The Enchanted Cave 2
Delve into a strange cave with a seemingly endless supply of treasure, strategically choos
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COMPLETE edition of the interactive "choose next panel" comic
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At 12/7/09 06:06 PM, J-qb wrote:At 12/7/09 05:43 PM, SirBeretofClock wrote: Hey guys, someone I know left a critique!Wow, thank him for the review... I think hes the first one to actually review (almost) every single one of those pictures...
also: UPDATE THE SWF YOU!
I would if I ha- oh got it.
downloading it now, and I'll change BoMtoons' name.
Also I did thank the guy who did the review.
Hey guys, someone I know left a critique!
...I'm not telling you!
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Ok, i'm at home now so's I can watch it....get ready >:-)
J-QB: ...very hypnotic and drug trip like o.o
Colour use is nice, tone's are good and is nice to look at
CypressDahlia: Is...is she spanking hers...anyway, I think the lines are a bit, rough and sketchy on this one, in certain areas. Now, I know you've intentionally dne the colours the way you did but, because the legs are the same tone as the arms, I can't tell if she's not wearing any pants...and, parts of legs have been cut open heavily, due to the fact that the green around her is scarring in to the legs, or if she's wearing, some wierd lengeree type thing, because the green is also the same shade as the jacket.
Nosv3ratu: Aaah, very nice ;:A, i could see something like that being a campaign image for some sports wear company
Tomycooper: Very nice
Angelus-Mortis: Well well well! This one's awesome! If you focus on certain parts of the lighting and shadowing for too long, it looks a bit too thick but just burshing through the pic with your eyes makes it look very impressive.
Idiot-Monarch: Argh, too rough and faded for my likings.
Fishboy21:...compared to the others, it confuses me...nah, not good
M-Vero: Awesome, the line works practically perfect, and the shading is awesome.
Renaenae: Looks pretty profesional!
Lunsfryd:...Woah, that looks like something out of an art galler-hey It's Rabbi106 =D
Brainsss: Heh heh, nice.
The devangle: Meh, I think I'd like this mroe if not for the intentional squiggly lines put in. It's a very good drawing, but the lines ruin it...much prefferable if more time was put in to make it an actual person.
Occlued:...not nice.
Jkamovies: Nice, and well done, but too much empty space.
J-QB: =D
Stupendous! Looks profesional!
Rhunyc:...meh, i think it's a bit too...I don't know, just don't like this one. Can't say why.
Tiesit: Nice.
Sirberetofclock:Heh, I like the character design. Looks pretty good, but the background, anoys me.
I-dude:...meh.
Lunsfryd: Ho-ho! Nice picture!
Industrailindustrie:...looks, really cheap compared to the others <:/
Mikalius:...
M-Vero: =_=
Not sure what it is...but, the lines are kept nice and neat and the colour usage all fits together.
Sirberetoftheclock:Avatar much ?
Kernalphage: Meh, I would more would have liked it if it wasn't so distorted. Looked like it was pretty cool
AngelusMortus: Awesome.
Itsrecycled: Lol, that face is fantastic!
Turkeyonastick: Ok
Pahgawk: ...quite basic and plain
Legolass: Not liking the blue filteryness of it, but damn this looks good.
Killerkandykorn: Meh, lines are too all over the place for me to like.
Chaosprodigy: Excellent
Big johny-13: Oh for gods-
Prismaa: Very good.
Cables: SAKE!
Futuremode:...too faded, the lines are really rough and the colour mesh is offending me.
J-QB: ...
Lunsfryd: I preffered the crocodile one to be honest.
RE2DEEMER: Awesome design for a helmet
Zanroth: Meh.
Angelus-Mortis: Too scribly.
M-Vero: Nice picture
MCJesus: That jaw is way too big
Flashwarrior: Pretty good
Nunnet: Not nice to look at...
Big-Johny-13: Again, bad colour mesh and the lines are too scribly.
Breaktroll: Aww...he's smiling at me
Rhunyc: HELLBOI >=D...the rock fist, is too big though.
J-QB: Death star?
Renaenae: THAT'S AMAZING!!! Great shading, great colour choices, the linework is perfect, everything's just awesome!
Dankgoa:...meh, too plain. Everything looks good but there's too much empty space.
Noz3ratu: I don't apreciate how rezised this must have been >.>. Too squished together.
You lostthegame: Nice.
Occlued: Meh, looks too rough and scribbly, particularily around the tears.
Tiesit: Nice piece
Jakmovies: Lol nudity :3
Anway, the chest looks too inflated above the left...*snickers*
M-Vero: Nice picture
Flashwarrior: ...rage.
Pahgawk: Looks good, but in places the lines turn pretty sketchy.
J-QB: Flace is, dsitractingly flat.
Nosveratu: Good.
Thechomper: o.o
So far the best in a while
Tomy cooper:...NO SHADING?! AAARGH!
Occlued:...meh.
Zanroth: Very plain, no shading.
Renaenae: Incredible.
Lunsfryd:...Hmm...I think it beat the crocodile !
Angelus-Mortis: *runs the past the finish line* YES! YEEEEEEEEEEES!
Oh, and it's very good.
Well, all in all, I'd say the Majority of the collab, was very stunning and impressive. But, spoiled by the very poor images. Their are a definate few artists in here that amazed me with their pieces.
Yeah, so guys, I'll talk to you next weekend. See you.
At 9/29/09 10:19 AM, McJesus wrote:At 8/25/09 05:28 PM, SirBeretofClock wrote: oh then there's thisyou inspired me sort of
here it is anyway
:D
Wow! I'm really glad I stepped into this thread!
You've inspired me, man!
Sorry, forgot some fills etc.
Posting mine.
PORTABLE NETWORK GRAPHIC
And here's the shitty preview image!
At 11/1/09 11:32 PM, ReNaeNae wrote:At 11/1/09 06:00 PM, SirBeretofClock wrote: insert angry faceare you angry? :(
Less now, but I'm still kind of bitter. Whatever.
True. Alrighty , it's set then.
At 10/31/09 12:18 PM, ashman112 wrote: you left it for too long so i dont think your running it anymore. thats the way it goes i guess
I'm making the menu and setting the whole thing up, I have been for the past week or so. I even posted the menu from when I was halfway through. The only difference is that this time, I have some awesome people helping me make this take less time.
@Renaenae: I dunno really about the whole biography thing, but I AM going to have everyone's name in a list where you can click on a person, and that will take you to their page in the collab, with their info, and webpage.
Haha, holy fuckshit that's awesome!
Haha, these are great you guys!
I actually never expected this to take off, but would you look at it now!
@M-vero/J-qb/Renaenae: I was wondering if you could collect little bios from each participant, put it in a text document, and send it to me?
It'd be such a great help!
Okay guys, here's a sneak peek of the menu!
for sure, I'm actually making a kickass menu right now.
I had to restart it, as when I moved my computer, some files were lost.
But it's looking good. Also, I can compile it if you want.
Side note: Remember not to take shit.
Well you certainly did a good job of making a new thread! :D
Sorry to say, I was recently bugged down in a SHITLOAD of film work.
I CAN work on it now, and thanks to Raenaenae for reminding me.
Chance you guys could hit me up over msn or aim?
Okay, news update:
It will probably be a while until this is finished, as I am busy as a bee irl right now, so don't be disappointed about having to wait along time.
Just a heads up.
your animated one I took, but this one`s too small.
Okay guys! I`ll be taking entries until tomorrow! SO FINISH THEM
just make sure you take time on it!
Ok, we need a few more before the 31st.
Don't be afraid to make multiple pieces!
I might do something for this.
In the mean time, something old.
ok
oh then there's this
Come on guys! We're doing well so far!