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I've made this some time ago... No good idea for another music since then though. I'll work on that :P
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/497108

Making music isn't that easy for me. Actually it happens more often when I'm not thinking about it... For example, when I'm bored, start playing random things and a nice melody shows up. Or when I'm taking a shower...
Well, this is the first time I have the courage to show everyone one of my "tries to make music". That's because I'm never confident enough about my compositions... So I think this is a very important step for me. Hopefully I'll get better at it and one day, be able to create a "masterpiece".
I posted my first music here in Newgrounds 8 days ago. So, I just began wondering if there's something wrong with it. I'm new to these things, you know...

Hey People,it's me. It's the first time that im sending a mesage to the NG community,and the first thing that i would want to do is look for new persons. You know, meet them,have fun with them...
Don't matter,girl or boy,i like to be friend of all.
If you,NG users,want to meet me,be my friend,here is my e-mail:
skrwetch@hotmail.com
But,i'll say soon,i'm a litlle different from boys of my age.Some persons says that i'm weird,while others says that im cool,just because i like instrumental musics,like to study,to write histories of scientific fiction and see films of this genre.
I hope you like me anyway. Bye.