't the case.
I guess my biggest problem with your comic is that it required no talent, wit, skill, or even thought. You just threw something together that any mindless NGer could have in a minute or two.