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3 Forum Posts by "ShaggyJoe"

Response to: Voice acting needed for machinimas. Posted May 20th, 2012 in Collaboration

I sent you a PM, may be interested

Response to: Writers / Animators Needed Posted May 20th, 2012 in Collaboration

Im a pretty good writer, I might help you out, I would need some more info first and if you have a game plan though. PM me with info and I may just be onboard.

Response to: Help With My Hobby Posted May 20th, 2012 in Writing

Ok, I read it and it was pretty good! But, I do have some small suggestions for you, 1. You should try and use a few more descriptive words, or atleast more advanced, instead of saying that your character is "sad" you could use "It sickens me" or something similar to help make the story more immersive. 2. Go way more into detail then you already have, now don't get me worng you did good so far, but I believe it could use some extra punch to go with it.

All that aside, it was pretty good, but could use some work. Good luck with your new hobby though!